[ST-9pol] Original, & Fan Graphic Novels
KINGPIN 2
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Why is it necessary to create such a senseless chaos comic, the audience does not understand where the beginning is and where the end is? If there is a story, it should revolve around a couple of main characters. So many characters remain unclear and undisclosed, because you don't know who to be happy for or who to worry about. I'm a fan of Sophie Parker and I think her story is stuck behind somewhere, but I really wish her character's story would continue, rather than so many unnecessary and recognizable characters.
budley
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I don't know about the audience in general, but I like it.
ST-9pol
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In answer to your question this is not a story about Sophia Parker, she just happens to be part of it. There are 80-90+ characters in this GN, and only 12 are game based..
Your comment about the chaos and where is the beginning and where is the end is exactly the point of how I enjoy writing.. I like to challenge readers to think where the story will be going, and then flip the script on them.. In the game the Dev has laid out the entire story for the next 10-20 years, and when I started this GN 6 years ago, I set out to do the exact opposite of what he/she/they do.. If you are only after Sophia content, then my work is not going to be something you will like. Thanks for reaching out.
doccop65
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Hey, my Friend!
It seems apparent that Some people out there have parachuted into the middle of the AWAM saga, meaning their interests started either in a fan game or at the middle of the original game. I would suggest to anyone here to DL Parts 1 & 2 of A Wife And Mother (now changed to Sophia Parker, Hidden Desires) game to get an understanding of your version of events. I contend that, if they think that your stories are chaotic, then they'd Really be confused if they delved into the 'Good Wife, Best Mother' comic series by SVS Comics (and Whoever decided to re-script Pixil's "Morning After" KN). The new writer for that comic/KN has completely changed what Pixil had scripted for that particular story. There's use of verbiage in the dialogs that are totally different for characters who are supposed to be based in a fictional United States. For instance the male character, in talking to his mother about his sister, refers to her as 'sissy'....totally inaccurate. Most people in the US refers to their sister as 'sis' as the word 'sissy' has a very Different connotation and meaning in Americanized English. And if you Know that, reading it would irritate you greatly.
I'm not trying to rain on the other comic or author but it serves as an example of 'creative interpretation' of certain stories, events and scenes. My biggest disappointment is that you and a number of other dev/writer/artists have had to totally change your comics/games because of heat from the paysites. Scenes that were laid out for plotline buildups are now floating out in a backup data file or floating in the ether of the creators' minds. As far as the stories go though, I say that, unless a story is bad, it would be best to just enjoy the story being told on it's own merits And, if they're going to be unhappy about it, simply leave it alone.
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ST-9pol
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Thanks for the feedback, I make a very story driven GN that is probably not for everyone, especially if their interest is for the characters having sex on every single page.. I call what I do :The thinking mans porn.. as what I write is not a porn story, it is a story that just happens to contain porn.. Thanks for reaching out.
ST-9pol
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As mentioned in post: #735
I am pausing the Chapter 5.5 posts here as I complete this chapter and post to paid supporters, but in the interim as I mentioned in the above post I will post here the first of the new "Pulp" stories as a fill in, and also a backstory not told previously.. This story occurs the day before the current chapter, and tells the story of "A (not so) Chance Meeting" This mini arc story is important to my Graphic Novel moving forward, and all will become clear as you read along..
RDS Studio-Pulp01 - A (not so) Chance Meeting pages 1-10
I am pausing the Chapter 5.5 posts here as I complete this chapter and post to paid supporters, but in the interim as I mentioned in the above post I will post here the first of the new "Pulp" stories as a fill in, and also a backstory not told previously.. This story occurs the day before the current chapter, and tells the story of "A (not so) Chance Meeting" This mini arc story is important to my Graphic Novel moving forward, and all will become clear as you read along..
RDS Studio-Pulp01 - A (not so) Chance Meeting pages 1-10
bab1350
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many thanks . i love your work pleas pleas post new pages of Chapter5.5 again
ST-9pol
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Hi and thanks for reaching out.. I release on a delay the pages from the paid side to the forums and eventually Chapter 5.5 will be released in its entirety.. This story is a side arc story that normally would only be available to paid subscribers, but in this instance the story is integral to the main story so for continuity I am releasing for readers. The pulp series of stories moving forward will be subscriber only releases unless they are part of the main stories timeline. Thanks again..