Oblivion
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Victoria drama is dragging the story a lot not the other side characters, on the contrary we want to see more of them.
[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel
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Cropsy13
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I meant the Victoria stuff
I'd be OK with a chapter or two about some of the natives that haven't been focused on like the Asian family for instance, They had a good scene but then vanished.
Nippur
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I think an entire Chapter just to repeat the drama Victoria-Lukas-Carl is a waste of time, and I love Vic
Oblivion
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So I agree then Victoria didnt need a new drama so soon Kelly is the one who needs spotlight away from Dylan to embrace the wild lifestyle by herself maybe Petra can help her, yeah Momoko Shigeo Carmen Diego Monica Andre Shonda etc would be interesting to see them involved with The Wilsons.
Cropsy13
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I agree Kelly needs some focus so she can learn to embrace the Island's way of life
alldicker453
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Okay I'll play the Devils Advocate. I think PS is turning the story in a way to arrange Victoria and her family return back to the island. And he can't just do that without making an accident-plot first. So I can see stranded island plot as kinda necessary in that way. I'm not enjoying this chapter much like the rest of the people here but I see the drama being necessary to bring Vic back to island.
cupcake_cream01
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But here is a fact. Bringing the whole Victoria family again to island will not be a genuine stuff. None cares pf them. Island is full of islanders and their stories matter most. This swidish family feels so boring. Brandi's adventure as an islander will be an interesting thing. Kelly and Dyland should look up their own path. PS should leave Victoria affection. Boggy and shaggy feeling. Do not fit in any part of the story from the start til now.
Oblivion
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Shes being annoying and jealous all over the place instead of being the wild sister she brag about previously.
Well thats the only explanation to this drama to fix his stupid decision in chapter 29 by restrict her to just Lukas but this could happen way after so he could continue the ceremony the most interesting plot in the comic instead btw, chapter 30 should have been more about the orgy but he fumbled it in a very rushed weak way in favor of Victoria new soup opera
.Well a lot of users would love to see Carl and Lukas fucking Brandi and Kelly while Dylan takes care of Victoria including me, I agree that Brandi is being such a boring character all because of chapter 10 obviously and Kelly is going to the same path while Dylan has all the fun with the locals thats not right at all PS better change this and the resident card the sisters has is the perfect reason to do it and make them wild and unhinged.
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Cropsy13
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Shes being annoying and jealous all over the place instead of being the wild sister she brag about previously.
Well thats the only explanation to this drama to fix his stupid decision in chapter 29 by restrict her to just Lukas but this could happen way after so he could continue the ceremony the most interesting plot in the comic instead btw, chapter 30 should have been more about the orgy but he fumbled it in a very rushed weak way in favor of Victoria new soup opera
Well a lot of users would love to see Carl and Lukas fucking Brandi and Kelly while Dylan takes care of Victoria including me, I agree that Brandi is being such a boring character all because of chapter 10 obviously and Kelly is going to the same path while Dylan has all the fun with the locals thats not right at all PS better change this and the resident card the sisters has is the perfect reason to do it and make them wild and unhinged.
I forgot she was considered the wild one
Oblivion
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She bragged about constantly her wild colleges days doing crazy shit but here in the island shes being so insecure and jealous wtf such a waste but PS can still fix this inconsistency using the resident card.I forgot she was considered the wild one
zaxxon
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She was never "wild one".Only Kelly think that she was wild one.Comparing to Brandi on mainland,who married first partner and get pregnant,Kelly was wilder.But on island Brandi experimented because she never had chance to go to college and have fun. I dont understand why ppl keep clinging to thought that Kelly is wild one,she even change her mind about that when she saw what is happening on island.PS made way too much character and only way for most of them to have sex with Willsons is to turn comic into Pigking/Crazydad kind of comic.Like it or not AN isnt that kind of comic.PS like to write story,not 50 pages of sex scenes in chapter.I forgot she was considered the wild one
Oblivion
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She considers herself as the wild sister by doing nasty shit in the past including with her friend Hannah in the college the one who teached her how to do a deepthroat, now that Brandi and Kelly are residents is very expected to see them getting fucked by the locals if not whats the point of the ceremony then, the island allows such behavior so gatekeeping The Wilsons doesnt make any sense.
I dont understand why some users think wanting to see Brandi and Kelly having sex with the locals equals to Pigking/Crazydad comics thats utter nonsense, the island is established to be free love for everyone no matter race ethnicity age they should already know that after 29 chapters smfh.
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zaxxon
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I dont think that,i think that PS doesnt write comics where major female characters fuck several different males.Some ppl want that,but i think that is highly unlikely in near future.PS tried to establishhed free love and sharing,but his writing doesnt reflect that,because he wants to please all subs (incest base pushed back too strongly so far).Forget multiple partners,look state of story in TSB15,JatsK and AN30 -there is barely any sex in it.He is turning them in soap opera. TBH,i am not sure why i am subscribed to him.
Oblivion
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Yes thats the issue he created a swinger island that allows incest too but hes doing the bare minimum creating vanilla scenarios not exploring that concept to the max
Tina from TSB had sexual interactions with 6 dudes and shes one of the main characters there so why Brandi and Kelly cant do the same in this setting that allows such thing without any problem, funny that Dylan can fuck anyone he wants and nobody complains about it, is that not curious? happens every single time in these kind of comics thats peak hypocrisy.
Like you most of the fans are tired of this drama shit and the dislikes he gets proves it, you are still subscribed to him because you expect things to get better but he keeps letting down his fans, JatsK can be only between Cody and Jenny thats fine but not Au Naturel.
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DollyNood
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Just a (semi-) rethorical question....
Au Naturel is supposed to be set in an island resort, right?
The visitors, showing up in the chapters until now, are the Wilsons and the Swedbergs.....
ā¢Considering the fact that it's supposed to be a "resort" with multiple cabins, where are the "other visitors/vacationers" of the resort and who are they???
ā¢This could open up a whole new "can of worms" but on an swingers island where anyone can have sex with anyone without much introduction (like Gina and the Swedberg boys) , Brandi, Kelly (and even Victoria (or is it Fucktoria) can enjoy the same freedom...
ā¢[and it's easy to situate more than a couple of "middle aged" fathers and "late teen" sons, vacationing with their families, that will be more than willing to fuck Brandi, Kelly and Victoria (or is it Fucktoria) without much introduction happening but just because of their looks (esp. Brandi, with her pornstar looks and physique, and Victoria (or is it Fucktoria)]
Au Naturel is supposed to be set in an island resort, right?
The visitors, showing up in the chapters until now, are the Wilsons and the Swedbergs.....
ā¢Considering the fact that it's supposed to be a "resort" with multiple cabins, where are the "other visitors/vacationers" of the resort and who are they???
ā¢This could open up a whole new "can of worms" but on an swingers island where anyone can have sex with anyone without much introduction (like Gina and the Swedberg boys) , Brandi, Kelly (and even Victoria (or is it Fucktoria) can enjoy the same freedom...
ā¢[and it's easy to situate more than a couple of "middle aged" fathers and "late teen" sons, vacationing with their families, that will be more than willing to fuck Brandi, Kelly and Victoria (or is it Fucktoria) without much introduction happening but just because of their looks (esp. Brandi, with her pornstar looks and physique, and Victoria (or is it Fucktoria)]
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Oblivion
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Great question maybe PS can address that fair inconsistency instead of focusing in so much drama, I assume there's a lot of newcomers offscreen and that's another plot he can do to create unique and interesting interactions but I can see PS giving a lazy answer like this comic is focus on the main characters point of view so don't worry about it lol.Just a (semi-) rethorical question....
Au Naturel is supposed to be set in an island resort, right?
The visitors, showing up in the chapters until now, are the Wilsons and the Swedbergs.....
ā¢Considering the fact that it's supposed to be a "resort" with multiple cabins, where are the "other visitors/vacationers" of the resort and who are they???
ā¢This could open up a whole new "can of worms" but on an swingers island where anyone can have sex with anyone without much introduction (like Gina and the Swedberg boys) , Brandi, Kelly (and even Victoria (or is it Fucktoria) can enjoy the same freedom...
ā¢[and it's easy to situate more than a couple of "middle aged" fathers and "late teen" sons, vacationing with their families, that are willing to fuck Brandi, Kelly and Victoria (or is it Fucktoria) without much introduction happening but just because of their looks (esp. Brandi, with her pornstar looks and physique, and Victoria (or is it Fucktoria)]