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[trap.lust1]

hi guys need one help to decide which comic should i take next 1. friends with benifit will have 3-4 chapters next 5 will release soon.
family debt will have some 5-6 chapters next. and wanted to start new cd story also to replace fwb so which should i start 1. medival setting with kings and lords 2. some mafia setting please give me suggestions

 

[cream98]

hi guys need one help to decide which comic should i take next 1. friends with benifit will have 3-4 chapters next 5 will release soon.
family debt will have some 5-6 chapters next. and wanted to start new cd story also to replace fwb so which should i start 1. medival setting with kings and lords 2. some mafia setting please give me suggestions

Hi!

Here's some ideas for the future

- No more floating characters or poses that makes no sense. Page 171 is a good example.

- A proofreader would be beneficial because the lack of vocabulary (I know english is not your 1st language) but this would help readers have a smoother reading of the story instead of getting lost in the text and wondering what the author meant.

- A more developed story. The sex scenes would be bigger and make more sense if there was a build up. I feel like we go too quickly from 'I'm straight' to 'I'm down to take him in the ass without questioning'.

- Personally, I don't like anything medieval so I would go for the other option but it's really a matter of preference so I can't speak for the others

I think that for a first comic FWB is not so bad after all and that you are on the right track. Thank you for sticking with pure crossdressing, there aren't many authors who do it and I believe this is what will eventually set you apart from the rest!

Have a good one and keep up the good work!

 

[Erica St.Claire]

Medieval is not something I feel you're ready for.
And there is the trap of ripping off Game of Thrones I see authors do countless times, even if they don't mean to, it happens anyway.
GOF was that influential.

You are the perfect candidate for a creating fem guy in a College story.

Naturally fem appearing, never had a gf as girls always saw him more like a girl.
Meets a guy, who is not gay, but falls for him and not gay guy struggles with that issue.

And 'oh,oh' along comes competition for the fem looking guy.
So while not gay guy is making his mind up, the new comer makes moves on fem guy.

Fem guy starts becoming increasingly female in clothing choices/make-up and is torn between two loves.

And hell yes, get yourself someone who can proof read your work.
Do you want your work to be flavor of the month, or last the test of time?

If it can't be read easily, it will eventually be forgotten.

 

[trap.lust1]

Medieval is not something I feel you're ready for.
And there is the trap of ripping off Game of Thrones I see authors do countless times, even if they don't mean to, it happens anyway.
GOF was that influential.

You are the perfect candidate for a creating fem guy in a College story.

Naturally fem appearing, never had a gf as girls always saw him more like a girl.
Meets a guy, who is not gay, but falls for him and not gay guy struggles with that issue.

And 'oh,oh' along comes competition for the fem looking guy.
So while not gay guy is making his mind up, the new comer makes moves on fem guy.

Fem guy starts becoming increasingly female in clothing choices/make-up and is torn between two loves.

And hell yes, get yourself someone who can proof read your work.
Do you want your work to be flavor of the month, or last the test of time?

If it can't be read easily, it will eventually be forgotten.

the basic thing is for now i got limitation with my machine upgrading soon cause its bit tidious to render one pic it takes around 2-3 hrs with setup and all that few mistakes are not visiable easily cause some time machine hangs will upgradde this soon and will follow the style of littletgkitten he creates charrecter only settings still his art stands out learning like that but for now this machine will suffice gathering funcds for new machine will give the good news soon. thats why disfigured clothes and floating charrecters was things cause to change scene i have to wait for extra 40-50 minutes i do mostly but sometimes it is still get the software crashes and have to redo all work i m not complaining i enjoy the process i want to make greate stories and great art at same time this is not only for money i need that no doubt in that but i like telling stories and this stories you cant express in society as normal., this is the only way doing it. the stories and cotrolling the charrecters is good part of the things so i know i should stick to modern things and will try and improve the art in next chapter i have almost finished chapter 5 of freinds with benifit so forgive me but i tried few new things this time. cause i have rendered high resolution to push machine i have written some optimisations for this so testing is it working or not so thats all for that and one more thing i'll like this your honest reviews and will stick to modern stories i have some in mind just stay tuned and support me. if anyone have tutorilas or tips for rendering please do share. and one more thing i will not stretch stories beyond there limit like kizaru friends and mellisa's approdites mirror will keep stories true to their narrative and close them as soon as they meant to be.

 

[Jackjons]

the basic thing is for now i got limitation with my machine upgrading soon cause its bit tidious to render one pic it takes around 2-3 hrs with setup and all that few mistakes are not visiable easily cause some time machine hangs will upgradde this soon and will follow the style of littletgkitten he creates charrecter only settings still his art stands out learning like that but for now this machine will suffice gathering funcds for new machine will give the good news soon. thats why disfigured clothes and floating charrecters was things cause to change scene i have to wait for extra 40-50 minutes i do mostly but sometimes it is still get the software crashes and have to redo all work i m not complaining i enjoy the process i want to make greate stories and great art at same time this is not only for money i need that no doubt in that but i like telling stories and this stories you cant express in society as normal., this is the only way doing it. the stories and cotrolling the charrecters is good part of the things so i know i should stick to modern things and will try and improve the art in next chapter i have almost finished chapter 5 of freinds with benifit so forgive me but i tried few new things this time. cause i have rendered high resolution to push machine i have written some optimisations for this so testing is it working or not so thats all for that and one more thing i'll like this your honest reviews and will stick to modern stories i have some in mind just stay tuned and support me. if anyone have tutorilas or tips for rendering please do share.

I am thinking about try to Daz3d myself as well.
But for that , with my working laptop, it won't do , need a pc for that ,.... And the price would be quite high

 

[trap.lust1]

I am thinking about try to Daz3d myself as well.
But for that , with my working laptop, it won't do , need a pc for that ,.... And the price would be quite high

yes and software it self is to buggy sometime i just use blender for this renderings it is good but takes to long to render and some scene on low machines will never work on with daz. the software is not stable

 

[Jackjons]

yes and software it self is to buggy sometime i just use blender for this renderings it is good but takes to long to render and some scene on low machines will never work on with daz. the software is not stable

True......

 

[trap.lust1]

Friends With Benefit Chapter 5 :
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i know this is some things i tried new just improved images on my old machine and please consider need to fast space chapter cause there will be more to story than this part.

 

[Erica St.Claire]

Friends With Benefit Chapter 5

Natural, atmospheric, like a cool breeze on a summers night.

The English seemed improved.
2-3 hours to render one pic?
Makes me feel better about the time I spend on my current projects.

Also, we are well overdue to see some works from Jackjons.
If only JJ had that improved computer.

 

[Jackjons]

Natural, atmospheric, like a cool breeze on a summers night.

The English seemed improved.
2-3 hours to render one pic?
Makes me feel better about the time I spend on my current projects.

Also, we are well overdue to see some works from Jackjons.
If only JJ had that improved computer.

If I use my laptop, even try to run one pic , i believe my laptop will blown out .....
I Don't want to push my old buddy to die patheticly. So currently I am watching tutorials and try to understand bit by bit .

What i wanted to create, for that I need a higher spec pc , and it will cost a fortune in my country,
So i have to wait for that , but i can guarantee i will do it sooner or later, and I am expecting help from each of you when time comes, specially tip for character modeling and little bit for English
( My English is very very poor )

 

[mihaluck]

I'm with you guys. I also started to play with daz3d and ai after update my pc. Difficult to figure some things, slow learn through it.

 

[Jackjons]

I'm with you guys. I also started to play with daz3d and ai after update my pc. Difficult to figure some things, slow learn through it.

Keep it slow and steady but make a solid foundation, so you can create your own universe just as you imagine it , don't compromise with the quality of your imagination.

You can share your model with us , whatever you create, good bad , shit , awesome, we might help you to improve your art more , sometimes we can't understand what we create or how much worth it , we need 3rd person for that .

 

[trap.lust1]

new Comic soon :-

 

[Jackjons]

new Comic soon :-

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New pc , new model , looks great I can see the progress and your success keep going

 

[mihaluck]

New pc , new model , looks great I can see the progress and your success keep going

You can try Daz on laptop and play with models, just not render

 

[Jackjons]

You can try Daz on laptop and play with models, just not render

Lol , if I try on my laptop, it will blast my laptop is a antice piece of trash i can only watch daz's tutorial on YouTube lol

 

[trap.lust1]

New pc , new model , looks great I can see the progress and your success keep going

pushing old to its limits

 

[shemaleNL]

pushing old to its limits

do you go on with family debt.

 

[Jackjons]

pushing old to its limits

RIP ......... I can hear it's screaming

 

[@lexx$]

new Comic soon :-

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Wow, you've improved a lot. Congratulations, friend. I wonder who the girl ended up being??. This is a new story.