Nippur
Well-known member
Mate you have to start the post with Warning this post gives some spoilersAlright, finally got a chance to read the new chapter and here is my ridiculously asinine review of it:
- First off, I had a lot of fun with it. It is not often that a porn comic elicits a genuine reaction from me. Perhaps a smile or a thought of "that's funny," but I actually laughed a few times throughout the chapter.
- I have noticed that the creators have incorporated methods that show movement, i.e. blurry images behind the characters to simulate running. I liked how this was used to show Amanda running to her house.
- I had a laugh when she fell on her head. We need to see more of that type of humor.
- We could tell that the police were going to show up from the cover page, but given that a cop happened to be driving by as Amanda was getting to her house, the panel where Father Elijah tells Isabella to call the police seemed unnecessary.
- It's nice that more characters' last names are being revealed. Last week we found out that Cynthia's last name is Laurent and now we know Amanda's last name is Tyle. I'd love to know Sonia's and Nancy's next.
- While we don't know what Benjamin told the cop to get him to leave, my best guess is that he promised him sex with Amanda based on the officer's reaction.
- Going off of this, I was expecting the cop to catch Amanda and for Amanda to offer to have sex with the cop right there in the bushes to avoid going to jail. I think this would've been a nice alternative instead of Benjamin showing up to have sex with Amanda.
- Some of you know that I hate filler episodes and this was one of them, but I believe this is the proper way to do an episode that advances the plot without showing any sex. It was a mix of humor and tension that made me forget about any sex scenes. I don't know how long the creators plan on doing these comics, but I'm sure most of us would like to see more story progression throughout the company's titles.
- Finally, while I'm satisfied with how things went, I'd be lying if I didn't say I was a bit disappointed that Isabella didn't actually confront Amanda right there and then. I'd like to see Isabella tell Amanda that thanks to her, Isabella now knows the pleasures of bestiality. I was under the impression that we were building towards this, but it seems it's being pushed further out. For how long, who knows. I'm sure were now going to go through 3 chapters of Amanda and Benjamin having sex, followed by 2 chapters of Amanda having sex with her dad the next morning before we see any hint of where the story is going next.
