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[ZettoR18] Tsumibukai yokubō | Sinful Lust and Pinups

Honestly, I don’t really like this new Daughter in Law series. Boring plot and not interesting characters at all! I think, he needs to pay more attention on Sinful Lust series, because there’re so many storylines that we didn’t have yet. And he has to finish all of them. So, any shit from him where we don’t have Lizana is unfappable….
 
I'm no fan of this story either but the sex scenes were really something else. For the first time in a while it didn't look rushed. The art is as clean as I've ever seen from Zetto and aside from those two weird cartoony panels of Gianna's grin when she was giving her mother in law the sleeping pills and her doing the meme face after she started suspecting them, I enjoyed the visuals a lot so kudos to Zetto for that. Lots of different positions without anything too extreme like golden showers or scat again.

Though Homeless was initially promoted as a "sketch comic" so maybe that's another reason the art looks rushed there aside from him trying to meet his deadlines.

I also wanted to mention this and I hope folks don't get mad at me for it. Notice the contrast between how this type of stories tend to be presented when a woman forces herself onto a man compared to vice versa. Ruben told Gianna to stop at least 10 times and it was never painted as unenjoyable for either of the two participants. Compare that to Yoti forcing himself onto Lizana and how disturbing it was all made out to be. When she was telling him to stop, we didn't see her enjoying it, he kept hurling insults at her, saying her pleas make him harder, told her he'll keep fucking her whenever he likes, etc. In one instance the male character is depicted as this totally irredeemable scumbag, while in the other the female character is just a horny slut who is desperate to get pregnant and she's meant to be sympathetic since she misses her dead husband.

This kind of approach is hardly something exclusive to Zetto, I just always felt there's a certain double standard in how sexual harassment is depicted in NSFW art depending on who's the one who does it. Anyway, I don't mean to turn this into some big gender politics debate, so sorry for the rambling.
 
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Ellis said:
I'm no fan of this story either but the sex scenes were really something else. For the first time in a while it didn't look rushed. The art is as clean as I've ever seen from Zetto and aside from those two weird cartoony panels of Gianna's grin when she was giving her mother in law the sleeping pills and her doing the meme face after she started suspecting them, I enjoyed the visuals a lot so kudos to Zetto for that. Lots of different positions without anything too extreme like golden showers or scat again.

Though Homeless was initially promoted as a "sketch comic" so maybe that's another reason the art looks rushed there aside from him trying to meet his deadlines.

I also wanted to mention this and I hope folks don't get mad at me for it. Notice the contrast between how this type of stories tend to be presented when a woman forces herself onto a man compared to vice versa. Ruben told Gianna to stop at least 10 times and it was never painted as unenjoyable for either of the two participants. Compare that to Yoti forcing himself onto Lizana and how disturbing it was all made out to be. When she was telling him to stop, we didn't see her enjoying it, he kept hurling insults at her, saying her pleas make him harder, told her he'll keep fucking her whenever he likes, etc. In one instance the male character is depicted as this totally irredeemable scumbag, while in the other the female character is just a horny slut who is desperate to get pregnant and we're meant to have sympathy for her since she misses her dead husband.

This kind of approach is hardly something limited to Zetto, I just always felt there's a certain double standard in how sexual harassment is depicted in NSFW art depending on who's the one who does it. Anyway, I don't mean to turn this into some big gender politics debate, so sorry for the rambling.
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I wouldn't Say Lizana wasn't enjoying it

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I wouldn't Say Lizana wasn't enjoying it

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The trope of the woman being assaulted starting to enjoy her abuser's dick is nothing surprising, it's the overall situation itself that isn't portrayed in a positive way as opposed to Gianna's story.

This chapter ends with Lizana laying motionless on the ground and Yoti telling her they will keep doing this anytime he wants. The Gianna chapter ends with her and Ruben not being able to keep their hands off of each other. Gianna is portrayed in a sympathetic manner as a horny widow who just wants to continue her husband's lineage, while Yoti is portrayed as a disgusting rapist who was jealous that Liz was fucking Berto and not him.

Again this isn't exclusive to Zetto's stories, but it's noticeable how when the abuser is a woman, steps are taken to show us that she's not actually a bad person, while when it's a man, he is devoid of any redeeming qualities.
 
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Ellis said:
The trope of the woman being assaulted starting to enjoy her abuser's dick is nothing surprising, it's the overall situation itself that isn't portrayed in a positive way as opposed to Gianna's story.

This chapter ends with Lizana laying motionless on the ground and Yoti telling her they will keep doing this anytime he wants. The Gianna chapter ends with her and Ruben not being able to keep their hands off of each other. Gianna is portrayed in a sympathetic manner as a horny widow who just wants to continue her husband's lineage, while Yoti is portrayed as a disgusting rapist who was jealous that Liz was fucking Berto and not him.

Again this isn't exclusive to Zetto's stories, but it's noticeable how when the abuser is a woman, steps are taken to show us that she's not actually a bad person, while when it's a man, he is devoid of any redeeming qualities.
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Berto assult Lizana too and tell me how ended that between them? Also in the chapter 7 of the original sinful lust story Lizana love to be rape by the prisioner and ask for more, the delivery man Luis blackmail Lizana and she enjoying it and was the same whit the principal. You're been to moralist for a simply hentai and fictional story. Lizana loves sex, we all know that, so if Yoti rape her or if she willingly fucks whit him, it's no difference
 
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Berto assult Lizana too and tell me how ended that between them? Also in the chapter 7 of the original sinful lust story Lizana love to be rape by the prisioner and ask for more, the delivery man Luis blackmail Lizana and she enjoying it and was the same whit the principal. You're been to moralist for a simply hentai and fictional story. Lizana loves sex, we all know that, so if Yoti rape her or if she willingly fucks whit him, it's no difference
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Exactly, its pure unadulterated lust!
 
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