[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

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Au Naturel chapters 1 - 20 Original HQ enjoy.
 

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all these gifs posted from pegasus under the name "wicksel" are dead end for au naturel. even these pages an1-20 show the good days are gone and the occasional presence of brandi make things worse. for me the subs of 5$ and 10$ must change to 1$ and raise when brandi appear. becuase "au naturel is brandi" ...
 
all these gifs posted from pegasus under the name "wicksel" are dead end for au naturel. even these pages an1-20 show the good days are gone and the occasional presence of brandi make things worse. for me the subs of 5$ and 10$ must change to 1$ and raise when brandi appear. becuase "au naturel is brandi" ...
True.. last year all authirs, not just Pegasus changes and not make good chapters.. all characters are fat and overweight...size of the butts and boobs are biger and bigger :D Cocks are like 3rd leg.. and all shit background...i was hope with Ai they will gonaa make more realistic things..but no.. and because that i close my gold acc and dont wanna to give any money to Penisus
 
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Cmon PS is time for Brandi to suck a local dick as a new member of the island and Rory would be perfect for that taking in consideration that was teased in chapter 10, we want to see her getting unhinged.

On AN2 68, Rory must be horny as hell as he dumps the content of his balls within six seconds on Brandi's face, covering her with a full load of cum....😃
I dont blame him tbh lol.

There are worse cases than Josie. Dani and Petra aren't being used at all, but there's also Monica, who wants to get pregnant. Dylan could help her. :)
Some were used just once or twice like Momoko Carmen Kayla The Unnamed girl aka XX Liana Lucia Courtney Rosie too sigh.
 
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Cmon PS is time for Brandi to suck a local dick as a new member of the island and Rory would be perfect for that taking in consideration that was teased in chapter 10, we want to see her getting unhinged.


I dont blame him tbh lol.

Momoko Carmen Kayla The Unnamed girl aka XX Liana Lucia Courtney Rosie too sigh.

The orgy was a prime moment for underused characters to get some fun time, But nope
 
The orgy was a prime moment for underused characters to get some fun time, But nope
Tell me about it what a dissapointment, Petra didnt fuck anyone there for example are you fucking kidding me wtf Emily Kayla Courtney Rosie didnt show up at all and on top of that instead of continuing the ceremony in chapter 30 like most of us wanted he instead finished in a rushed way just to create a new Victoria drama🤦‍♂️.
 
Tell me about it what a dissapointment, Petra didnt fuck anyone there for example are you fucking kidding me wtf Emily Kayla Courtney Rosie didnt show up at all and on top of that instead of continuing the ceremony in chapter 30 like most of us wanted he instead finished in a rushed way just to create a new Victoria drama🤦‍♂️.
It’s a shame that PS has somewhat neglected Dylan.
Even before meeting the Master, women want to sleep with him: Josie, Carmen, Camilla, Courtney, Momoko, and Monica.
Gina thinks he has the potential to become a real stud. I wonder if it wasn't Gina who asked Ann to send Dylan to the Master.
After being initiated by the Master, Dylan is capable of making love to his mother for over five hours and giving her multiple orgasms.
Ayanna and Courtney acknowledge that Dylan has become an exceptional lover since his initiation.
Petra is so impressed by his skills that she wants to take Kelly's place in the fellatio contest.
Naturally, his mother and aunt can't get enough of him.
One would expect all the women he hasn't slept with yet to be chasing after him.
And yet, he hasn't slept with any of them. The last woman he had a first sexual encounter with was Ann, in episode AN23. That makes seven chapters without a single new conquest; it’s disappointing for a sex god.

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It’s a shame that PS has somewhat neglected Dylan.
Even before meeting the Master, women want to sleep with him: Josie, Carmen, Camilla, Courtney, Momoko, and Monica.
Gina thinks he has the potential to become a real stud. I wonder if it wasn't Gina who asked Ann to send Dylan to the Master.
After being initiated by the Master, Dylan is capable of making love to his mother for over five hours and giving her multiple orgasms.
Ayanna and Courtney acknowledge that Dylan has become an exceptional lover since his initiation.
Petra is so impressed by his skills that she wants to take Kelly's place in the fellatio contest.
Naturally, his mother and aunt can't get enough of him.
One would expect all the women he hasn't slept with yet to be chasing after him.
And yet, he hasn't slept with any of them. The last woman he had a first sexual encounter with was Ann, in episode AN23. That makes seven chapters without a single new conquest; it’s disappointing for a sex god.

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The story should've focused on Dylan and his interactions with the natives & his Mom & Aunt (Should've introduced his Gran too).

Once he started bringing new characters in then it started to go all over the place.
 
It’s a shame that PS has somewhat neglected Dylan.
Even before meeting the Master, women want to sleep with him: Josie, Carmen, Camilla, Courtney, Momoko, and Monica.
Gina thinks he has the potential to become a real stud. I wonder if it wasn't Gina who asked Ann to send Dylan to the Master.
After being initiated by the Master, Dylan is capable of making love to his mother for over five hours and giving her multiple orgasms.
Ayanna and Courtney acknowledge that Dylan has become an exceptional lover since his initiation.
Petra is so impressed by his skills that she wants to take Kelly's place in the fellatio contest.
Naturally, his mother and aunt can't get enough of him.
One would expect all the women he hasn't slept with yet to be chasing after him.
And yet, he hasn't slept with any of them. The last woman he had a first sexual encounter with was Ann, in episode AN23. That makes seven chapters without a single new conquest; it’s disappointing for a sex god.

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This is the reason why I want Dylan Brandi and Kelly to have independent adventures and being locals is the perfect chance to do it, on that way we can see more use of the side characters previously mentioned above but PS doesnt have imagination at all just imagine watching Dylan fucking Josie Dani Rosie Petra Shonda while Brandi gets fucked by Tom (1 on 1 this time) The Monster Pete Darnell and Kelly gets fucked by Rory Diego Pete Tom Andre etc.

PS has all the tools to give us a lot of chapters exploring those characters, is time to get wild and leave the drama behind after Vic scenario smfh.

The story should've focused on Dylan and his interactions with the natives & his Mom & Aunt (Should've introduced his Gran too).

Once he started bringing new characters in then it started to go all over the place.
Now is Brandi and Kelly turn to have lots of sexual interactions with the locals just like Dylan did since day 1.
 
This is the reason why I want Dylan Brandi and Kelly to have independent adventures and being locals is the perfect chance to do it, on that way we can see more use of the side characters previously mentioned above but PS doesnt have imagination at all just imagine watching Dylan fucking Josie Dani Rosie Petra Shonda while Brandi gets fucked by Tom (1 on 1 this time) The Monster Pete Darnell and Kelly gets fucked by Rory Diego Pete Tom Andre etc.

PS has all the tools to give us a lot of chapters exploring those characters, is time to get wild and leave the drama behind after Vic scenario smfh.


Now is Brandi and Kelly turn to have lots of sexual interactions with the locals just like Dylan did since day 1.

At least they're core characters and would make for fun stories like Dylan, Kelly & Brandi fucks Rory & his family.

It's focusing on characters outside the Main 3 that's dragging it down IMO.
 
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