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I'm calling it now. How much you guys wanna bet that the final panel of this chapter is a fake out? I'm damn sure that the third panel in the next chapter will be Isabella, fully clothed, feeding the dogs or praying. That's why Father Elijah will have reacted with such surprise at the end of this chapter. It's not a "GOD?!?!" in the "God?!?! I can't believe Isabella is fucking a bunch of dogs!!!" but a "God?!?! I can't believe it! Isabella isn't doing anything wrong! She's just feeding the animals/praying to the Lord!"
The great controversy, as I see it, is the direction the story is going to take. One thing is Nun Isabella, who took a vow of chastity, sleeping with the priest in a hypothetical scenario; another thing is the priest having a heart attack, falling off the roof and dying, while the nun takes over the parish administration and opens a kennel.
The main problem with the work is the narrative which, let's face well, is not easy to fit in without losing the dynamics of this type of plot. In my opinion, Nun Isabella needs to keep her true orientation and desires in focus, without getting sidetracked by nonsense subplots.

Furthermore, regarding her sexual preference, it would be much better for the story if the priest left the scene for good. This would pave the way for interactions and encounters between them to branch out into much more interesting possibilities. The way it is now, it gets way too stuck on this repetitive dynamic with the priest; it is well past time for him to exit the stage so the content can evolve.
 
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