Hey everyone!
Another nice update! I really enjoyed this chapter, and now Iām even more curious to see where the story goes next.
I have a feeling our heroine could get herself into all kinds of trouble during this upcoming spa day.

We already know from earlier chapters that a simple spa visit can turn into⦠well⦠almost anything! So there are plenty of possibilities here.
One thing I did recently was go back and reread the very beginning of the story. I revisited the
transformation prank, and then the chapters where everyone was trying to figure out how to take the next step before the trip to Mexico.
Honestly⦠after reading those parts again, this new spa chapter feels like the perfect opportunity to revisit that whole transformation storyline.
Iād absolutely love to see a small update there. Not necessarily a huge leap, but maybe another little step forward. I think it would tie in beautifully with everything weāve seen so far and remind us how far our heroine has already come.
There are still a few things I would probably tweak here and there, but Iāll save those thoughts until we have another chapter. Iād rather see a little more of the direction first before making a bigger comment.
As always, thank you for sharing your work with us. Iām already looking forward to the next update.
XO,
Lexa