Elaine
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thank you it looks identical to 380 unfortunately
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[Various Artists] Melissa N. - Melissa 822 inspired Comics, Stories & Artwork
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- crossdressing feminization gender-change transformation
mntna
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i really hoped that Tanya would keep the act that Mia has always been Mia Lozana with even adding that Simon was a young guy that looked after Mia's pool or garden and Mia was attracted to
a real shame
i don't like that Mia is already speaking Spanish so fluent and is now speaking only a Broken-English with Spanish accent, i was hoping to see a more gradual change thanks to Tanya slow conditioning
so Mia went under:
- Facial Feminization Surgery that not only make Mia more feminine, but also older
- Breast Implants perfect for a Middle-Aged Latin Woman
- Voice Change
- possible Liposuction + a Brazilian Butt Lift, i don't thinks that that Butt is all thanks to those shakes
BriannatheMage
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To be fair, the story this is based on moves pretty quickly too. Mia is sucking dick and dating guys relatively fast so I think Newbee is keeping a decent pace so far.
mntna
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Mia didn't suck anyone...yet
all Mia did was kissing only 1 guy and got punched after he finds out Mia was "Trans"
the sex scene was only Mia imagining it
Mia didn't have any sexual encounter with Men...yet, if Tanya plan works, Mia will soon start dating Men and have sex with them, maybe only blowjobs at the start
BriannatheMage
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Yes I know in Newbeeās version she hasnāt done anything yet. In the story this is based on, Mia starts having sex with all the guys that she is forced to flirt with pretty quickly.
Coracal422
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Where can one read this story?
mntna
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Cat-fishing My Girlfriends Dad
Tanya Cherith and her boyfriend Simon Finch have been having some relationship problems. Tanya is an up and coming graphic designer and advertiser at her dad's production company and Simon is an out of work actor who does more tanning then job search
chyoa.com
mntna
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yeah, too quickly
at one point the Original Version became a mix of chapters from different authors and one of them wanted Mia to have sex and forced the plot to have "her" go and have sex with many men, too quickly
NewBee's version has a more steady pace that fit the story
Nippur
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What I find ridiculous is all the brainwashing where Mia forgest how to speak in English and speaks in spanish
mntna
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me too, it was too quickly
i like it before the surgeries, where Mia was speaking more fluently Spanish more and more to the point that it was effecting his natural English-speaking language
the fact that Mia has a Spanish accent when speaking in English was one of the main reason i liked this Cultural Change story, changing the way the protagonist speak the new language so fast ruin it completely
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