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[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups

wait for 1oct Homeless chapter 2

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deletemepleasenow said:
well..in the new homeless chapter she seems to be wearing a beautiful black dress she wore to church so thats going to be along the same type of clothing.

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Well I'll be honest, in the second image Lizana's anatomy got so disproportionate that the tag breast expansion should be added to it. She's ridiculously massive at the top. And damn if her head doesn't match the body 😂😂. I know people keep appealing to the attractiveness of it but modesty ripped off a modest woman is much more sexier atleast in a porn comic point of view.
 
Zetto's art is good. Sinful lust story with Lizana and Ramon is interesting to follow. But the story should be not complicated. I don't think making Lizana to be the whore of everyone is a good idea. Maybe in a separate story like homeless, you can make her for every guy. But in the main story "Sinful Lust", it should not be the same. So the there's a destinction. If not, then it will become boring.
 
mickeymc said:
Zetto's art is good. Sinful lust story with Lizana and Ramon is interesting to follow. But the story should be not complicated. I don't think making Lizana to be the whore of everyone is a good idea. Maybe in a separate story like homeless, you can make her for every guy. But in the main story "Sinful Lust", it should not be the same. So the there's a destinction. If not, then it will become boring.
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It won't get boring when you become a whore, on the contrary, it will increase the fun.
 
In a Korean manga, there's a story about a peeping Tom. The heroine has an emotional entanglement with her boss, is threatened and humiliated by a neighbor, loses her virginity, and is betrayed by her husband. The events that unfold between these various characters and stories are still fresh in my memory. Zetto's "Guilty Desire" immerses me in this story more than any other manga I've read. I don't think there's anything wrong with infidelity and coercion; on the contrary, I'm looking forward to it. The main plotline then follows, with her being threatened with having sex with the police officer's son (a chubby school bully), or being discovered by the old security guard and threatened again. These are classic scenarios. It's also possible that her husband is caught cheating and they divorce. These are just my guesses. The presence of these plots doesn't affect the "Guilty Desire" identity; on the contrary, I love it.
 
Why did we shift from discussing about consistent art style to the plot points and plot progression. When people start stating opinions on storyline itself, someone is always unsatisfied. It is a concept that can't satisfy every single person. As long the art is consistent we can always give creative suggestions to the creator and let him know if he took it a bit too far. And comparing it to a Korean manhwa might be a bit unfair, their psyche is a bit different than Japanese doujinshi, because people unfamiliar with both concepts simultaneously might feel a bit confused. No hate to manhwas though, I did read some and like some and some took it way too far.
 
3 comm done.
I don't know if we will be able to see comm or not, but I'm quite sure some commissioners will let zetto post public.
be patient, zetto just received request 2 days ago
 
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