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For those who wish, Emily will have her own spin-off.

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Another new series?
LMAO. They can barely handle all the publications that already exists.😂😆🤣
And they say that I'm the cruel one :ROFLMAO:

In any case, PK deserves praise for their work this week. The whole team managed to release four posts in a single week. And personally, I think it's a remarkable effort from everyone, regardless of whether we like some of the posts or not. 👏👏👏
 
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O que vocês acharam desta jogada?
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Good job 👏 👏... We'll see what happens next with Emily's spin-off, but in any case, this bodes well for adventures that I hope will be out of the "ordinary".

Give this character depth, something that makes her unique throughout her adventures. Just like Cynthia, the model with a troubled relationship with her father, Brandie who becomes a veterinarian, or Sonia who now runs the family farm.

In short, a "backbone" that provides depth from which all her future stories will flow, and not just another insignificant housewife.

And don't neglect the secondary characters, like Johnson or Juka... who of course contribute to enriching their respective series.

Anyway, it's just my personnal opinion.
 
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Juanito Brown has released a preview for the new episode, The Grandma - Part 35.
We expect it to be published tomorrow.
The main thing is that Juanito Brown's internet connection is stable. ;)

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At first, I found this series amusing because there were so many characters... Vilma, Achilles, Agatha, etc. They have almost all disappeared.

Actually, I get the impression that it's improvised with each set; there's no continuous narrative. Each set is independent of the others, which doesn't give me what I'm personally looking for... a structured storyline.

One time Vilma is disabled, another time she wants to adopt a dog and then it disappears, and it's the same every time, no narrative structure whatsoever.

:unsure::unsure::unsure:
 
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At first, I found this series amusing because there were so many characters... Vilma, Achilles, Agatha, etc. They have almost all disappeared.

Actually, I get the impression that it's improvised with each set; there's no continuous narrative. Each set is independent of the others, which doesn't give me what I'm personally looking for... a structured storyline.
Ah ok, I thought you just didn't like the fact that the preview images had been shared.

I agree. It has been so long since The Grandma story was given any attention that it seems to have lost its plot. I know it started off as Vilma basically being the same as Nancy, but after she left town to have sex, it became very disjointed in its plot. I don't see why Vilma couldn't have continued to be a slut in town. It would have been a good excuse for her to have sex with the other male characters like Charles or Thomas.
 
Ah ok, I thought you just didn't like the fact that the preview images had been shared.

I agree. It has been so long since The Grandma story was given any attention that it seems to have lost its plot. I know it started off as Vilma basically being the same as Nancy, but after she left town to have sex, it became very disjointed in its plot. I don't see why Vilma couldn't have continued to be a slut in town. It would have been a good excuse for her to have sex with the other male characters like Charles or Thomas.
No, it's completely unrelated. Of course, sharing teasers contributes to promotion, and that's a good thing. This is really just my personal opinion, about a story that makes absolutely no sense.
 
Dear friends,

Specifically regarding the series The Grandma...

I know it seems disconnected, but try to understand...

It's been on hold for a while, and I'm returning to the old stories; Grandma is a clear example of that.

That said, I carefully gather information from here about the series being produced, combining it with what I have and applying it in the best way to The Grandma.

Did she think about the dog on the trip?
Did she become the town's vixen?

Will she now become a mentor to young vixens?

Let's wait and see, but tell me... what would you like to see?
 
Dear friends,

Specifically regarding the series The Grandma...

I know it seems disconnected, but try to understand...

It's been on hold for a while, and I'm returning to the old stories; Grandma is a clear example of that.

That said, I carefully gather information from here about the series being produced, combining it with what I have and applying it in the best way to The Grandma.

Did she think about the dog on the trip?
Did she become the town's vixen?

Will she now become a mentor to young vixens?

Let's wait and see, but tell me... what would you like to see?

Thanks again for your interest in our forum and for any suggestions some of us might have regarding the posts you're responsible for.

I am very aware that it is not easy to find original ideas for each publication.

While I'd like to make suggestions, they'd be for series I'm familiar with. This one, in particular, isn't one of them, and I'd only end up saying silly things, risking the wrath of Grandma's fans. 😅 😅 😅
 
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Dear friends,

Specifically regarding the series The Grandma...

I know it seems disconnected, but try to understand...

It's been on hold for a while, and I'm returning to the old stories; Grandma is a clear example of that.

That said, I carefully gather information from here about the series being produced, combining it with what I have and applying it in the best way to The Grandma.

Did she think about the dog on the trip?
Did she become the town's vixen?

Will she now become a mentor to young vixens?

Let's wait and see, but tell me... what would you like to see?
Unfortunately, I'm a terrible screenwriter. To write a script, you need to keep Grandma's entire story in mind and have a good imagination.
Perhaps there are members on the forum who combine these qualities.
That would be very interesting.
 
Dear friends,

Specifically regarding the series The Grandma...

I know it seems disconnected, but try to understand...

It's been on hold for a while, and I'm returning to the old stories; Grandma is a clear example of that.

That said, I carefully gather information from here about the series being produced, combining it with what I have and applying it in the best way to The Grandma.

Did she think about the dog on the trip?
Did she become the town's vixen?

Will she now become a mentor to young vixens?

Let's wait and see, but tell me... what would you like to see?

I just want to know if Agatha is coming back
 
Good news!

Juanito Brown has replaced Juan with Foster Mother in his production line.
It will be very interesting to see his collaboration with CrazyDad.

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Good news!

Juanito Brown has replaced Juan with Foster Mother in his production line.
It will be very interesting to see his collaboration with CrazyDad.

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Really ? I was convinced JB had taken over FM on his own... I hope he'll continue what he started. I think FM has every chance of becoming a good competitor to LF. The farm environment could also allow it to capitalize on diversity and exoticism.
 
Really ? I was convinced JB had taken over FM on his own... I hope he'll continue what he started. I think FM has every chance of becoming a good competitor to LF. The farm environment could also allow it to capitalize on diversity and exoticism.
Nothing is permanent, everything can change at any moment...
We are just outside observers...
Juanito Brown has adjusted his production schedule.
The release order of the final two episodes has been changed.

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Dear friends,

Specifically regarding the series The Grandma...

I know it seems disconnected, but try to understand...

It's been on hold for a while, and I'm returning to the old stories; Grandma is a clear example of that.

That said, I carefully gather information from here about the series being produced, combining it with what I have and applying it in the best way to The Grandma.

Did she think about the dog on the trip?
Did she become the town's vixen?

Will she now become a mentor to young vixens?

Let's wait and see, but tell me... what would you like to see?
I believe that when continuing a specific topic it is essential to develop a consistent sequence. When a character becomes involved in a certain situation or theme it should unfold over at least three chapters or more so the topic can be fully explored until saturation with everything clearly and properly developed. This satisfies the reader and prepares the ground for new stories as Teddy usually does.
Creating random chapters without narrative continuity and then cutting the scene with no follow up is frustrating. It breaks the rhythm causes the story to lose focus and makes the narrative confusing and meaningless. I myself stopped following some characters because of this. They become tedious and no longer have anything new to offer in terms of story.
An approach similar to Doctor Brandie by introducing a new theme could give certain characters new momentum and renew audience interest.
Another negative point is the recurring drawing bug that leaves the characters deformed. This has been happening too often and instead of feeling occasional it has become routine harming the overall visual quality of the work.
 

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