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[Tal3s of Debauchery] A Mothers Shame

Hi,
my little christmas themed story "A Naughty Office Jingle" is now complete (80 Pages) on subscribestar and fanbox.

Making the most of his gift from her... (Sneak Peek of Page 64)

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Aaaaaand here are now the next 20 Pages of A Mothers Shame Chapter one. A misunderstanding leads to Isabella having a spontaneous idea...


Enjoy! :)

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Hi guys,
here is a bigger update consisting of 22 Pages to complete the first chapter of A Mothers Shame on here. Where we finally find out whats the deal between Isabella and her boss is all about, which is laying the groundwork for chapter 2.


Enjoy! :)


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okay its a beginn of......... we will see... but nice ...
With the somehow akward first getting to know each other out of the way, chapter two will consists of deepening that bond (in more than one way) while Dylan keeps ups his teasing advances towards Isabella. I“m really happy how the recent renders for chapter 2 turned out and I think they are a big step up to the first chapter, but you can make up your own mind next week when the first pages of chapter 2 will drop here ;)
 
Hi guys,
here is the cover and the first 21 Pages of the second chapter of A Mothers Shame. The beginning of a trip which will bring Isabella and Dylan real close to each other...


Enjoy! :)


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I really feel like I missed out when Dylan changed his mind, now he is truly committed to seeing Isabella as his woman, not a complaint, sometimes the characters in other comics doubt just too much.
 
I really feel like I missed out when Dylan changed his mind, now he is truly committed to seeing Isabella as his woman, not a complaint, sometimes the characters in other comics doubt just too much.
Hey,
yeah such a development is always rather hard to depict believable. But yeah I increased his resolve regarding the advancements towards Isabella quite noticably in chapter 2, since the feedback from the subscribers was that they wanna see sexy scenes faster. The "click" within Dylan happened when he saw Isabella cry in the night and had vivid dreams of her afterwards and after hearing that she wanted to go on a trip with him, he really wanted to make this time on the trip count.
 
Hi guys,
here are the next 21 pages of A Mothers Shame chapter 2 where Isabella and Dylan get dressed to have a fun evening at the bar...


Enjoy!


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Wonder if Dylan will ever call Isabella "mom", he has been pretty reluctant to mention or think about it except for that small part during his dream, it's clear he doesn't see her as his mom but I think acknowledging it during a sex scene may spice thing up, he probably doesn't bring it up a lot because he doesn't want Isabella to think of him just as her son but I think they should mention it more often later because there's this thing called "Genetic Attraction" that would be a good explanation for their feelings.
 
Yes, have to agree with poster above. Right now they doesn't even feel like mom and son, but more of a regular dates.
 
Wonder if Dylan will ever call Isabella "mom", he has been pretty reluctant to mention or think about it except for that small part during his dream, it's clear he doesn't see her as his mom but I think acknowledging it during a sex scene may spice thing up, he probably doesn't bring it up a lot because he doesn't want Isabella to think of him just as her son but I think they should mention it more often later because there's this thing called "Genetic Attraction" that would be a good explanation for their feelings.
Yes, have to agree with poster above. Right now they doesn't even feel like mom and son, but more of a regular dates.
Hey,
first of to make it clear. Yes, he will call her mom and at some point it will happen more regularly and yes there is a concious choice to it, why he doesn“t do it as of now. I don“t want to spoil anything, so I just want to tell you that this will play an integral part in the story and their interactions, starting somewhere in this chapter.... And while I get that this currently leads to the feeling like there is missing something, I hope that when the time comes the impact of the effect which it has on the charackters will also convey to you guys and it will then cause a bigger gratification.

I swear it“s like you guys are bunch of detectives with how much you analyse the story and think about the reasons for it. Really cool to see that the work and thoughts I also invested in the story and relationship between the two of them gets seen.
 
Hey,
first of to make it clear. Yes, he will call her mom and at some point it will happen more regularly and yes there is a concious choice to it, why he doesn“t do it as of now. I don“t want to spoil anything, so I just want to tell you that this will play an integral part in the story and their interactions, starting somewhere in this chapter.... And while I get that this currently leads to the feeling like there is missing something, I hope that when the time comes the impact of the effect which it has on the charackters will also convey to you guys and it will then cause a bigger gratification.

I swear it“s like you guys are bunch of detectives with how much you analyse the story and think about the reasons for it. Really cool to see that the work and thoughts I also invested in the story and relationship between the two of them gets seen.
Maybe the size of his penis will be normal big just like the amount of cum. It will make everhting erotic and believable.
 
Maybe the size of his penis will be normal big just like the amount of cum. It will make everhting erotic and believable.
Well, Dylan certainly isn“t small and would be considered very well endowed in the real world but I hope that his tool still could be seen as realistic. The contrast between his not huge bodyframe but pretty big cock was again a concious choice which already plays part in a published scene (currently only on ss and fb) in chapter 2. So yeah, I could see the argument that his cock is a bit too big. I hope it still comes across as very big but still believeable. Since ,which may sound a bit weird now, but I modeled it after a real one with the shape and size.

In general I prefer the more realistic depiction of private parts as well as the amount of cum, so yeah I hope that the sex scenes will come across as believable.
 

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