thickdick6969
Active member
I hope that part is at the end, so that I can completely avoid downloading that page lol
[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups
John Coitus
Member
Oh my, someone on the discord tell Zetto to stop panicking. Panic posting a chapter will only further ruin the experience. And I am seriously questioning his choice for the next chapters now.
Watevr
Around forty
Fuck, that's disgusting
...woyuefang
Active member
Hopefully so. It seems that person had previously commissioned Bertto to urinate down Liz's esophagus. However, perhaps this is also Zetto's fetish, since he ignored everyone's comments about Yuki having sex with Liz, yet he made Liz eat shit for one person.
Gcv12
Active member
I really hope this is only click bait and don't do that shit. But if you look clouser, Lizana is wearing the same outfit she use in the first chapter of the homeless, so, if Zetto do the scat thing, maybe ist a altern line inside the first chapter of the homeless saga
Yuluis
Member
Holy Sh!t...Now I understand why zetto's art has gone so downgrades...Cause he has such shitty audience who are the actual subscribers who give there 7 dollars to zetto just to see this shits....As you can see his arts wont improve until these homeless fatish guys start to behave,,They always vote for Homeless and f*ck his arts
kumar
Member
Eagerly excited
Gcv12
Active member
You really have problemsEagerly excited
xiaoshi
Member
I gave up, it was disgusting.
Jackk00
New member
Disgusting
kumar
Member
Ellis
Active member
Yeah this was a bummer. Still had some redeeming qualities, Liz was very likeable here and despite her growing discontent, she didn't take advantage of Ramon after he passed out and managed to restrain herself. Her struggle is actually emphasized on and when she inevitably breaks, the payoff would feel meaningful or at least that's clearly the idea. Art is on point as always and I'm glad Ramon wasn't drawn with yellows eyes like the homeless guys as initially seemed like he would be. Narrative-wise this is a preview chapter in every way, it's called "the beginning" after all.
The problem is Zetto is a lewd artist, not a fanfic writer. As such, this chapter again shows his issues with balance. When people complain about too much build or foreplay, he rushes to do the sex scenes right away as seen with the last few Homeless chapters or the Ranta stuff. When they complain everything happens too fast and Lizana just fucks anyone who makes a move on her, he decides to do these "introspective" chapters that lack almost any sex at all. He always tries to overcompensate and usually doesn't work. Again, since it's a preview chapter I can let it slide when it fits the premise, but it's an ongoing problem for him that he can't seem to shake off.
Also since we got specific ages for both kids, I'm sadly more certain than ever they won't do anything with Yuki and Diana. He is specifically mentioned to be 12 years old here, and if Zetto wanted to avoid any problems with Patreon, he would either not specify Yuki's age or just make him older. The fact that he didn't and instead we have a confirmation that Naewoo is 18 clearly implies the one who will get some action will be her. If or when Diana shows up she will either hook up with Ramon, or maybe get her own spin-off like Ranta. Either way, given how busy Zetto is, I don't see him doing a shota story specifically to put it on his Discord since his patrons are those who support him financially.
Anyway, I think the guy should reconsider his approach because he keeps trying to please everyone and ends up not pleasing anyone.
The problem is Zetto is a lewd artist, not a fanfic writer. As such, this chapter again shows his issues with balance. When people complain about too much build or foreplay, he rushes to do the sex scenes right away as seen with the last few Homeless chapters or the Ranta stuff. When they complain everything happens too fast and Lizana just fucks anyone who makes a move on her, he decides to do these "introspective" chapters that lack almost any sex at all. He always tries to overcompensate and usually doesn't work. Again, since it's a preview chapter I can let it slide when it fits the premise, but it's an ongoing problem for him that he can't seem to shake off.
Also since we got specific ages for both kids, I'm sadly more certain than ever they won't do anything with Yuki and Diana. He is specifically mentioned to be 12 years old here, and if Zetto wanted to avoid any problems with Patreon, he would either not specify Yuki's age or just make him older. The fact that he didn't and instead we have a confirmation that Naewoo is 18 clearly implies the one who will get some action will be her. If or when Diana shows up she will either hook up with Ramon, or maybe get her own spin-off like Ranta. Either way, given how busy Zetto is, I don't see him doing a shota story specifically to put it on his Discord since his patrons are those who support him financially.
Anyway, I think the guy should reconsider his approach because he keeps trying to please everyone and ends up not pleasing anyone.
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Ellis
Active member
Totally fair. Thank you for your service.
kaif_ansarii
Member
Totally waste this chapter ,,
Ellis
Active member
Same, but honestly the Homeless stuff was always supposed to be about a more unhinged version of Lizana who gets more and more depraved with every encounter. She takes multiple creampies, golden showers, has no problem with STDs or having sex in the dirtiest of places, is eating shit supposed to be too far for her at this point? This version is clearly meant to be specifically catered to people who for whatever reason happen to enjoy this type of content. It's why he made it an alternate version, to avoid having the "real" Liz do that, even though at this point she's really not much better after the last chapter of OG Sinful Lust.
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