[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups

I have to do the realism one 😋
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tbh I laughed more during this chapter than I did anything else, she dragged out two chapters (technically 3 chapters if you count the prequel) with Berto, and then with this guy without any hesitation, she didn't even resist
 
I have no problem with the new chapter, all in all a good one. But the issue keeps recurring, he simply could've just expanded on chapter 3 and continued from there. An entire night with berto is just skipped and couple panels for us to get the context. Honestly, the overnight unfolding of sex between them would've been much steamier. Like SL chapter 3 part 3. Anyway, I see people start realising about the art style, it is sketch comic so it is supposed to suck compared to the main one but it does get more lackluster. I think he abandoned a lot of pre made panels to meet fans demands. If he went to write his own story, there would've been a lot less sucky panels. And props to the guy who noticed she now much easily agrees to have sex with anyone, good catch.
 
John Coitus said:
I have no problem with the new chapter, all in all a good one. But the issue keeps recurring, he simply could've just expanded on chapter 3 and continued from there. An entire night with berto is just skipped and couple panels for us to get the context. Honestly, the overnight unfolding of sex between them would've been much steamier. Like SL chapter 3 part 3. Anyway, I see people start realising about the art style, it is sketch comic so it is supposed to suck compared to the main one but it does get more lackluster. I think he abandoned a lot of pre made panels to meet fans demands. If he went to write his own story, there would've been a lot less sucky panels. And props to the guy who noticed she now much easily agrees to have sex with anyone, good catch.
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Do You realize how many pages and work it's draw and paint all the pages? It's not a problem and it's no necesesary draw all the details if the autor told You what's happen in the story, thats where the imagination comes in when you read something and if You're complain fot the Quality of the art style, if zetto draw every aspect, detail and action of the characters, Zetto delay so much more beteween chapters and the Quality of art Will be worst.
 
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In my opinion, Ranta should replace Berto. Ranta should become the new character who has the most sex with Lizana, at least in the next three episodes (5, 6, and 7). Lizana and Ranta remind me a lot of Mitsuko Takayanagi and Kouji Takayanagi in Mistreated Bride. They make a good couple. I hope Zetto takes advantage of this new character who could save the series "Lizana and the Homeless"...
 
Liz's sexual relationships with homeless men are becoming too casual; they start having sex after exchanging fewer than ten words
If possible, a more gradual plot would be better. First, Liz is with Berto and Ricky, then Yoti discovers her, and finally, under Yoti's threat, they have sex, which is then discovered by Yoti's wife. In revenge, she calls other homeless men to rape Liz. Wouldn't that be more plausible, making Liz seem less like a prostitute acting so casually?
 
It seem zetto have lost his interest in homeless storyline, he just doing it for fan and money, with his old skecthes and idea is very interesting for me, still remember berto ask her to lick buthole that is never happen, his idea for lizana to put condom on berto dick, a threesome between lizana with berto and his son also never happen.
 
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