Hadn't considered that! I will do that for future chapters. Appreciate the feedback!Nice story, dialog seems to flow and explains the situation. The fantasy/dream shots work well into the mix. All in all, very good with room to develop the characters. Only complaint is your image numbering is repeated, negating the batch download feature. Change your file naming convention to something that indicate chapters/issues and then page numbers. Whatever you choose, stick with it so that your fans won't have to rename your files.
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Great set-up! I really hope we get to play "the song" for little sis too...Repost Ch 1-3 with better file names per suggestion above. remove if not allowed.
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I'd imagine that's in the futureGreat set-up! I really hope we get to play "the song" for little sis too...

There are a ton of wishfulfillment elements in your comic that hit me exactly where I live. I particularly appreciate the aspect of how the more subtle influence of the song persists in their normal life, even though the mom kind of "forgets" the explicit details of her total "enthrallment" under the direct influence of the song. I love how this could help the MC normalize his new "closeness" with his mom - "Nah, we're just a very touchy-feely family, you know?"As I've been putting this together I realize that some of what I have is redundant. It started as a project in character creation loosely based on this story I wrote a few years ago. I hope you still enjoy. This is a project I want to continue to play with. Suggestions welcome. I'm still learning and getting the AI generator that I like to properly capture what is in my head is proving to be a real bitch!
Ch 9
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I've never really gravitated to the relationships that turn domineering or has one of the characters a victim. Maybe I'm a touchy feely kind of writer. I get more joy out of a loving relationship than one that has characters treating each other like crap.There are a ton of wishfulfillment elements in your comic that hit me exactly where I live. I particularly appreciate the aspect of how the more subtle influence of the song persists in their normal life, even though the mom kind of "forgets" the explicit details of her total "enthrallment" under the direct influence of the song. I love how this could help the MC normalize his new "closeness" with his mom - "Nah, we're just a very touchy-feely family, you know?", and especially how this opens the door for all kinds of less explicit intimacy - basically the perfect girlfriend dream, being able to touch her and be close to her whenever you want, without it being "weird". To her or you, anyway. In a lot of ways I feel reminded of a mind-control comic series called "The Ring Cycle", that is quite hot. However, I way prefer your story because of how generally caring you keep the relationship between your characters. The mom or sister do not appear to be promiscuous sluts in general - at least I hope so - and the whole family seems to have a fairly positive, caring relationship with each other. My hope is that if you continue the story you keep it that way, and even add in an element of personal loyalty on the part of the girls, a kind of "you're the best son/man/brother I could ever ask for, I'm not interested in anybody else/ we are completely happy with just you, but you should bring home any new girl you like, anything to make you happy!" Maybe I'm reading too much into these few chapters, and perhaps you disagree, but I've been dying for somebody to make some hot content like this with a good-girl-who'll-be-a-bad-girl-JUST-for-ME basis. It's the male equivalent of the bad-boy-who'll-be-a-good-guy-just-for-me female core fantasy, but almost nobody makes content of that kind anymore, at least not for men. In a lot of ways, Hugh Heffner was probably the last proponent of something like that. Anyway, great work, so far, stay awesome! "We shall be following your progress with great interest, young man!"
Fully agreed. You said it perfectly (and with a lot fewer words than I usedI've never really gravitated to the relationships that turn domineering or has one of the characters a victim. Maybe I'm a touchy feely kind of writer. I get more joy out of a loving relationship than one that has characters treating each other like crap.
REALLY like where things are going with little sis!Ch 10 - hope you enjoy. Tell me what you like or dislike about it so far. looking for constructive feedback. Thanks!
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Hard to say exactly where this is going. The original story kind of left the rails for me for a bit and became a bit unrealistic...not that any of this is realistic but you know what I mean. I have a few more chapters written and as I get ideas I start to do the image gen. I'm a bit stuck because the reaction to the first listen is a variation of the same so it is a lot of single character stuff. That will change as it moves forward but I haven't figured out the way I want that to happen just yet. I'm sure it will come to me eventually. In the meantime, thank you for the suggestions and reading along.REALLY like where things are going with little sis!I'm kind of hoping that in her "un-sung" state
she'll become her big brother's greatest cheerleader because unconsciously she's in love with him. But she can't directly acknowledge it consciously. So she ends up dismissing any other guy who tries to catch her eye and just spends her time trying to hang out more with her brother - on the couch, sneaking into his bed to wrestle, or cuddle, stealing his shirts, etc. - and also hyping him up to her friends. Uhm...could sis have a PJ-party with her dance club friends, or cheerleaders, or whatever and decide to play them all The Song?
Ofc, big brother would have to play the babysitter for the party.
(Btw, all these ideas are merely suggestions, not expectations or anything. I'm just happy to see what happens next!
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Couple more ideas: MC plays the song for a female study budy / childhood friend / cool teacher / school-beauty-ice-queen / sexy-MILF-neighbor.
Couple of questions:
I was surprised you introduced the dad even just in an offhand mention. Feels like a dad hanging around/living in the same house, one who the mom is still sexually active with, would easily get in the way of what's already going on now?
Do you think we'll ever see mom & sis serenading the MC's dick together? I'm not really expecting it, given how difficult that still seems to be for AI, but hope dies last, ofc.![]()