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Innocent Kelly Part One by dreamrtalescomics
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alecleamus
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Ah! I love Herman's Hermits. I have one degree of separation from them. Great music. Got it. Thanks for explaining.
alecleamus
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Here you go. IK5
I hate the breakdown of reality. I know we are in a world where AR is real but in order to buy into the scenario the rest of the story should be grounded in a sense of reality. When I go to the doctor I don't see people having sex or nude women walking around the hallway.
I also really dislike the teasing. This has been an argument of mine for a long time. If you are going to establish a conflict then follow through. You cannot just have your characters suddenly change their mind and back off.
What happened in this installment to justify an entire comic? What happened that furthered the plot?
Enjoy!
I hate the breakdown of reality. I know we are in a world where AR is real but in order to buy into the scenario the rest of the story should be grounded in a sense of reality. When I go to the doctor I don't see people having sex or nude women walking around the hallway.
I also really dislike the teasing. This has been an argument of mine for a long time. If you are going to establish a conflict then follow through. You cannot just have your characters suddenly change their mind and back off.
What happened in this installment to justify an entire comic? What happened that furthered the plot?
Enjoy!
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alecleamus
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Oh and the reason no one posted this is because readers are wising up to DT. So customers are not buying his comics like they used to.
LocoMoco
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I agree, I'm sick and tired of this story and we still getting a 6th chapter is insane and hoping it's the last chapter and hope we go back to Yard Work style stories
LocoMoco
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Give me your thoughts on it.
Mine, it was inevitable that Kelly shrank the nurse. Now what is the endgame of this story. I really hope Dreamtales doesn't continue this story anymore. It's not as famous as they think it is. I miss Yard Work and more growth stories. I feel like this story run it's course. If they continue to do this story then it's time for a hiatus. Give us something else. I only bought this chapter cause I was fed up waiting for more than a month not because I was excited for more story. If anything I want a refund. It is not worth $10. I would rather pay for a remake of Yard work than Innocent Kelly.
Mine, it was inevitable that Kelly shrank the nurse. Now what is the endgame of this story. I really hope Dreamtales doesn't continue this story anymore. It's not as famous as they think it is. I miss Yard Work and more growth stories. I feel like this story run it's course. If they continue to do this story then it's time for a hiatus. Give us something else. I only bought this chapter cause I was fed up waiting for more than a month not because I was excited for more story. If anything I want a refund. It is not worth $10. I would rather pay for a remake of Yard work than Innocent Kelly.
Clumpplump
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Dreamtales likes to recycle storylines, and this one seems most similar to the Little Joker. That gives me a bit of hope for the ending since at least in that one the AP is permanent and they commit with the relationship too.
But yeah, the story is becoming more and more repetitive and drawn out. Also, it's subjective, but I'm more of a fan of AP/growth than AR/shrinking so the story's constant focus on the latter makes this feels like a bunch of near misses to me. (That's a problem for pretty much all of Dreamtales' more recent stuff though lol)
alecleamus
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Yes, that is the DT MO. And it one person btw. Not a team. This is why you see the same fantasy played out over and over and over. Thanks for sharing.
fluff
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I find it hard to take any of these stories seriously. Some art is nice, especially some of what Bojay did. The stories have never been great imo. Then again if it's all thought up by one person, I'm kind of impressed it's so consistent. It can't be easy coming up with all these stories. It's pretty consistently one each month. That's a lot of writing and planning for one person. Even if you don't have to draw it yourself and you give yourself some breathing room by doing multiples in a series.
There is this other comic distributor 'fan' comics. They run a bunch like shrinkfan for example. The trouble there is that a bunch of comics never get a sequel, but most do end on a cliffhanger. Personally I like DT's approach better. Release quite a few within a series before moving on.
About the Innocent Kelly series:
Personally I like sw and ar. I even think mind control is pretty cool. It's just a little hampered by the clumsy writing. Which again, if this is all one person I kinda understand. I almost feel bad for pointing out that according to the story's own rules Kelly couldn't shrink adult women. So as far as we know she shouldn't have been able to shrink the nurse. She could shrink her mom because of the shot that same nurse gave her. Now that I think of it, the nurse is like the cause of almost everything going on in this story.
As a final comment. Eventhough I understand the 'quality' of the comics, I don't think it was a good idea for DT to anounce this with: "There will definitely be more growth scenes coming up. So GTS lovers, please stay tuned!" if it's not going to have growth in it. It will just make people justifyably dissapointed.
Thanks Locomoco for sharing this. Hopefully you found something interesting reading what we think.
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