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[Pegasus Smith] The Escort

The Escort
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  • Johnsina21

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    I wanted to let you know that Pegasus Smith has just launched a new comic series. All the relevant details and updates about the comic will be shared in this thread.

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    Pages 01 to 15 with original text in english, FHD resolution (1080p) in a zip file and page 16 in FHD resolution (AI upscaled).

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    Not a fan of the narrative of this one, seems to be something that could be 100% avoidable without the need of sex, but well, it's a commission, it's a one shot, as long it's hot!
     
    I know it's a commission and one shot, so I will not blame Pegasus, but I think this comic have a big problem, the cause (encounter) and effect (sex) is poorly written and unrealistic even for porn standard, I like the whole "specialist at incest roleplay" thing tho! but if you ask me, I can think of 4 different ways that I would have preferred:

    A) Since Shane is shy and virgin, he should have used a fake name (or his friend name) and deliberately changed his tone to sound more mature or confident, because here she mentioned that "he sounded different" but felt so "somehow, Palpatine returned" that it's sad, that would have solved the "encounter" problem, making it more realistic...

    B) Shane's friend doesn't cancel, instead he's the one who hires escorts for Shane's birthday, two of them, then once the four of them encounter, Shane and his mom stay quiet to avoid an scandal, then they go to separate rooms and start hearing moans from the other escort, Shane and his mom decide to pretend to avoid suspicion but the whole situation turns them on and they fuck for real.

    C) Same as the actual plot, but Shane hires two escorts instead of one, with her competition in the same room, the mom have way more reasons to fuck her son to keep her job.

    D) Blackmail! Shane discovers at the beginning that his mother is an escort and hires her, this plot writes itself, more predictable than the actual plot, but also more logical.
     
    I personally hate this kind of plot/theme in incest stories (son or father meets his mother/daughter as prostitute) , no excitement at all , as every porn story that includes sex-workers (or however you want to call them). I mean, much respect and all...but paid sex it's just something not exciting for me. I think that "good wife and mom seduced" theme is way more exciting. Here only thing that could have worked was "blackmail" plot, but that's also "mehh". Yeah, i guess quick one made by commission, easy to forget.
     
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