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[Nuvolari]

I'll vouch for Fraylim High Tops to High Heel. It's a effing great story. Best one ever.

Correction: that story is by KK. The original edition was illustrated by Melissa N. KK released a revised version on Patreon, as well as two sequels, which they themselves illustrated.

Fraylim is an excellent artist, one who I have been following for decades, but they had nothing to do with "High Tops to High Heels." They did illustrate several other stories by KK for Sick Puppy Press, however.

 

[Lara Lynn]

Dear Lara Lynn, I have indeed read your works and to be honest, your works on the theme of "sissification" are very good. But what we are pursuing is not the traditional sissfication type of article. I have found that such articles have been bound by a series of "classic formulas", such as being overly obsessed with depicting the humiliation of MC and the so-called "sissy pornography plot", while ignoring the truly important part - the plot, which includes the psychological and physiological changes of MC. (This is not to say that you haven't described this type of content, but that there is already too little description of this type of content, which people who pursue feminization type works don't like.)

At the same time, I must clarify that I also enjoy works with SISSY themes. However, in my opinion, the process of "SISSIFENTION" should be included within the framework of the process of feminization. However, many people prioritize "SISSIFENTION" in reverse, and the process of feminization is only a part of the former. This also leads to such works weakening the plot and specific details, let alone the details of MC's psychological and physiological changes, which is truly regrettable. But if possible, I also hope to discuss relevant content with you. Thank you for your response.

Thank you so much for your thoughtful message—I really appreciate you taking the time to share your perspective so clearly. You're absolutely right that a lot of sissification stories fall into formulaic traps: heavy on humiliation, light on transformation depth. And as much as I adore a bit of sparkle, giggles, and teasing (who doesn’t?), I’m always most excited when a story dives into the why—the inner shifts, the resistance, the unraveling, the moments of craving and confusion. That’s where the real magic happens for me.

When I read feminization stories, I want to feel the emotional evolution. I love seeing characters question themselves, grow (or regress), struggle with identity, and undergo not just forced changes, but moments of unexpected desire. I want to live that process with them, not just skim through a checklist of lipstick, chastity, and frilly panties (though I’d never banish them from the party entirely).

I’m genuinely curious—what kinds of plot beats or character shifts do you find most compelling in feminization? Let’s nerd out about it. I’d be happy to make a sample script together—something a little richer in story and psychology. I think we might enjoy it and this kind of feedback is gold for the community.

 

[timmydg]

Can you explain some specific works? For example, the works that rank in the top 10-15 in your mind, those epic works that use drugs and hypnosis to gradually feminization MC, are really fascinating. By the way, I have already read all of Melissa N's works. Thank you.

I also recommend the author I recently discovered, his name is laristopa, and this is his novel website. I hope you like it.

Laristopa Studio

A place where MTF transformation, complete degradation, and filthy sex coalesce into the ultimate displays of degeneracy.

www.laristopa.com

Oh this going to be fun..... Drugs and Hypnosis huh?

Well "Ladyship" by Keshara fits the bill. It has hypnosis and gradual feminization. It has a great great story. The Hypnosis doesn't seem evil or manipulative at all, which is a rare feat in tg fiction and makes it stand out. In fact the hero Eddie Grayson is quite sympathetic.
Basically the hero Eddie Grayson implants the personality of rich girl Margaret inside the mind of his partner in crime Leonard, in order to score a big heist inside Titanic. Seems like an exciting plot right. Like Titanic movie, it contains a well developed love story.

Another one is "New Direction" by Squidz that also fulfill the criteria of drugs, hypnosis & gradual feminization. You'll like it. I know I did.

"Tg Tony" comics are full of hypnosis, drugs and slow feminization. Stories like "Way to go Oliva", "How Annie and Toni Became BEST FRIENDS FOREVER", "Open Your Eyes, Erica", "The Perfect Heist" & "Let's Feminize My Ex".
In Every TG Tony story contains two characters who are mainstay of every TG Tony comics. One is Aunt Martha the one feminizes the heroine and the second is Annie Garcia who always acts as the bestie to the heroine of the story.

Novel Chef stories like "Clubbing With The Sis", "Uchiha Restoration Project", "Priestly Duties", "Ash's Big Gamble," "Playing for Keeps", "Gone Gyaru" & "Tsunade's Special Training".

look for writer "Wataya" or group "Trans Tribune" with stories like:
1) "Kare no Kanojo ni Natta Boku ~Cool na Danshi ga Josou ni Hamatte Ochiru made~ | How I Became His GF ~A Cool Guy Turned Crossdressing Addict~" (Happy Ending), 2) "Trap 101 - The Fate of an Honour Student Turned Crossdressing Whore -", 3) "Feminisation Committee Nymphomaniac Justice!!", 4) "Tomo Ochi ~My Tragic End After My Fiancée Was Stolen and I Was Turned Into a Female", 5) "Mesu Ochi Hanayome ~Kare ga Kanojo ni Ochita Wake~", 6) "Furyou Shounen no Shitsukekata ~Hentai Josou Maso e no Mesu Ochi Choukyouroku~".

All of these stories involves drugs, hypnosis and gradual feminization. Enjoy!

​

 

[timmydg]

I just realized that 'High Tops to High Heel' is also a work I have read. It is indeed an epic story, and the description of MC's gradual feminization of physiological and psychological changes is the best. One of the few shortcomings of this story is that MC was deceived too thoroughly by the female protagonist, making her appear slightly lacking in intelligence (which is also why I like to add hypnosis elements appropriately in the story. In my eyes, hypnosis is a tool to promote the protagonist's mental changes. Of course, it does not play a decisive role, but it is an indispensable auxiliary tool and makes the story look more reasonable).

The second issue is that there is too little pornographic content. Since it is a story set in adolescence, even with appropriate pornographic content, it can make the story more exciting. The author can use pornographic content to reflect the gradual changes and chaotic details of the protagonist's gender identity and sexual orientation. (Pornographic content doesn't need to be too much, just insert and match the story appropriately.)

Can you recommend more specific stories? thank you.

"Female Protagonist"? Kimberly, the ex-girlfriend of Bobby/Barbie is anything but a protagonist. She is the main villain of the story. The great thing about the story was that it had two compelling antagonist, namely Kimberly and Serena (Bobby older sister). With Serena and Kimberly both trying their best to make Bobby/Barbie life hell, while simultaneously scheming to take each other down. I do think Serena would have redemption arc, while Kimberly would get her poetic justice.

"One of the few shortcomings of this story is that MC was deceived too thoroughly by the female protagonist, making her appear slightly lacking in intelligence (which is also why I like to add hypnosis elements appropriately in the story." Well no one said Bobby/Barbie was a compelling character unlike Serena and Kimberly. The story was interesting because of Kimberly and Serena. They carried the plot forward.

"The second issue is that there is too little pornographic content."—and I actually agree with you. But that’s also why I think KK made the right move. When Barbie finally embraces her gender identity, a sex scene with Josh wouldn’t just be hot—it’d feel earned. That kind of payoff, after all that buildup, would be perfection.

 

[timmydg]

Correction: that story is by KK. The original edition was illustrated by Melissa N. KK released a revised version on Patreon, as well as two sequels, which they themselves illustrated.
Fraylim is an excellent artist, one who I have been following for decades, but they had nothing to do with "High Tops to High Heels." They did illustrate several other stories by KK for Sick Puppy Press, however.

Did KK write any other story besides this one? I think KK is one special writer.

 

[Nuvolari]

Did KK write any other story besides this one? I think KK is one special writer.

At least 13 stories on Sick Puppy Press, mostly illustrated by Fraylim but also by a few other artists:

Store by Author

www.sixpacksite.com

Plus "The Replacement Bride" (with Fraylim) and "High-Tops to High Heels" (with Melissa N) on Lulu.com:

https://www.lulu.com/search?contributor=KK&page=1&pageSize=10&adult_audience_rating=00&category=Fiction

Also, they had a Patreon, where they offered a revised version of "High-Tops to High Heels" with two sequels (all illustrated by themself), as well as several short stories. The Patreon is gone, but you still can find the content on Kemono:

Kemono

kemono.su

 

[Communist Bimbo]

"Female Protagonist"? Kimberly, the ex-girlfriend of Bobby/Barbie is anything but a protagonist. She is the main villain of the story. The great thing about the story was that it had two compelling antagonist, namely Kimberly and Serena (Bobby older sister). With Serena and Kimberly both trying their best to make Bobby/Barbie life hell, while simultaneously scheming to take each other down. I do think Serena would have redemption arc, while Kimberly would get her poetic justice.

"One of the few shortcomings of this story is that MC was deceived too thoroughly by the female protagonist, making her appear slightly lacking in intelligence (which is also why I like to add hypnosis elements appropriately in the story." Well no one said Bobby/Barbie was a compelling character unlike Serena and Kimberly. The story was interesting because of Kimberly and Serena. They carried the plot forward.

"The second issue is that there is too little pornographic content."—and I actually agree with you. But that’s also why I think KK made the right move. When Barbie finally embraces her gender identity, a sex scene with Josh wouldn’t just be hot—it’d feel earned. That kind of payoff, after all that buildup, would be perfection.

I'd say that Kimberly counts as a protagonist. She has pitfalls and moments of teetering on character growth, only to be less astray by her own internalized issues and the misogynistic world that she grows up in.

Barbie's so much more fun in the revised and expanded edition, too. Like, you can see where she has an actual character arc and how toxic masculinity, internalized misogyny and homophobia has led her to not being able to embrace the fact that she's a bisexual trans girl and in love with a boy. I'm not sure when KK plans on returning to writing, but should KK manage to stick the landing and have Barbie come out of all of this chaos as a mature character, then we're in for easily the best story from KK.

 

[104k104]

"Female Protagonist"? Kimberly, the ex-girlfriend of Bobby/Barbie is anything but a protagonist. She is the main villain of the story. The great thing about the story was that it had two compelling antagonist, namely Kimberly and Serena (Bobby older sister). With Serena and Kimberly both trying their best to make Bobby/Barbie life hell, while simultaneously scheming to take each other down. I do think Serena would have redemption arc, while Kimberly would get her poetic justice.

"One of the few shortcomings of this story is that MC was deceived too thoroughly by the female protagonist, making her appear slightly lacking in intelligence (which is also why I like to add hypnosis elements appropriately in the story." Well no one said Bobby/Barbie was a compelling character unlike Serena and Kimberly. The story was interesting because of Kimberly and Serena. They carried the plot forward.

"The second issue is that there is too little pornographic content."—and I actually agree with you. But that’s also why I think KK made the right move. When Barbie finally embraces her gender identity, a sex scene with Josh wouldn’t just be hot—it’d feel earned. That kind of payoff, after all that buildup, would be perfection.

Thank you very much for taking the time to reply to me seriously! Once again, I would like to express my gratitude.

·Firstly, I need to clarify that the term "hypnosis and medication" I mentioned earlier refers more to female hormones and drugs with similar effects. As my first language is not English, this may lead to ambiguity, and I need to provide clarification on this matter.

·Thank you very much for recommending the works. In addition to works such as' Ladyship 'that I have already read, I was pleasantly surprised to find that there are also works that I have not read. To be honest, I personally believe that there is no need to demand justice or evil from the protagonist's motivation for feminization, except for involuntary consent (the so-called "suspicious consent" caused by hypnosis, which I consider to be included in the category of involuntary consent). Even the story of a kind protagonist being manipulated and feminized by an evil villain through conspiracy and calculation is still readable in my opinion - provided that the storytelling is excellent. We are all adults and already have clear concepts of right and wrong, good and evil, so there is no need for excessive moral demands in this regard.

 

[104k104]

"Female Protagonist"? Kimberly, the ex-girlfriend of Bobby/Barbie is anything but a protagonist. She is the main villain of the story. The great thing about the story was that it had two compelling antagonist, namely Kimberly and Serena (Bobby older sister). With Serena and Kimberly both trying their best to make Bobby/Barbie life hell, while simultaneously scheming to take each other down. I do think Serena would have redemption arc, while Kimberly would get her poetic justice.

"One of the few shortcomings of this story is that MC was deceived too thoroughly by the female protagonist, making her appear slightly lacking in intelligence (which is also why I like to add hypnosis elements appropriately in the story." Well no one said Bobby/Barbie was a compelling character unlike Serena and Kimberly. The story was interesting because of Kimberly and Serena. They carried the plot forward.

"The second issue is that there is too little pornographic content."—and I actually agree with you. But that’s also why I think KK made the right move. When Barbie finally embraces her gender identity, a sex scene with Josh wouldn’t just be hot—it’d feel earned. That kind of payoff, after all that buildup, would be perfection.

I agree with the vast majority of your viewpoints, thank you for your correction. Here are my personal opinions and supplements:

·I apologize for the issue regarding the 'female protagonist', as I read this novel over a year ago and some details have become somewhat blurry in my memory. Thank you for your correction.

·I agree with your point of view that the plot and conflicts between the two female characters are also very intriguing. But in my opinion, a work with a feminine theme should also have more ideas when depicting the protagonist and how he steps into the traps designed by others. So I think the author's idea on how to seduce the protagonist into a path of no return is slightly lacking in consideration.

·I have mentioned some of my views on feminized themes, and I believe that for protagonists with strong male self-esteem and excellent masculinity, simple coercion, deception, and extortion are difficult to make them willingly embark on a path of no return. Indeed, I acknowledge that the author can use intricate plot design to trap the protagonist in a chain of traps, forcing him to follow the antagonist's ideas. However, I also believe that once encountering truly outstanding men with masculinity, they will sacrifice their lives for their beliefs. Therefore, in my opinion, normal means are still somewhat lacking and require the use of some abnormal means (such as appropriate hypnosis)

·Finally, regarding the content of pornography, I need to declare that I also oppose excessive pornographic content, and I agree with your point of view. After the protagonist finally accepts their female identity, sexual description can be carried out. But I think before that, some sexual innuendos and mildly erotic plotlines can be added, such as MC gradually losing sexual desire, becoming less interested in women, becoming more sensitive, and even learning how women explore their bodies. In my opinion, these appropriate contents are necessary. May I ask what you think?

 

[104k104]

Thank you so much for your thoughtful message—I really appreciate you taking the time to share your perspective so clearly. You're absolutely right that a lot of sissification stories fall into formulaic traps: heavy on humiliation, light on transformation depth. And as much as I adore a bit of sparkle, giggles, and teasing (who doesn’t?), I’m always most excited when a story dives into the why—the inner shifts, the resistance, the unraveling, the moments of craving and confusion. That’s where the real magic happens for me.

When I read feminization stories, I want to feel the emotional evolution. I love seeing characters question themselves, grow (or regress), struggle with identity, and undergo not just forced changes, but moments of unexpected desire. I want to live that process with them, not just skim through a checklist of lipstick, chastity, and frilly panties (though I’d never banish them from the party entirely).

I’m genuinely curious—what kinds of plot beats or character shifts do you find most compelling in feminization? Let’s nerd out about it. I’d be happy to make a sample script together—something a little richer in story and psychology. I think we might enjoy it and this kind of feedback is gold for the community.

In my opinion, many works with the theme of "Sissification" and even feminization have fallen into another misconception, which is that the characteristics of MC must be submissive, short in stature, and lacking obvious male characteristics. Even in some works with strong hypnotic elements, this "standard configuration" is also a part of "formulaic" in my opinion. Since one of the themes of feminization (including sisification) is "decline", why can't the protagonist be dominant from the beginning? As long as the story does not set the protagonist as a tall boxer with all muscles and body hair, there is ample room for plot development.

 

[104k104]

Oh this going to be fun..... Drugs and Hypnosis huh?

Well "Ladyship" by Keshara fits the bill. It has hypnosis and gradual feminization. It has a great great story. The Hypnosis doesn't seem evil or manipulative at all, which is a rare feat in tg fiction and makes it stand out. In fact the hero Eddie Grayson is quite sympathetic.
Basically the hero Eddie Grayson implants the personality of rich girl Margaret inside the mind of his partner in crime Leonard, in order to score a big heist inside Titanic. Seems like an exciting plot right. Like Titanic movie, it contains a well developed love story.

Another one is "New Direction" by Squidz that also fulfill the criteria of drugs, hypnosis & gradual feminization. You'll like it. I know I did.

"Tg Tony" comics are full of hypnosis, drugs and slow feminization. Stories like "Way to go Oliva", "How Annie and Toni Became BEST FRIENDS FOREVER", "Open Your Eyes, Erica", "The Perfect Heist" & "Let's Feminize My Ex".
In Every TG Tony story contains two characters who are mainstay of every TG Tony comics. One is Aunt Martha the one feminizes the heroine and the second is Annie Garcia who always acts as the bestie to the heroine of the story.

Novel Chef stories like "Clubbing With The Sis", "Uchiha Restoration Project", "Priestly Duties", "Ash's Big Gamble," "Playing for Keeps", "Gone Gyaru" & "Tsunade's Special Training".

look for writer "Wataya" or group "Trans Tribune" with stories like:
1) "Kare no Kanojo ni Natta Boku ~Cool na Danshi ga Josou ni Hamatte Ochiru made~ | How I Became His GF ~A Cool Guy Turned Crossdressing Addict~" (Happy Ending), 2) "Trap 101 - The Fate of an Honour Student Turned Crossdressing Whore -", 3) "Feminisation Committee Nymphomaniac Justice!!", 4) "Tomo Ochi ~My Tragic End After My Fiancée Was Stolen and I Was Turned Into a Female", 5) "Mesu Ochi Hanayome ~Kare ga Kanojo ni Ochita Wake~", 6) "Furyou Shounen no Shitsukekata ~Hentai Josou Maso e no Mesu Ochi Choukyouroku~".

All of these stories involves drugs, hypnosis and gradual feminization. Enjoy!

​

It seems that the vast majority of them are comics, and I have read Wataya's comics a long time ago. Unfortunately, he is indeed an excellent author of feminization themes, but he rarely considers the use of drugs (hormones) and mind control (mainly appropriate hypnosis). Do you have any novels? To be honest, although there are many works in the feminization themed novel section of the forum, I have checked nearly fifty books but none of them are worth reading, let alone the vast majority of them are short stories. This is very regrettable.

 

[timmydg]

I'd say that Kimberly counts as a protagonist. She has pitfalls and moments of teetering on character growth, only to be less astray by her own internalized issues and the misogynistic world that she grows up in.

I mean she is not homophobic, and that's her only redeeming quality. But other than that she is quite a manipulator. I mean she is the one who coerced Bobby to become Barbie. She is the one who used Josh for creating that blog post. She is one who used Josh feelings for Barbie, in order to control him. Just as Kimberly was about to get expose, she expertly put the entire blame on Josh (that was my favorite scene in the entire by the way). Now, Kimberly is using Barbie just to get back at Serena. I mean that is quite villainous.

If you look at what the other villain of the story, Serena did in comparison, it was literally nothing. Serena entire villainy was motivated by the pain she endured when her parents forced her into the dirty and dangerous world of child modelling. KK also included bit of nugget in the passage where Serena seemed to show remorse for her actions toward Barbie.

FYI, I am not against Kimberly having redemption arc. Just saying she is clear villain of the story. And I like her for it. I mean my favorite scene in the entire series was when she put the entire blame of Bobby becoming Barbie on to Josh. That was a masterful stroke.... Chef kiss.... She and Serena are my most favorite character in the story... I really like Kimberly....

Barbie's so much more fun in the revised and expanded edition, too. Like, you can see where she has an actual character arc and how toxic masculinity, internalized misogyny and homophobia has led her to not being able to embrace the fact that she's a bisexual trans girl and in love with a boy. I'm not sure when KK plans on returning to writing, but should KK manage to stick the landing and have Barbie come out of all of this chaos as a mature character, then we're in for easily the best story from KK.

I guess, I'll have to read the revised version. Again I don't think Barbie is a bad character. But she gets overshadowed by amazing characters in Serena, Kimberly and even Jan Van Antwerp the photographer. God KK is seriously good writer that they managed to accurately depict a Flemish character like Jan Van Antwerp.

Do you happen to have a link to the revised and expanded edition of the story in this forum?

 

[timmydg]

At least 13 stories on Sick Puppy Press, mostly illustrated by Fraylim but also by a few other artists:

Store by Author

www.sixpacksite.com

Plus "The Replacement Bride" (with Fraylim) and "High-Tops to High Heels" (with Melissa N) on Lulu.com:

https://www.lulu.com/search?contributor=KK&page=1&pageSize=10&adult_audience_rating=00&category=Fiction

Also, they had a Patreon, where they offered a revised version of "High-Tops to High Heels" with two sequels (all illustrated by themself), as well as several short stories. The Patreon is gone, but you still can find the content on Kemono:

Kemono

kemono.su

Thank so much mate. Now, I can explore other amazing works of KK the legendary writer who went on a hiatus.

 

[timmydg]

Thank you very much for taking the time to reply to me seriously! Once again, I would like to express my gratitude.

·Firstly, I need to clarify that the term "hypnosis and medication" I mentioned earlier refers more to female hormones and drugs with similar effects. As my first language is not English, this may lead to ambiguity, and I need to provide clarification on this matter.

·Thank you very much for recommending the works. In addition to works such as' Ladyship 'that I have already read, I was pleasantly surprised to find that there are also works that I have not read. To be honest, I personally believe that there is no need to demand justice or evil from the protagonist's motivation for feminization, except for involuntary consent (the so-called "suspicious consent" caused by hypnosis, which I consider to be included in the category of involuntary consent). Even the story of a kind protagonist being manipulated and feminized by an evil villain through conspiracy and calculation is still readable in my opinion - provided that the storytelling is excellent. We are all adults and already have clear concepts of right and wrong, good and evil, so there is no need for excessive moral demands in this regard.

Comrade no need to clarify. I clearly understood it.

To be honest, I personally believe that there is no need to demand justice or evil from the protagonist's motivation for feminization, except for involuntary consent (the so-called "suspicious consent" caused by hypnosis, which I consider to be included in the category of involuntary consent). Even the story of a kind protagonist being manipulated and feminized by an evil villain through conspiracy and calculation is still readable in my opinion - provided that the storytelling is excellent. We are all adults and already have clear concepts of right and wrong, good and evil, so there is no need for excessive moral demands in this regard.

Of course these kind of stories are both readable and enjoyable. Most of Wataya stories are just like that and I personally enjoy them. Just because we play gta and do bank robbery...doesn't mean we desire a career of bank robber and professional hitman. FYI, I literally have war lord levels body counts in GTA rofl....Does it mean I desire to become professional ward lord in real life lol?

 

[timmydg]

It seems that the vast majority of them are comics, and I have read Wataya's comics a long time ago. Unfortunately, he is indeed an excellent author of feminization themes, but he rarely considers the use of drugs (hormones) and mind control (mainly appropriate hypnosis). Do you have any novels? To be honest, although there are many works in the feminization themed novel section of the forum, I have checked nearly fifty books but none of them are worth reading, let alone the vast majority of them are short stories. This is very regrettable.

Huzza! A fellow Wataya-ite ...You're indeed of man of culture. Alright, you want novel recommendations. A lot of Joe-six pack stories have female hormones and mind control elements to them. But I have a suspicion that you have already read those.

Erm the group called "kyousei tsf no ohanashi" have lot of stories that involves female hormones and hypnosis. However, they're less of novel of more of picture captions. They're not comics. They're just bunch of pictures with captions.

I'll have to look real hard for the novels with mind-control and female hormones elements to them.

​

 

[104k104]

Huzza! A fellow Wataya-ite ...You're indeed of man of culture. Alright, you want novel recommendations. A lot of Joe-six pack stories have female hormones and mind control elements to them. But I have a suspicion that you have already read those.

As a very outstanding Japanese author, I have read almost all of Wataya's works, and I must admit that his story is indeed excellent in terms of feminization training. But I must point out that apart from a small number of short works created for commission, almost none of his official works contain hypnotic elements, let alone the use of drugs. He even needs to carefully consider whether to use chastity belts on the protagonist, and the theme of most of his stories is the same: extortion（blackmail）.

 

[104k104]

I'll have to look real hard for the novels with mind-control and female hormones elements to them.

The novel you originally recommended, 'High Tops to High Heel', is an excellent epic novel (to be precise, it can be considered an illustrated novel).

·To be honest, I believe that in order to write a well written novel with a feminine theme, rich details and detailed processes are indispensable. This also makes it difficult for short stories to write well on this theme, and excellent feminine themed novels must at least be medium length or long form works.

·In addition, I have found that many novels with feminine themes tend to use formulaic templates to depict MC, which means they lack male characteristics, are short and slender, neutral, have a gentle and obedient personality, and even some people have cross dressing fetish at the beginning of the story. I don't think this is what excellent female themed novels should have. The most important part of such novels is the "decline" of the protagonist's status and physical and mental state, that is, from "male" to "female". If the starting point is not high enough, the process of decline will lack "contrast", excitement, and fun.

I have consulted many novels in the forum's feminist themed novel section, and the vast majority of their problems are that the length is too short, the writing is not exciting enough, and there is a lack of profound descriptions of plot details and character changes. For example, how MC went from being a determined and excellent male heterosexual to gradually becoming a cross dressing heterosexual (at this point, heterosexuality becomes fluid and not determined), and then to becoming a "femboy" who takes drugs (hormones) and gradually blurs his sexual orientation to pansexual (while his interest in women gradually fades)...In this process, with the gradual blurring and confusion of sexual orientation, MC will also be gradually manipulated (mostly without his knowledge) to try to explore and comfort himself in a female way, and then combined with the "female psychology" gradually implanted and slowly "blooming" with the plot and guidance ..... .According to my previous deduction, this process is the essence of excellent feminist themed novels/comics, but unfortunately, I have found that there are very few similar works.

 

[Communist Bimbo]

I mean she is not homophobic, and that's her only redeeming quality. But other than that she is quite a manipulator. I mean she is the one who coerced Bobby to become Barbie. She is the one who used Josh for creating that blog post. She is one who used Josh feelings for Barbie, in order to control him. Just as Kimberly was about to get expose, she expertly put the entire blame on Josh (that was my favorite scene in the entire by the way). Now, Kimberly is using Barbie just to get back at Serena. I mean that is quite villainous.

If you look at what the other villain of the story, Serena did in comparison, it was literally nothing. Serena entire villainy was motivated by the pain she endured when her parents forced her into the dirty and dangerous world of child modelling. KK also included bit of nugget in the passage where Serena seemed to show remorse for her actions toward Barbie.

FYI, I am not against Kimberly having redemption arc. Just saying she is clear villain of the story. And I like her for it. I mean my favorite scene in the entire series was when she put the entire blame of Bobby becoming Barbie on to Josh. That was a masterful stroke.... Chef kiss.... She and Serena are my most favorite character in the story... I really like Kimberly....

I guess, I'll have to read the revised version. Again I don't think Barbie is a bad character. But she gets overshadowed by amazing characters in Serena, Kimberly and even Jan Van Antwerp the photographer. God KK is seriously good writer that they managed to accurately depict a Flemish character like Jan Van Antwerp.

Do you happen to have a link to the revised and expanded edition of the story in this forum?

Kimberly's really flawed as a person, for sure. I just think there's established reason enough to be invested in her growth and maturation so that she and Barbie can at least be friends by the end of the story. Serena and Antwerp fit the role of antagonists far more clearly (especially Antwerp, with his awful behavior).

 

[timmydg]

"

In addition, I have found that many novels with feminine themes tend to use formulaic templates to depict MC, which means they lack male characteristics, are short and slender, neutral, have a gentle and obedient personality, and even some people have cross dressing fetish at the beginning of the story. I don't think this is what excellent female themed novels should have. The most important part of such novels is the "decline" of the protagonist's status and physical and mental state, that is, from "male" to "female". If the starting point is not high enough, the process of decline will lack "contrast", excitement, and fun.

~The thing is that most tg works don't have tag for these sort of stuff. I totally get you. It's totally random and it's upto the author preferences. And that sucks.

I have consulted many novels in the forum's feminist themed novel section, and the vast majority of their problems are that the length is too short, the writing is not exciting enough, and there is a lack of profound descriptions of plot details and character changes. For example, how MC went from being a determined and excellent male heterosexual to gradually becoming a cross dressing heterosexual (at this point, heterosexuality becomes fluid and not determined), and then to becoming a "femboy" who takes drugs (hormones) and gradually blurs his sexual orientation to pansexual (while his interest in women gradually fades)...In this process, with the gradual blurring and confusion of sexual orientation, MC will also be gradually manipulated (mostly without his knowledge) to try to explore and comfort himself in a female way, and then combined with the "female psychology" gradually implanted and slowly "blooming" with the plot and guidance ..... .According to my previous deduction, this process is the essence of excellent feminist themed novels/comics, but unfortunately, I have found that there are very few similar works.

~I am gonna agree with you there... most of tg works are actually quite short. The short length cheats believability of the heroine transformation. Even in movies character development is an important aspect. These tg writers need to up their game on character development stuff. The recent Joe Six Pack story left a bad taste in lot of fans mouth was because Joe didn't dedicated enough pages to character development of the heroine.

 

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Kimberly's really flawed as a person, for sure. I just think there's established reason enough to be invested in her growth and maturation so that she and Barbie can at least be friends by the end of the story. Serena and Antwerp fit the role of antagonists far more clearly (especially Antwerp, with his awful behavior).

Thank you so much for the generous gifts, comrade—I really appreciate it!

I totally agree with you on Van Antwerp being an absolute slimeball of a villain. But Serena as the final boss? Now that’s a fascinating twist! KK really pulled off something remarkable if the writing allows us to walk away with such drastically different takes on who the real villain is. You see Serena; I still see Kimberly. That kind of ambiguity? Sign of a brilliant writer, no doubt.