Oblivion
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Shes out of air flabbergasted af , hope she takes the pill
or they are going to be absolutely fucked 
.I miss Victoria hope she shows up in AN24 getting piped by Karl and Lucas at the same time.
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[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel
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- big-tits hair-blonde milf mother
- blowjob double-penetration group-sex incest
or they are going to be absolutely fucked .I miss Victoria hope she shows up in AN24 getting piped by Karl and Lucas at the same time.
Mrh69
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We finally have the final images of AN23. And they couldn't be better. Kelly has finally enjoyed a good fuck that has released all the sexual tension she had since she arrived. What's more, I think it's the first time she's been truly happy since she let herself be enveloped by this whole island atmosphere (not even with her sister was she this wild) and letting Dylan cum on their first time together. Let's hope she lets herself go even more and convinces Brandi to start fucking like crazy all over the island, but knowing that Dylan will be there for her to really relax. Next up should be a Brandi-Kelly-Dylan threesome. But now Victoria should appear more, to see how she gets on with her children and husband.
On the other hand, PS bringing up Kelly and her pills gives me the impression that it will lead to another plot where, at some point, Kelly will run out of pills, lose them or the one I would most like to see, that Emily finds out about the deal between Kelly and Dylan and, to spite Kelly, steals them and Kelly suddenly finds herself with no chance of reversing Dylan's last cum on her. I still think that Kelly will get pregnant with Dylan's baby before Brandi and that at some point we will see her with a huge belly and doing yoga on the beach hahaha (but in the still distant future, I hope).
On the other hand, PS bringing up Kelly and her pills gives me the impression that it will lead to another plot where, at some point, Kelly will run out of pills, lose them or the one I would most like to see, that Emily finds out about the deal between Kelly and Dylan and, to spite Kelly, steals them and Kelly suddenly finds herself with no chance of reversing Dylan's last cum on her. I still think that Kelly will get pregnant with Dylan's baby before Brandi and that at some point we will see her with a huge belly and doing yoga on the beach hahaha (but in the still distant future, I hope).
Mrh69
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Warning to all! This is just a summary of Kelly's journey from my point of view. All the images are from AN23 and previous chapters, there is nothing new.
Kelly's journey from her arrival on the island to being under the shade of a tree with her nephew has been relatively long...
...there have been moments of initial surprise...
...of anger...
...of doubt...
...of sisterhood...
...of mischief...
...of curiosity...
...of fear...
...of decision...
...of decisive moves...
...of personal pride...
...of family drama, A LOT OF DRAMA...
...of desperation...
...and finally of lust and sexual desire without barriers on the part of our dear Kelly.
Kelly's journey from her arrival on the island to being under the shade of a tree with her nephew has been relatively long...
...there have been moments of initial surprise...
...of anger...
...of doubt...
...of sisterhood...
...of mischief...
...of curiosity...
...of fear...
...of decision...
...of decisive moves...
...of personal pride...
...of family drama, A LOT OF DRAMA...
...of desperation...
...and finally of lust and sexual desire without barriers on the part of our dear Kelly.
Oblivion
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That pretty much sums up her stay on the island to date.
Mrh69
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I've tried to capture all the relevant moments that have changed her perception since she first met Brandi and Dylan. I know she still has some great moments to give us, but I hope that from now on she'll be more comfortable with herself and not care what others might think. And you were right, Dylan has fucked her so well that it's obvious that she'll never be the same again.
Oblivion
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I love the scene where she told Dylan if his hose was under control and Dylan was like I dont know you tell me lol amazing response.
She not going to be the same after that masterful piped she got , so what is going to happen next maybe shes going to get addicted to Dylans junk or she going to get unhinged on the island and fuck any guy she meets like Dylan does to local females both, hope she turns in a complete nympho until she tries to convince Brandi to do the same telling her shes missing so much pleasure and ecstasy that she will regret it someday.
Oblivion
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Remove Brandi's boob and right hand in this page because the dialogue doesnt makes sense shes in front of them.
I know is still NTR but a simple blowjob would have been so much better (kept as a secret showing how Brandi is getting corrupted slowly) than that forced sex scene between them that ruined her character on the rest of the chapters just look at her in AN23 doing nothing, FUCK CHAPTER 10 SMFH.
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Conquest
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That’s not Brandi’s boob. That’s a reflection
PPanGames
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1. Pretty sure in the first image, that's a reflection of Gina. Compare the thumbs.
2. Nah. If I could, I’d remove Chapter 10 entirely. However, the later chapters wouldn’t make sense without it, and I’d have to rewrite large sections or cut the sex scenes readers look forward to. That entire chapter and arc was unnecessary if we're real here. We could’ve skipped from Brandi sleeping with Dylan again to Kelly receiving the call and arriving at the island directly. But that would mean losing the intervening scenes, which I don’t want. In my version, no cuckolding actually occurs, though Brandi was prepared for it. It’s not ideal, but there’s no fixing it. I hate when NTR is forced on people, especially mid-story. That includes the blowjob.
Oblivion
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1. This chapter gets me so mad everytime that I can't help seeing that force sex scene everywhere lol.
2. I agree with you 100% you hate this chapter as much I do I just giving the one of the least damaging scenarios keeping the bj as a secret and by proxy showing Brandi succumbing slowly the lifestyle of the island , other scenario could have been Brandi just watching both of them fucking Gina while she masturbates, this chapter was created for a rivalry between Dylan and Rory (Pegasus words) he didn't see coming the backlash it created to Brandi character basically, while Dylan is pretty much the same fucking around the island.
You right chapter 10 was unnecessary af , is sad to see the current state of Brandi just there on the shore doing nothing.
Lodon-
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What you described is still NTR, bro; just because Dylan wouldn't know wouldn't change the genre of the scene, just less extreme than what happened.
Also when it comes to Swinging which seems to be what you keep defending, it was never going to work and it would've been always considered NTR because this story started pretending to be an Incest story (mom-son), but as it turns out the autor wanted to just be a better looking Pigking, chapter 9-10 killed this story, so many people back from 8muses left. You put something in between the mother and son; it's NTR, worse, it's the worst kind, mom NTR.
If Pegasus wanted to make this story Swinging and not NTR, he should've started from the beginning, but then no incest crowd would've gotten in; instead, he spent 7 chapters developing his protagonists incestual relationship, just to have the female MC railed by someone else in front of the male MC. That is like a 9/10 on the scale of NTR; your idea just knocks it down to a 7. Dylan not knowing would be a bomb that would explode even worse in the future too.
Pegasus should've wrapped this story of Brandi-Dylan the moment the mother character accepted to have a relationship with her son, then made some epilogue with her pregnant, not even implying sharing; maybe add the aunt if you want to be a completionist; it would've been perfect.
IF he wanted full swinging he should've used a new set of chars, that could've been introduced with Dylan-Brandi and took the mantle of MCs from them to keep the Title going, like Victoria or the other useless characters, then they could START with the swinging, not with the incest, so the NTR would be lighter, much lighter. But yeah, if Pegassus had done this with Brandi, the story simply wouldn't have been as popular back then.
Anyway, I'm only here for morbid curiosity, though I'm happy I'm not the only one. I remember @Gnaparelli from way back when this was good.
@PPanGames I didn't notice your cut before, since I only maintained a minimum attention span here and only delved into the comments when making one, but from what you wrote, you did what Pegasus should've done: isolated the protagonists from the filler and unwanted developments. I will check it out and hit you back.
Oblivion
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You didn't read my comment bro I clearly said the bj scene I proposed is still NTR but if Brandi kept it as a secret wouldn't ruined her character and would have been better than the forced sex scene , a time bomb you say yes but knowing Rory's troll personality Dylan would be like yeah sure dude I believe you lol would have been a funny dynamic to see, I also said Dylan and Rory fucking Gina while Brandi masturbates would have work too, it was just a couple of ideas of how don't ruin the story and her character, I despise chapter 10 to the core and like Ppangames said If I could I would erase it and pass straight to Kelly introduction but you omitted that comment.
You said the swinging idea doesn't work I disagree knowing the lifestyle of the island it was expected to be the case but Pegasus ruined it with chapter 10 (he created that chapter for a rivalry between Rory and Dylan by his words) if that's the case why Brandi is ok that Dylan fucks everyone he wants but she can't do the same thing it doesn't make sense is always funny to see people omitting that detail, why is ok one way only thats very very hypocritical and one of the big problems of this comic, Brandi doesnt considered that as cheating because shes ok with it from the beginning so why Dylan cant do the same tell me, don't forget Brandi got interested in Pete's junk at the beginning , Tom dick when she met him she even touched it and how can we forget the broaden her horizons quote, PS is teasing Brandi's 180 turn for a reason don't you think so no you wrong.
Why using a new set of characters for the swinging and giving them the mantle while the main characters are there it doesn't make sense that would be lame , the point is the MCs interacting with the secondary characters and learning about them and the rules of the place.
This is what chapter 10 took from us Brandi future sexual interactions with Pete Tom and The Monster.
Should have been green light by both sides to avoid NTR not just by Dylan side to do whatever he wants is not fair for Brandi that hypocritical af by Pegasus.
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Oblivion
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That cover is perfect, well as expected this chapter is going to focus on Victoria , after her double bj scene she's absolutely going to get wilder with her sons there's no turning back now.
Dylan has a big chance to fuck her since he was a good impression to her is just a matter of time.
Nippur
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I hope both Brandy and Victoria get wild not only with their sons as to another man in the island. In case of Brandi as it was said in previous posts Pete or Tom, and Victoria after the DP with her sons Dylan or another. I hate seeing Dylan (in case of Brandy) or the moron of Victoria's husband fuck another but the women just restricted to their family.
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