mmtf
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Jameslittle
Member
Great work as always. Keep it up. Much thanks
doccop65
Member
Said it once and I'll say it again. You need to get with an artist who doesn't know how to write scripts. Between Your scriptwriting and their visuals, you'd make a great team. I have someone in mind if you're interested.
Stolly
Active member
Such a nice compliment; thanks!
It think it would be a fun opportunity for me, but since I needed a new computer due to Windows 11, I have lost some great software that helped with both editing and with "speech bubbles", in particular ... but I'll continue as long as I enjoy it. These days, I'm in the middle of a pretty complete re-write of the excellent 400 page Pixil work: 'Good Wife/Best Mother'. The characters are now a neglected YOUNG stepmom and her new stepson ... great artwork to work with!
doccop65
Member
You do know that the project that you're working on is texted in the Ren'Py game, right? I'm not trying to discourage you but if you load the game up, all of the narratives and dialogs are available onscreen.
pandolfoj3
Active member
Some animations of the uploaded images; if anyone wants more, send me a DM.
Stolly
Active member
Wow, very impressive work! I feel like I should be saying "thank you"
Stolly
Active member
Sorry, but that's all 'greek' to me as I've never seen or opened a 'game' ... honestly!
doccop65
Member
Yes, that's fair. If you go on 'f95 zone', which is a pirate adult gaming, visual novel and kinetic novel site, you''ll see Tons of them. The one in particular tat you're writing dialog for (which someone on SVSComics has stolen and downloaded from), is from an artist/developer named 'Pixil'. His works are grouped in the thread titled "A Wife And Mother Fan Art Game." From there, you'll see all of his finished projects. The 2nd one is titled 'Dress Up-The Morning After' which is the sequel to the 1st one titled 'Dress Up.'Sorry, but that's all 'greek' to me as I've never seen or opened a 'game' ... honestly!
If you download the game from one of the servers, load it and begin playing, you'll see that there's already a texted story which is the aftermath of events that happend in the first story. Whoever downloaded it to SVS probably got it from This site as Pixil submitted the untexted version here a couple of years ago. I'm noticing that, since it Has been submitted untexted, that Some renders pertinent to the story are conveniently Missing.
Again, Not trying to discourage you, just letting you know what's really going on here. I STILL think that you have a natural talent for storytelling that needs to be nurtured. That's why I made the suggestion to find an artist that doesn't have your gift, collaborate with Them and maybe have a change to pen an original story and quite possibly, get Paid for it too!
doccop65
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Don't sweat it. Sometimes the likes come in groups. People get busy sometimes and can only skim through the threads, so it's not anything that you are/aren't doing. It's just timing. Keep going, your stuff is good.My last submission was not as well received as some of my others, so ... here we go again
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doccop65
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I mentioned you to Pixil awhile back. Told him to check out your work here. I also told the artist @maks122 from F95Zone about you as well. Not sure if either contacted you. Especially @maks122 since he only does text-less stories. I hope that the two of you can work something out because your incredible narratives combined with his incredible artwork would make for some Really fantastic storytelling. I can only imagine how that would look because you have appropriate texts for Individual renders, so I'm pretty damn sure that, given a series of renders to work with, you'd come up with great storyteling texts.