doccop65
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I've read the chapters up to Training Day. Haven't gotten around to the others yet. I've scanned the others but haven't done a thorough read yet. Sorry and I don't want to spoil anything for anyone else.
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[ST-9pol] Original, & Fan Graphic Novels
ST-9pol
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Then you have read far enough to get the reference....
ST-9pol
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I am no "writer" in the conventional sense and my technique is very unorthodox... But I am always happy to discuss as feedback from fans or critics (with constructive suggestions) helps me learn and hone my skills... Happy if I have been able to assist you as well..
doccop65
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doccop65
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Thanks but tbh, for someone who isn't a "writer" per se, your stories are quite good. They're coherent with just enough side elements to make the overall GN intriguing as hell. From what I've seen your stuff stacks up as good or better than some of the current VNs out there.
Just one other thing. I wanted to know if making grammatical corrections in the attached texts change anything in the rendered text boxes? I know that I said that I haven't had much time lately but I could make changes in the scripts then send them back to you, if you'd like like.
Just one other thing. I wanted to know if making grammatical corrections in the attached texts change anything in the rendered text boxes? I know that I said that I haven't had much time lately but I could make changes in the scripts then send them back to you, if you'd like like.
ST-9pol
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Thanks, that is very high praise...Thanks but tbh, for someone who isn't a "writer" per se, your stories are quite good. They're coherent with just enough side elements to make the overall GN intriguing as hell. From what I've seen your stuff stacks up as good or better than some of the current VNs out there.
Just one other thing. I wanted to know if making grammatical corrections in the attached texts change anything in the rendered text boxes? I know that I said that I haven't had much time lately but I could make changes in the scripts then send them back to you, if you'd like like.
The base writing I do is all done in MS word and the text is (To the best of my knowledge, time, ability etc etc) corrected in this software and then copied over to graphic design software for compositing into the pages along with the renders... The Text can be amended in the software but would require reformatting... It's a lengthy and not favorite part of the process for me...
doccop65
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If that's the case then I'll leave well enough alone. I can comprehend what you're saying so that's good enough.Thanks, that is very high praise...
The base writing I do is all done in MS word and the text is (To the best of my knowledge, time, ability etc etc) corrected in this software and then copied over to graphic design software for compositing into the pages along with the renders... The Text can be amended in the software but would require reformatting... It's a lengthy and not favorite part of the process for me...
ST-9pol
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Has been sometime since I have updated the character directory of the GN (Last copy v2.0 was current only to Ch5.2) and for my own reference, and that of the readers it was time to bring it up to date. As this is a more a reference guide, I have decided to share it with you all and not just my paid supporters...
Current count of active characters is 68 with 14 being game related, and two characters written out. Hope this helps as a reference if you hear a name and can quite remember who they are, this is your resource to look it up.. Thanks all for reading along, and if you can spare a few $ support at Subscribestar or one-off tips at Ko-Fi are always greatly appreciated...
Current count of active characters is 68 with 14 being game related, and two characters written out. Hope this helps as a reference if you hear a name and can quite remember who they are, this is your resource to look it up.. Thanks all for reading along, and if you can spare a few $ support at Subscribestar or one-off tips at Ko-Fi are always greatly appreciated...
shemaleNL
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Strange development with Raptor.
ST-9pol
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Strange in what way?
I suppose the question I would have to ask of you is have you read all the previous chapters?
shemaleNL
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More or less. That will be the prob then.
ST-9pol
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Good chance yes... Jumping into the chapters now without reading the prior ones is going to leave plot holes and call backs to previous events that will make no sense to you... If I can refer you to page 38 of Ch5.4.1, and the earlier page it refers to Ch3 page 76, it will give you a bit of background... Raptor has always been hinted as having a darker side, and in these pages, (Ch5.4.1 pg177-180) it did come as a surprise to Raven that she not only threatened Sophia's Life, but her own as well and is taken seriously by her.. A further hint that her disappearance from the Firm was not just to allow her to go through hormone treatment, was not just about a gender change, it was also a total change of identity necessary to protect her, and her family from something, someone, or something else... Thanks for reaching out..
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