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[Emory Ahlberg] Comics

[Emory Ahlberg] Homecoming 30, I was deeply drawn into the story, amazing 😼

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So Kris doesn't want Ben's help to take Bella's operation down but dragging someone to replace her keeping the circle. WOW.
 
She (Homecoming) is so pretty...but what the hell is this story about?
Don't know much, it is like man forced to become women then Sent to his home, after that bla bla bla bla ........ Wife now dating with other man and she got shoked while she is also having a affaire with other man ,....... I guess, I am not sure , i dropped emroy ahelberg's comics long ago
 
Don't know much, it is like man forced to become women then Sent to his home, after that bla bla bla bla ........ Wife now dating with other man and she got shoked while she is also having a affaire with other man ,....... I guess, I am not sure , i dropped emroy ahelberg's comics long ago
Most of the comics have become quite Netlix-like.... Every chapter ends in a cliffhanger and the story drags on and on for too long... Taylor Made and Half Sisters are the only series that have a normal pace (well, Half Sisters not so much tbh but at least the narrative is great). Jack and Jill has lost most of its edge in my opinion... Ever since Phase 7 ended, it's gotten more and more convoluted
 
Most of the comics have become quite Netlix-like.... Every chapter ends in a cliffhanger and the story drags on and on for too long... Taylor Made and Half Sisters are the only series that have a normal pace (well, Half Sisters not so much tbh but at least the narrative is great). Jack and Jill has lost most of its edge in my opinion... Ever since Phase 7 ended, it's gotten more and more convoluted
Facts. And I bet , emroy herself don't know much of the jack&jill . It is now more like those daily Shop which has no perticular direction, just make next episode out of nothing, and it's continue. I believe, when i will take my last breath and if emroy still alive, Jack & jill might be still continue. Until emroy retire or left the Earth.
 
What i feel bad that , with this my art quality and story making talent, emroy could have produce some of the greatest gender Bender comic ever created, but ...... Unfortunately she is doing somthing not very attractive or enjoyable.

I think she should take some rest, and refresh her brain and start a new
 
I agree the stories are all dragging on and our becoming hard to stay interested in, but the artwork is still great. Just look at Nick, to my mind a cross between Ashley Judd and Alyssa Milano in their prime. Emroy knows how to create a fantasy world, even if that world kind of sucks.
 
Facts. And I bet , emroy herself don't know much of the jack&jill . It is now more like those daily Shop which has no perticular direction, just make next episode out of nothing, and it's continue. I believe, when i will take my last breath and if emroy still alive, Jack & jill might be still continue. Until emroy retire or left the Earth.
"Half Sisters" has a straightforward premise: Nick is forced to become Nikki, Zack's girlfriend.

Everything in the story -every character, including Sandy- revolves around that central transformation. This focused narrative allows for a larger cast, as each character exists to support the main plot. We never lose sight of what truly matters: Nikki’s journey.

In contrast, "J&J" moved beyond Jill some time ago. She came to terms with her womanhood in Phase 7 and embraced her sexuality early in Phase 8. Since then, the story's focus has shifted toward Second Dawn.

You can afford deep character development when the plot remains simple. But as the story becomes more complex, it's important to start resolving character arcs and avoid introducing too many new characters. Otherwise, the narrative risks losing direction. Which is what has been happening with J&J for a while.
 
A good summation of the problem with J&J, too many plot threads and characters introduced, not enough resolutions

By contrast I find Homecoming much easier to follow, same with Taylor Made and Half Sisters
 
A good summation of the problem with J&J, too many plot threads and characters introduced, not enough resolutions

By contrast I find Homecoming much easier to follow, same with Taylor Made and Half Sisters
She should have just finished Jack and Jill and then started a new story about bringing down the organisation with Jill and supporting characters.
As it is they're still showing new transformations and twisted ways people are turned against their will in between the main story beats so it isn't a total write off.
 
new story about bringing down the organisation
That's assuming Emory follows the old formula of 'Evil empire' is always defeated.
Perhaps Second dawn are never taken down, to mirror real life evils that go on forever.

If reading for expected resolutions/climax material, there are infinite creators supplying mindless rubbish.
Emory is taking the less traveled path.

Immense thought has been put into these works.
The kind of care rarely seen in Porn authors.

Authenticity and reality, not just story, but imagery.
 
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