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Nimbus696
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I created a novel for 18+ version of avatar
And I want some opinions
Echoes of Eywa: The Eternal Bond
(My 18+ version)
(An expanded slice-of-life chronicle across the Avatar saga. Here, the focus lingers on the unhurried cadence of Jake and Neytiriās existenceāthe subtle shifts in posture that betray desire, the weight of a gaze held too long, the low timbre of voices that carry unspoken promises. Intimacy builds through deliberate proximity, skin brushing skin, breaths syncing in quiet anticipation. Their bodies communicate raw need without apology: erections straining against fabric, slick arousal coating thighs, the deliberate grind of hips that teases without immediate release. Life unfolds in routines laced with this tension, where duty and hunger coexist, each feeding the other.)
Part I: Forest Dawn (2154ā2168, Post-War Omatikaya Life)
Chapter 1: Waking Rhythms
The hammock swayed gently in the pre-dawn breeze, suspended high among the branches of a Great Mother Tree. Jake Sully woke to the familiar weight of Neytiri against himāher back flush to his chest, ass pressed firmly into his groin, tail draped possessively over his thigh. His cock was already half-hard from the night before, nestled in the warm cleft of her body, stirring further as her breathing deepened with consciousness. She never woke abruptly; instead she stretched like a predator coming alive, spine arching so her ass ground back against him in one slow, deliberate roll.
Her ears flicked toward the first banshee cry of the morning. Golden eyes opened, locking on his without turning her head. āYouāre thick already,ā she said, voice low and rough, carrying that edge of ownership she never hid. Her hand reached back between them, fingers curling around his shaft through the thin tewng, stroking once from root to tip with enough pressure to make his hips jerk. Precum slicked her palm immediately.
Jake exhaled sharply through his nose, hand sliding down her side to grip her hipbone. āYour fault,ā he muttered, blunt. His fingers dipped lower, parting her thighs just enough to find her already wetāfolds swollen, entrance slick from dreams or from the way heād filled her twice the night before. He circled her clit slowly, watching her tail tighten around his leg like a coil. She pushed back harder, grinding her ass against his cock, coating the fabric between them with her arousal.
They delayed the queue connection, letting the physical tension build until it hurt. Neytiri turned in his arms, leg hooking over his hip, pulling their pelvises flush so his erection pressed directly against her slick heat. Her breasts brushed his chest, nipples already peaked from the cool air and anticipation. She leaned in, nose brushing his in the intimate nƬāawve, but her lips hovered a breath away from his mouthāclose enough he felt every exhale.
When their queues finally met, tendrils intertwining with a soft electric snap, the flood was immediate: her sharp, insistent want crashing into him, his steady, possessive throb flowing back. Jake rolled her beneath him, weight braced on forearms so she felt every inch of him without being crushed. He rocked against her, cock sliding along her folds, nudging her clit with each pass until her breath hitched and her nails dug crescent marks into his shoulders.
āStop teasing,ā she growled, voice vibrating against his throat. He pushed inside her in one long, controlled slideāthick head stretching her open, shaft following until he bottomed out, balls pressed tight to her ass. They stayed like that for several heartbeats, simply joined, feeling each other pulse. Then movement began: slow, deep rolls of his hips that dragged every ridge along her inner walls. Her legs locked around his waist, heels digging into his lower back, urging him deeper.
Breasts rose and fell with each breath, nipples grazing his chest hairlessly smooth skin. Sweat began to bead along her collarbone; he bent to lick it off, tasting salt and the faint bioluminescent sweetness unique to her. Neytiriās hands roamed his back, nails raking lightly, then harder when he angled his thrusts to hit the spot that made her gasp. Release built graduallyāno frantic chase, just mounting pressure until her pussy clenched hard around him, walls rippling in long, rolling contractions. She came quietly, head thrown back, throat exposed, a low keening sound escaping as her body shuddered beneath him.
Jake followed seconds later, hips grinding deep as he spilled inside her, hot pulses filling her until it leaked out around his cock. They remained locked together, queues still linked, breathing in sync with the forest waking around them.
There is more but I'm just sending this part to get more opinions I'm trying to find the artist the rest of the novel
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