Wargarurumon
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Will post it on saturday
yes it is shorter 80 pages and difference from long stories only 2$Does anyone have the new book. Think this may be one of the rare ones I ask for not all I jump and buy every new book but this one is not really giving me that feeling but I do want to read it
My first crack at 'emHere ya go
The story also didn't really have much of a hook to set it apart. A delinquent boy is turned into a female by his family; not exactly breaking new ground there. There also seemed to be some missing parts in certain chapters to explain things. It left a lot to be desired in terms of a complete story. That ending is a setup for a more interesting story rather than the resolution of the one presented.I've been a JSP ride or die since day one but this is my breaking point. Used to tolerate his childish low-res 1960's comic book drawings because the writing was good. But last couple years for the most part his stories have had terrible pacing and what feels like a highly truncated plot. I mean he's never been great at wrapping up a story. But lately most of his third acts and endings have been, to use the literary term, total dogshit.
I will still support other authors featured on the site but I'm done with JSP until he shows he can write more than half of a story. His recent work feels lazy, phoned in, and in desperate need of an editor or workshop.
IT was rushed ... Towards the end it just went snap and it was over... He has a tendency to do that lately with his books where he struggles to close and just speed runs to an ending and misses alot of plot.The story also didn't really have much of a hook to set it apart. A delinquent boy is turned into a female by his family; not exactly breaking new ground there. There also seemed to be some missing parts in certain chapters to explain things. It left a lot to be desired in terms of a complete story. That ending is a setup for a more interesting story rather than the resolution of the one presented.
His deviantart page or TGcomics forumsIs there a medium where we could send suggestions to jsp? I think there is a consensus about the missing part/plot which is gradual transformation... especially long stories like this should include them it is the whole point of the story
I agree with your viewpoint. JSP seems to have lost its creative inspiration and talent. Can you recommend some excellent novel/comic creators? To be honest, in recent years, I have rarely seen any novel art works that can depict in detail the physiological and psychological changes of the feminization process (including hypnosis and drug intervention).Yes, this man never ceases to amaze me that it is possible to make books worse and worse. First he describes the color and smell of the buttons on each police uniform on a page, then everything breaks off on one page. I had the feeling that I was reading a preview version when I saw that the window slider was approaching the end, and the story was far from over. And only a few images. And again, no hint of eroticism or sex, of acceptance, of a happy new personality after acceptance. Again, some kind of half-magic, half-hypnosis. And for this 10 euros?
I agree with your viewpoint. JSP seems to have lost its creative inspiration and talent. Can you recommend some excellent novel/comic creators? To be honest, in recent years, I have rarely seen any novel art works that can depict in detail the physiological and psychological changes of the feminization process (including hypnosis and drug intervention).I thought this was a rare misfire on Joe’s part.
Until page 70 of 80 there is barely any transformation or process. The main character still looks like a boy who wears girl clothes. Then poof, the hypnosis takes hold and the final 10 pages, it’s a girl.
To be honest, in recent years, I have rarely seen any novel art works that can depict in detail the physiological and psychological changes of the feminization process (including hypnosis and drug intervention).
Melissa N has some good ones.I agree with your viewpoint. JSP seems to have lost its creative inspiration and talent. Can you recommend some excellent novel/comic creators? To be honest, in recent years, I have rarely seen any novel art works that can depict in detail the physiological and psychological changes of the feminization process (including hypnosis and drug intervention).
To be honest, I have already read most of Melissa N's works. After all, he is currently one of the most famous creators, and I even think that at least now he has a much stronger grasp of the story than JSP. Who is Damien Foxx? I don't think I've seen his works before. Is there any other author I can recommend? thank you. I really love works that use hypnosis and drugs (including hormones) to gradually feminize people. Oh, by the way, I can also recommend laristopa to you. He is also a good novelist.Melissa N has some good ones.
Damien Foxx
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I write this exactly ;3I agree with your viewpoint. JSP seems to have lost its creative inspiration and talent. Can you recommend some excellent novel/comic creators? To be honest, in recent years, I have rarely seen any novel art works that can depict in detail the physiological and psychological changes of the feminization process (including hypnosis and drug intervention).
Dear Lara Lynn, I have indeed read your works and to be honest, your works on the theme of "sissification" are very good. But what we are pursuing is not the traditional sissfication type of article. I have found that such articles have been bound by a series of "classic formulas", such as being overly obsessed with depicting the humiliation of MC and the so-called "sissy pornography plot", while ignoring the truly important part - the plot, which includes the psychological and physiological changes of MC. (This is not to say that you haven't described this type of content, but that there is already too little description of this type of content, which people who pursue feminization type works don't like.)I write this exactly ;3
I'll vouch for Fraylim High Tops to High Heel. It's a effing great story. Best one ever.I agree with your viewpoint. JSP seems to have lost its creative inspiration and talent. Can you recommend some excellent novel/comic creators? To be honest, in recent years, I have rarely seen any novel art works that can depict in detail the physiological and psychological changes of the feminization process (including hypnosis and drug intervention).
Can you explain some specific works? For example, the works that rank in the top 10-15 in your mind, those epic works that use drugs and hypnosis to gradually feminization MC, are really fascinating. By the way, I have already read all of Melissa N's works. Thank you.I'll vouch for Fraylim High Tops to High Heel. It's a effing great story. Best one ever.
Ladyship by Keshara is another great story....
Melissa N has some good works. So is BarrosBr. CBlack have been consistently been good. Cassie Rose Watson... etc
www.laristopa.com
I just realized that 'High Tops to High Heel' is also a work I have read. It is indeed an epic story, and the description of MC's gradual feminization of physiological and psychological changes is the best. One of the few shortcomings of this story is that MC was deceived too thoroughly by the female protagonist, making her appear slightly lacking in intelligence (which is also why I like to add hypnosis elements appropriately in the story. In my eyes, hypnosis is a tool to promote the protagonist's mental changes. Of course, it does not play a decisive role, but it is an indispensable auxiliary tool and makes the story look more reasonable).I'll vouch for Fraylim High Tops to High Heel. It's a effing great story. Best one ever.
Ladyship by Keshara is another great story....
Melissa N has some good works. So is BarrosBr. CBlack have been consistently been good. Cassie Rose Watson... etc