[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

[Oblivion]

It would be a breath of fresh air if, now that Gina has reappeared, we could see some flashbacks to her origins and her family here on the island. I seem to recall that it was her parents who founded this resort. It would be interesting to see how she became the woman she is today. Or at least see other characters interacting with Kelly, like Monica, the fitness model from Miami.

A Gina prequel fuck yeah, about Kelly she needs to get free from Dylan and have fun independently asap because shes going the same boring way Brandi does, interact with not just with girls also with guys like Tom The Monster but by himself and see her wild side unchained.

 

[Rian]

Oh boy get ready https://f95zone.to/threads/pegasus-smith-collection-2024-02-16-pegasus-smith.48395/post-19945666 and give me your opinion

Yep. I know you're gonna hate me for saying this out loud. But p.s must take a break from this story because he has hit rock bottom.
He needs to take at least 1 or 2 months off this series, work on some underrated stories like Unintended Consequences then return to a.n with solid bangers.
Otherwise he's headed on the same gutter hole like daval and even pigking.

 

[Oblivion]

Yep. I know you're gonna hate me for saying this out loud. But p.s must take a break from this story because he has hit rock bottom.
He needs to take at least 1 or 2 months off this series, work on some underrated stories like Unintended Consequences then return to a.n with solid bangers.
Otherwise he's headed on the same gutter hole like daval and even pigking.

I knew you gonna love Vics fate no dude I dont blame you for thinking that way feeling so frustrated but at the same time I dont want AN to stop, the only sensical concrete solution is giving Brandi the 180 she desperately needs spice up this shit and make Au Naturel Great Again .

 

[Rian]

I knew you gonna love Vics fate no dude I dont blame you for thinking that way feeling so frustrated but at the same time I dont want AN to stop, the only sensical concrete solution is giving Brandi the 180 she desperately needs spice up this shit and make Au Naturel Great Again .

Not possible. We both know p.s screwed up in chapter 10 for the sake of little extra .
And since then his subs have probably threatened him to...
And I don't blame them. Chapter 10 was an absolute bull which ruined the whole series, forever.
And I'll always say that sometimes taking time off allows the writer to come up with fresh ideas. The way the story has been progressing, ps will screw up even more if he ever goes to the direction that you have been suggesting. His storytelling is so bad that he'll...

 

[Oblivion]

Not possible. We both know p.s screwed up in chapter 10 for the sake of little extra .
And since then his subs have probably threatened him to...
And I don't blame them. Chapter 10 was an absolute bull which ruined the whole series, forever.
And I'll always say that sometimes taking time off allows the writer to come up with fresh ideas. The way the story has been progressing, ps will screw up even more if he ever goes to the direction that you have been suggesting. His storytelling is so bad that he'll...

He did chapter 10 the wrong way by forcing it you know It I know it everyone knows it , so you agree with my suggestion but also you think PS will ruin it even more not because of the suggestion but because of his storytelling? If thats the case I agree but what other choice he has , AN is his golden cow TSB his second one and the rest are basically fillers I know you like UC and would be cool to see more of that but thats basically it.

 

[pazzdan]

There are a lot of things to do yet!

Brandi with 2 or 3 boys togheter...Maybe Carl and Lukas with Dylan ( never happened until now Brandi or Kelly with 2 or more cocks at same time if I remember well)

Kelly with her virgin ass...lesbianism with Vic Brandi and Kelly

Swapping moms.. ...

Brandi in a gloryhole while Dylan fuck Kelly watching mom on duty

Vic in a trio with boys or Tom

Vic try anal with Tom in front of son


Anyway,all incest situation or very close

 

[meteor]

Unless the creator takes into account the opinions of the readers and resets the story's character model and narrative.... But this probability is very low. Readers have too many and diverse ideas, and creators cannot satisfy most readers. I still hope to combine the two 'most suitable materials' together. But what kind of material is the most suitable? The beauty of power! Can't the male character have a big belly and the female character's breasts fall onto their belly button?

 

[Rian]

He did chapter 10 the wrong way by forcing it you know I know it everyone knows it , so you agree with my suggestion but also you think PS will ruin it even more not because of the suggestion but because of his storytelling? If thats the case I agree but what other choice he has , AN is his golden cow TSB his second one and the rest are basically fillers I know you like UC and would be cool to see more of that but thats basically it.

Yeah. In the end these creators are more into than storytelling.
Then again when did porn became storytelling based stuff?
Other than some serialized japanese works, porn is mostly about make in any way possible.

 

[Oblivion]

AN 29 full cover by almighty Trile3

He was telling the truth the all time this shit looks like some kind of ritual, hope it goes in a interesting path...THIS IS IT PS JUST FUCKING DO IT.

 

[Rian]

AN 29 full cover by almighty Trile3

He was telling the truth the all time this shit looks like some kind of ritual, hope it goes in a interesting path...THIS IS IT PS JUST FUCKING DO IT.

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You're gonna be dissapointed again, pal.

 

[Oblivion]

You're gonna be dissapointed again, pal.

I know Im just encouraging his pathetic existence to finally grow some balls thats all

 

[Bellerophon]

AN 29 full cover by almighty Trile3

He was telling the truth the all time this shit looks like some kind of ritual, hope it goes in a interesting path...THIS IS IT PS JUST FUCKING DO IT.

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Yes. It is their annual beach party. Everyone drinks the magic potion and have sex..

 

[Oblivion]

Yes. It is their annual beach party. Everyone drinks the magic potion and have sex..

Annual beach party? so thats why The Master bitches are there, makes total sense now hope you right because the lack of orgies is unbelievable.

 

[Nippur]

Yes. It is their annual beach party. Everyone drinks the magic potion and have sex..

Yes Brandi only will take Dylan's Cock while he has intercouse with every woman in the island and Tom with Gina and other women skipping Brandi

 

[Oblivion]

Yes Brandi only will take Dylan's Cock while he has intercouse with every woman in the island.

Dude that sounds so boring and lame while Tom is there available perfect occasion for Dylan to give Brandi the blessing (Gina can help with the cause) and enjoy together with the locals.

 

[Nippur]

Dude that sounds so boring and lame while Tom is there available perfect occasion for Dylan to give Brandi the blessing and enjoy together with the locals.

I hope I am wrong because that should be the direction, if the story is about Brandi and Dylan embracing the local's style of life.

 

[Oblivion]

I hope I am wrong because that should be the direction, if the story is about Brandi and Dylan embracing the local's style of life.

Yeah yeah I get your point since PS just keeps dissapointing with the story and at the same time wasting character potential like Tom.

 

[Oblivion]

Yeah. In the end these creators are more into than storytelling.
Then again when did porn became storytelling based stuff?
Other than some serialized japanese works, porn is mostly about make in any way possible.

I can tell you one but is a hentai called Bible Black , that one is not just sex it also has a interesting story and great music the main theme is a banger.

Japanese overall are so creative in comparison to the weak minded woke western fucks that's a fact.

 

[Edd085]

AN 29 full cover by almighty Trile3

He was telling the truth the all time this shit looks like some kind of ritual, hope it goes in a interesting path...THIS IS IT PS JUST FUCKING DO IT.

Sorry, but this comic 3D Porn book cover is one of the most beautiful... and erotic of all the Au Naturel covers.

Yeah, Brandi truly deserves to be fulfilled, in every way, with other men and women.

I'm going to start a petition right now : "Free Brandi ! Free Brandi !"

 

[Oblivion]

Sorry, but this comic 3D Porn book cover is one of the most beautiful... and erotic of all the Au Naturel covers.

Yeag, Brandi truly deserves to be fulfilled, in every way, with other men and women.

I'm going to start a petition right now : "Free Brandi ! Free Brandi !"

Why you sorry I agree with that this is a great cover , FREE BRANDI