I'm glad i could be of service
yes yes, i understood that. i just said it because i've seen a lot of other artists do the same thing and it always feels like a thoroughly wasted opportunity to me, cos most of them spend so much time and efforts to set the stage for the scenes, but then end up shortening those scenes really really quickly. but i'm really glad to hear you're gonna do the long, detailed scenes from here on. can't wait to see what you come up with
lol yeah, but i think they don't want just the sex scenes, they want to be teased a bit and excited as well. foreplay matters a lot as well, and i don't mean the cunnilingus scenes, bjs, tjs, fjs. you already do this to an extent, something i don't think i've ever seen other artists do it much, the kissing on the neck/back, removing her clothes slowly (ch3pg103,104,114,115,124) those were really hot. i was suggesting to add a few more pages in these sort of situations. a lot of dialogues in other scenarios isn't an issue at all. it's necessary in those situations, using more pages in those situations will just be a waste. but in the sex scenes, that's where it kinda takes the attention away a tiny bit from the main stuff. so for example in ch3pg114 & 115, if you had added like 2-3 more pages between them where dylan slowly undressed her as he was kissing her all over her back and neck, i feel that would've made the scene a bit hotter. i mean it's not really necessary, because what followed was one of the hottest scenes (barring the condom, which i understand why it was there) i've seen. but i would've loved for that scene to be another 10-12 pages longer, like i said, can't get enough of them, you've made amazing charaters and given them a great back story as well.
amazing. glad to hear that
so the main reason i suggested those 2 ideas were 1, to ensure the subs had more reasons to resub again and again even with all the free stuff you provided. 2, AVNs probably are the most lucrative means of income for adult content creators. and it's for the AVNs that i suggested using AI to add some animations because that's what the players look for the most. and i suggested AI be it would be the least time consuming. and in regards with the AVN, if you would have me, i would be more than willing to help you make it. mainly with the dialogue writing and stuff, you will however need a coder, but i don't think that should be much of a problem, because there's a lot of good coders who can be found on f95 or patreon.
and coming back to the AI animations,
check these out, i feel the one from nandof's comic was absolutely amazing. if done using the usual engines it would take a few weeks if not months, but with AI you just need to get used to writing the prompts perfectly and that might take some trial and error. but once you get that nailed down, animating the pages won't be tough at all, you will definitely need to spend a bit, but i'm sure the income you'd get from it would be far greater than you would spend.
I emphasize on the AVNs, because, in recent times there have been a lot of devs that have started games, but then stopped because they didn't receive a lot of support. but the good thing for you is, you don't need to create a lot more, just use the textless versions of what you already have, and more importantly, theres a huge gap in the incest category since most of the regular and established devs haven't posted much in recent times. so there is a demand there, and your story is unique as well. so with a little effort you can capitalize on it and probably, easily double or maybe even triple your income. most of the top AVNs get leaked pretty much as soon as they are released, but go through f95 and take a look at the number of subscribers of those devs. most of them don't post stuff for months on end, and they easily earn a few 1000$ a month. and that number is just of the mid-lower mid tier devs. the top guys earn 10k or so per month, and put out updates only every 3-4 months. there is a special example as well, ICSTOR, this guy has posted maybe one update in the last 2-3 years. but his income has been in the 15k-40k range over this period. people are still subbed to him even though he hasn't uupdated his patreon page in a year.
you will need to a few extra renders here and there, especially in those sex scenes. and if you can add the AI animations, or animations of just any kind, that would be even more amazing. but yeah, animations = more subs.
if your intention is to get to a stage where you can do this full time AND get to the stage of financial freedom, then AVN is the way to go. i don't mean stop the comics and focus on AVNs alone, i suggest do both. just hire some help. so that it doesn't become a huge burden on you.
and like i said before, i can help you with the AVN creation. the story is already pretty far ahead, so if you started an AVN now, the only thing i would need from you is maybe another 100 or at the most 200 renders in total, to add in some of the scenes here and there. and i think there's enough content for about a years worth of updates already. and i'm talking on the basis of the free stuff i've got. so you can spend most of your time concentrating on the comics until the AVN catches up to you, if it does that is. apart from those extra renders, you'll just need to hire a coder to put together the updates once everthing is ready. and that's pretty much all you'll have to do. ofcourse i would ask for a % if things go well on the AVN side
. And in regards to the conversations, yeah my feeling is also that some pages are overcrowded maybe I need to "dumb down" some of the conversations, since stretching the out over more pages would also not be beneficial, since it is like you mentioned what the people want to see is pretty much just a constant stream of sex. 
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