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Innocent Kelly Part One by dreamrtalescomics

Okay.. we know that we can’t demand anything.. and it would be wrong to do so.. but I do hope someone gonna ā€œ for a better word ā€œ give in and give us part 5 of this series.. it would be prescient indeed…!
 
Here you go. IK5

I hate the breakdown of reality. I know we are in a world where AR is real but in order to buy into the scenario the rest of the story should be grounded in a sense of reality. When I go to the doctor I don't see people having sex or nude women walking around the hallway.

I also really dislike the teasing. This has been an argument of mine for a long time. If you are going to establish a conflict then follow through. You cannot just have your characters suddenly change their mind and back off.

What happened in this installment to justify an entire comic? What happened that furthered the plot?

Enjoy!
 

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