[WickedWon] Erin

[Mpig93]

is everything that came out after chapter 21 cannon and cronalogical for example would Prima Nocta be chapter 22?

 

[WickedWon]

is everything that came out after chapter 21 cannon and cronalogical for example would Prima Nocta be chapter 22?

Yes, all of the story chapters are sequential and part of the ongoing tale. The "pin-ups" are not canonical. I have a reply earlier in the thread that details the sequence they should be read in.

 

[WickedWon]

Daddy Issues, Pg. 4. Gender fluidity gains a whole new meaning for Erin...

 

[WickedWon]

Daddy Issues, Pg. 5. Well, Roxy did say she "had a friend"...

 

[nsur]

Interesting development -- intrigued where you're going to take this while Erin still wears Daddy's collar so we're still in the dom-sub story arc.

On a technical point, I like the current rendering for Erin's hair. It didn't look quite right in the makeover chapter but this is much nicer.

 

[WickedWon]

I kinda agree on the hair. I'll be playing around with styles some. I don't like the way most of the longer styles drape with "DForce", so finding one that works nice is difficult, and why I use a lot of shorter hair or ponytails. I need something that doesn't take ages to tweak and pose. If anyone has a recommend for something in shoulder length style, let me know!

If I had more time and ambition, I'd give modeling my own a shot.

 

[nsur]

I think Erin is at heart a short-haired character anyway -- she looks cute with short hair and it reminds us that Aaron is still there even when she is fully dolled up.

 

[WickedWon]

Maybe I'll go with a cute pixie cut, and then have Erin wear a variety of wigs. What do y'all think of that idea, fans?

 

[beagleboy]

Maybe I'll go with a cute pixie cut, and then have Erin wear a variety of wigs. What do y'all think of that idea, fans?

Whichever way you decide to go i will be happy.

 

[Blak29]

Maybe I'll go with a cute pixie cut, and then have Erin wear a variety of wigs. What do y'all think of that idea, fans?

I love the idea ...

 

[WickedWon]

Daddy Issues, Pg. 6.

Fair is fair, right?

 

[WickedWon]

Thanks for the support and the feedback! I guess that since it takes me so long to get a chapter out, I just want to stretch out the reveal a bit. It seems to generate more comments and gives me a reason to hang around, rather than making one big dump every couple of months.

Or maybe I'm just a tease, trying to build antici..................................


...........................................pation.

 

[nsur]

I think on balance I am probably with you on that one. Yes, of course I want to know how the story unfolds and want to read ahead, but the story does have more impact and is more engaging if I get a new page per day rather than reading a chapter in one go in about 5 minutes and moving on.

 

[WickedWon]

Daddy Issues, Pg. 7. (NOTE: No accidental impregnations occurred during the making of this chapter. I think. Let me check the calendar...)

 

[WickedWon]

Daddy Issues, Pg. 8. Someone's gonna get a spanking...

 

[WickedWon]

Daddy Issues, Pg. 9. You can get anything you want with puppy-dog eyes!

 

[WickedWon]

Daddy Issues, Pg. 10 - Finale. It's a mystery!

 

[Mpig93]

Daddy Issues, Pg. 10 - Finale. It's a mystery!

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Well this got interesting

 

[WickedWon]

Possible answers:

A) Julie lied about who else was doing the deed with her.
B) Erin's little spermies beat the odds.
C) A mysterious supernatural alien kidnapped and bred her, then wiped her memory.
D) Shenanigans of an unexpected kind...

 

[Backdoor Jesus]

And the plot thickens!

thanks for this one, I'm definitely invested in Erin's outcome