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[Tal3s of Debauchery] A Mothers Shame

I like this story, the artist is excellent, keep up the great work. I only have one reservation: I don't see strong sexual desire in the mother for a situation like this, between mother and son. There is no verbal communication between the two, everything is in the mind. I don't see any demonstration on the part of the mother, to her son, that she wants to have sex with him. It seems to me like forced sex, always accompanied by regrets and doubts for both of them. I would like sex between them to be more fun, bringing more satisfaction and joy to both of them, and for them to tell each other if it was good or bad. I believe that if it were like that, the reader would be more pleased. Just my humble opinion.
Hey friend,
Thanks for taking your time and writing your feedback. Well it will eventually come to this but at first she is just feeling/thinking that it isn't right for her doing it with him and especially not allowing her to enjoy these things. But as time goes on and they continue to doing with each other she'll gradually will come to fully indulge into this forbidden pleasure. Though since Isi is always trying to uphold her modest nature she it isn't easy for her to accept it. Anyway since it just has been their first time together (in the latest update on here) she is still firmly opposed to it...
 
Hey friend,
Thanks for taking your time and writing your feedback. Well it will eventually come to this but at first she is just feeling/thinking that it isn't right for her doing it with him and especially not allowing her to enjoy these things. But as time goes on and they continue to doing with each other she'll gradually will come to fully indulge into this forbidden pleasure. Though since Isi is always trying to uphold her modest nature she it isn't easy for her to accept it. Anyway since it just has been their first time together (in the latest update on here) she is still firmly opposed to it...
Exactly... If the mother is willing, that means the story is going to end. What makes this story different is the natural progress of a mother and Son's journey towards the unthinkable. Keep up the good work. And the mother was so cute with those beautiful ornaments. Appreciate your hard work.
 
From X - Tal3s of Debauchery
A Mother's Shame - Weekly Update #99

Unsure about what she is supposed to do after doing the unthinkable...again..
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Exactly... If the mother is willing, that means the story is going to end. What makes this story different is the natural progress of a mother and Son's journey towards the unthinkable. Keep up the good work. And the mother was so cute with those beautiful ornaments. Appreciate your hard work.
Cheers friend. Happy to hear that you enjoy the storie. Even after doing it for the first time it will be somewhat of a roller coaster in regards of Isabellas acceptance of doing it with Dylan due to her nature and her key beliefs. So I hope I“ll be able to manage keep it interesting about whats to come even after breaking the "forbidden sigil" ;)
 
Hi,
The next 26 Pages (145 incl Cover) of Chapter 4 for A Mothers Shame are now out on fanbox and subscribestar!

Cumming home again... haha.... (Sneak Peak of Chapter four Page 122)

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Oh man, this image is fantastic, perfect...congrats, great image, son cumming in his mom's pussy - fantastic. Great visual, great position, everything.
 
Hi all,
here we are with the next 21 pages (193-213) of A Mothers Shame chapter 3. Finishing of the chapter with Isabella having a moment of weakness the morning after...


Enjoy :)!

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I am still waiting for chapter 5 release šŸ˜‚
I have a request, please upload chapter 1-5 after completing the chapter 5 . It is a REQUEST to the author! I am waiting from ch 1 .
Hope you will grant my request
 
I saw they've already released the rest of the story titled: Tal3s of Debauchery – Forbidden Fruits 6 (while it's about A mothers shame) on other comics sites (I won't mention them to avoid publicity). It goes up to chapter 6.
 
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I am still waiting for chapter 5 release šŸ˜‚
I have a request, please upload chapter 1-5 after completing the chapter 5 . It is a REQUEST to the author! I am waiting from ch 1 .
Hope you will grant my request
I'll see that I set up a link when we got so far on here ;)
I saw they've already released the rest of the story titled: Tal3s of Debauchery – Forbidden Fruits 6 (while it's about A mothers shame) on other comics sites (I won't mention them to avoid publicity). It goes up to chapter 6.
Yeah, some guys unfortunately scrapped my stuff and just posted it. It's seriously frustrating that they do this, especially since I'm already posting all my stuff for free, with a delay of course but still, all the time, effort and money I put into this and they still post it for imaginary points or whatever :(
 
If this can offer you any consolation, i saw what should be chapter 6 (or is it chapter 4?), and sex scene on bed is great, fantastic, visually hard in a right way. Many images are really exciting. Congrats. I still think that maybe dialogues are kind of so-so, and that entire comic tried too much to show them as two "regular" people flirting, seducing , dating and so on - but i thought it was pretty hot and exciting just the same.
 
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If this can offer you any consolation, i saw what should be chapter 6 (or is it chapter 4?), and sex scene on bed is great, fantastic, visually hard in a right way. Many images are really exciting. Congrats. I still think that maybe dialogues are kind of so-so, and that entire comic tried too much to show them as two "regular" people flirting, seducing , dating and so on - but i thought it was pretty hot and exciting just the same.
Thanks for the feedback ;) and I“m "only" at chapter four so far with AMS.
 
So, i have two observations/critiques here: first, i think mom's "new" face is not so great, i think she's kind of uglier like this to be honest. You should have keep the original look, only with few wrinkles here and there. Second, i don't know why son's cock-head is completely covered by skin, it really makes his dick look ugly, unnatural, almost disturbing. It should have been like half-exposed (when soft), if you know what i mean.
 
So, i have two observations/critiques here: first, i think mom's "new" face is not so great, i think she's kind of uglier like this to be honest. You should have keep the original look, only with few wrinkles here and there. Second, i don't know why son's cock-head is completely covered by skin, it really makes his dick look ugly, unnatural, almost disturbing. It should have been like half-exposed (when soft), if you know what i mean.
Hey friend, thanks for the feedback, she hasn“t gotten a particular new face. In the bathroom scene she is just isn“t wearing any make up ;). I“m not sure why the dick covered in foreskin is unnatural or disturbing. I get why one may prefer your mentioned variant but in the end it goes down to personal prefference and I tend to try to not use always the same variant of their 3D Model even when it“s "only" about something so "little" like the sons dick. Sometimes it“s covered up completly when soft, sometimes like you mentioned half-exposed or even completly exposed. Since like in real life when I take my dick as an example it also isn“t looking always the same though the state of softness may seem comparible. (Never thougt that I would write such a sentence but there you go :D)
 
Yeah, it feels kind of strange to talk about "dick-look", but anyway, it's probably just an aesthetic issue. And i'm not even circumsised or anything like that. We're all built different , i guess.
 
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Hey friend, thanks for the feedback, she hasn“t gotten a particular new face. In the bathroom scene she is just isn“t wearing any make up ;). I“m not sure why the dick covered in foreskin is unnatural or disturbing. I get why one may prefer your mentioned variant but in the end it goes down to personal prefference and I tend to try to not use always the same variant of their 3D Model even when it“s "only" about something so "little" like the sons dick. Sometimes it“s covered up completly when soft, sometimes like you mentioned half-exposed or even completly exposed. Since like in real life when I take my dick as an example it also isn“t looking always the same though the state of softness may seem comparible. (Never thougt that I would write such a sentence but there you go :D)
No my friend sorry. She isn't the same person. That is not a make up thing. Yeah, make up changes a bit but her face lines are even different. I bet her iphone even couldn't recognise her face to unlock the phone :) her (this without make up face) look is very ugly as well. Please stick with the original one. That is also more characteristics and hot
 

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