NBJ
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Loved it. Amazing work. 7/5!
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[Various Authors] Mom Son erotica
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rmdoff
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The first one is better. Looks more like professional book
Ergo
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IMSCULLYNC
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Both are great work. Well done.
Since you asked for a preference, I'll say that the more realistic one (1) is my fav.
In the more realistic one, their faces convey a sense of deeper intimacy and love for one another.
One suggestion (not a criticism):
Since Mara is written to be an EE-cupper, her breasts would be at least twice the size of the current pic.
Even though the pics show her as having a slim figure (and thus smaller band size/bigger cup size) she seems to be more of a 36-C/D.
An EE-cup would be the equivalent of a DDD.
Again, it's not a criticism. The pics are fantastic. In fact, although I generally believe that a D-cup is a starter kit, Mara's figure is very feminine and lovely. Very symmetrical for the picture and in alignment with Jamie. So while I usually believe bigger is better, it might not be for this particular cover photo.
Thanks for sharing. Truly great work. Cheers
KingBe
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Thanks for pointing that out! I went ahead and adjusted the covers to better fit Mara’s description—here they are. Hopefully these versions align more closely with what you had in mind.
IMSCULLYNC
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WOW!!!! I know it was done with AI, but since you gave it the directions I am giving you credit.
You, LITERALLY, have the power to make boobs in photos bigger!!!
You are now....A God!!!
Great work and thanks for the adjustments. The larger boobs look fantastic and still in proportion with her figure.
Wow times 1000!!! Thank you!!!
lamardarnell4
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Hi guys could someone post klrxos show and tell part 2 and also mom's taste part 5
Alex_ghazi
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JackFrost
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Are these out yet? Haven't been on that site in ages, but I thought mom's taste test 4 just came out recently. no?
KenY
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Cjay5454
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It depends. A lot of their stories are very repetitive. If you've seen one of them, you've seen all of them. That being said, clearly they're doing something right, else they would not have the following they do. As for their best stories, I have the following selection:
On Literotica:
- Mom's 5th Wheel Lovin
- The Nest
- BSTC
- Boob's n Boners
- How Mom Made Him State Champ
- Mother's Stallion
On Subscribestar:
- BSTC Babymaking Center
- Learning All About Sex From Mom
- Going Off The Rails With Mom
- Mom's Formula For Sexual Exploration
- The Long RIde Home With Mom
- Chronicles of the baby making factory
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sexsutra
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It's my personal opinion, I have always preferred older Klrxo version from literotica. The writing style was much better. Lit stories contains good elements, build-up & conclusion. Nowadays it's all about 4-5 pages of background build-up and 50 pages of repetitive sex description. In fact the earlier Subscribstar stories were closely resembling to literotica ones. Rest of them have gone down on quality drastically.
BTW few recommendations - Mom's Roommate, Mom's 5th Wheel Lovin, The Nest, Boobs n Boners, Momma's Little Snuggle-Bear, Lost in Space...with Mom etc
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rmdoff
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You literally has the author's' name in the files' name - danzinman , but yeah account was deleted on Lit
BUT! We always have another option - here you go
Oms
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Mother-Son stories.
www.literotica.com
www.literotica.com
www.literotica.com
My Son, The Sleepwalker - Taboo/Incest - Literotica.com
Sleepwalking Son mounts Mom, Dad is powerless to stop it.
My Beautiful Kinky Mother - Story Series - Literotica.com
A 5-part Story Series by relaxwouldya.
You Couldn't Handle Me - Story Series - Literotica.com
A 8-part Story Series by TheTalkMan.
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