[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups

Guys, it is obvious he takes longer times now. Instead of writing the story his way, Zetto asks the fans what they want, and if doesn't match what he is already working on it takes longer. I mean we keep asking for sex scenes which is why Zetto has to think longer to give us what we want and also incorporate his story into it. I think he is having a hard time giving fans what they want and also working on his vision but it comes crashing down when he releases something he likes but the fans doesn't. I think fans should ask him to write his own story and they will support Zetto regardless. That would be best in the long run, and he might not burn out so quick that way. It was really good up until chapter 5 wasn't it. It got really twisted from there. Oh, and not to forget, I think he lost the kobayashi house assets, so he needs to rebuild it entirely which might be one of the reasons this chapter is taking longer besides the mismatch of content.
 
I think Zetto has the Sinful Lust stories with every character almost finished and working on homeless stories with other characters and then the daughter in law next chapter project so that he wont be burned out from all the endless work and art just have faith and belief hell get everything done and then take a break to come up with juicy stories from the saga
 
While we wait for the update, I'd like to ask: In your opinion, why has Lizana's main storyline declined so much? And why has there been such a rise in the spin-off about the homeless?
 
wilterdown said:
While we wait for the update, I'd like to ask: In your opinion, why has Lizana's main storyline declined so much? And why has there been such a rise in the spin-off about the homeless?
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Because Zetto don't listen his fans and he always have problems whit writing, he is a great ilustraeded but his writing it's other story
 
wilterdown said:
While we wait for the update, I'd like to ask: In your opinion, why has Lizana's main storyline declined so much? And why has there been such a rise in the spin-off about the homeless?
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There's too much irrelevant characters like the policewoman and that oldman neighbor and don't forget the prisoner who came out of nowhere
 
wilterdown said:
While we wait for the update, I'd like to ask: In your opinion, why has Lizana's main storyline declined so much? And why has there been such a rise in the spin-off about the homeless?
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Forgot to mention the storyline for Yuki, he was supposed to be the next in line to taste his own mother Liz and yet he vanished from the main story
 
LizanaOurMama said:
There's too much irrelevant characters like the policewoman and that oldman neighbor and don't forget the prisoner who came out of nowhere
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The police woman it's not irrelevant, You can't deny that watch Lizana in a threesome whit other woman was hot. The problem whit that its the motivation of the police woman to hate Lizana because she hate her for the most stupid and simple thing, she hate her only because Lizana was more popular in school. I truly believe the best way to end that threesome chapter was all of them being friends and talk about repeatimg in the future, thats why I said Zetto's writing it's he's weak point
 
LizanaOurMama said:
Esqueci de mencionar a história do Yuki; ele deveria ser o próximo a provar o sangue da própria mãe, Liz, mas simplesmente desapareceu da trama principal.
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Finalmente, alguém pensa como eu. Depois de Yuki flagrar a mãe tendo um caso com o avô, ele deveria ser o próximo a sentir a luxúria da mãe. Lizana talvez até sinta uma conexão mais forte com o filho do que com o sogro. Ramon poderia ficar com ciúmes dos dois, já que Lizana estaria completamente focada em Yuki. Isso poderia abrir caminho para um relacionamento entre Roberto e a neta. Seria uma rivalidade entre Yuki e Lizana contra Ramon e a neta. Tudo feito em segredo.
 
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wilterdown said:
Finally, someone thinks the same way I do. After Yuki caught his mother having an affair with his grandfather, he should be the next to experience his mother's lust. Lizana might even feel a stronger connection with her son than with her father-in-law. Roberto might get jealous of the two of them, since Lizana would be completely focused on Yuki. This could open the door for a relationship between Roberto and his granddaughter. It would be a rivalry between Yuki and Lizana versus Roberto and his granddaughter. All done in secret.
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That would be Ramon not Roberto
 
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