[VidaxMega] The Farm

[Deleted member 46868]

Hey Vidax here,
Its my first comic so I hope you like it, support me on patreon if you do.

 

[Spitfire]

Thanks for sharing your comic here. Enjoyable little romp . Have you got the next story figured out yet ? Interesting to see how little background work you need sometimes.
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Some constructive critique. You've already done the hard thing, which is putting out your first work. I'll only point out that you need to keep going. Improve, check, improve and keep putting stuff out.
Details. No cumshots, which gives the ending a less dramatic impact. Speech bubbles can be improved a lot. Spacing, text size. I've always found Jabcomix good at this. They're my reference and I haven't had the balls to put anything out yet. Page 15 ("FIIT!!") had this vertical text that didn't work for me. I almost overlooked it, so it may just be clarity that's missing. The boing boner might have done better being placed on the left, since that's the direction I was looking. When I read the first time, I was a bit confused.

Really like that art! Great splits for the sex on pages 18 and 19. Looking forward to your next chapter/project. Who knows what 'research' is being done.

 

[Deleted member 46868]

Thanks for sharing your comic here. Enjoyable little romp . Have you got the next story figured out yet ? Interesting to see how little background work you need sometimes.

Curently working on the video version of this one, I have a very rough version of the next one planed out, as far as the backgrounds are concerned I figured most people wouldn't really care about them (I also suck at drawing them). Thanks for the kind words, they mean a lot.

 

[Spitfire]

If you haven't heard of it, the free Open NSFW soundpack released a new update a few weeks ago. Might be useful. I contributed a bit to it(some amongst thousands of sounds). Do you know how to handle sound ?

 

[Deleted member 46868]

If you haven't heard of it, the free Open NSFW soundpack released a new update a few weeks ago. Might be useful. I contributed a bit to it(some amongst thousands of sounds). Do you know how to handle sound ?

Sort of, still learning stuff, but thanks I'll check it out, sorry for the late reply been busy for the last couple of days