Hey everyone!
Another nice update! I really enjoyed this chapter, and now I’m even more curious to see where the story goes next.
I have a feeling our heroine could get herself into all kinds of trouble during this upcoming spa day.

We already know from earlier chapters that a simple spa visit can turn into… well… almost anything! So there are plenty of possibilities here.
One thing I did recently was go back and reread the very beginning of the story. I revisited the
transformation prank, and then the chapters where everyone was trying to figure out how to take the next step before the trip to Mexico.
Honestly… after reading those parts again, this new spa chapter feels like the perfect opportunity to revisit that whole transformation storyline.
I’d absolutely love to see a small update there. Not necessarily a huge leap, but maybe another little step forward. I think it would tie in beautifully with everything we’ve seen so far and remind us how far our heroine has already come.
There are still a few things I would probably tweak here and there, but I’ll save those thoughts until we have another chapter. I’d rather see a little more of the direction first before making a bigger comment.
As always, thank you for sharing your work with us. I’m already looking forward to the next update.
XO,
Lexa