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There's also an increase in AI usage in these newer chapters of AYCJ, specific phrases that only AI tends to use. He's ruined the story though, the r*pe is harrowing and no one wants to read that, Kim used to be fine in the previous series and now she's a beyond awful human being. This series was so much better before Toby re-entered.It is evident that as the stories grow in length, there is a marked decline in quality. This may be due to Antarctica77’s particular writing style.
His attempt to incorporate a psychological filter into the stories consistently fails and contributes to the stories becoming a complex and opaque structure from which the author is ultimately unable to extricate himself.
The confusion described above manifests itself in a particular way in his other, parallel story * BTND *, especially in the last two chapters (20–21).
-- PC
I honestly don't get why anyone wants to read this series anymore. It's totally fucked up. I don't think a guy like Josh could exist in the real world, being that clueless as to Kim's true nature. After every fucked up thing she's done to him, he still chooses to trust her. And she keeps on corrupting everything good in his life, right down to setting Luna up so Toby can rape her. I'm gonna stop reading this crap and let someone tell me how it ends. The only good ending is with Toby's lifeless body on the floor, his brains all over the wall. Any other ending is a crappy one.AYCJ 24 & 25
Agreed. It was Toby coming back that made me stop paying.There's also an increase in AI usage in these newer chapters of AYCJ, specific phrases that only AI tends to use. He's ruined the story though, the r*pe is harrowing and no one wants to read that, Kim used to be fine in the previous series and now she's a beyond awful human being. This series was so much better before Toby re-entered.
I don’t understand how a wife can stay with a man who encourages her to be unfaithful—at the very least, the love is clearly gone; the husband wants his wife to sleep with just about anyone, even though he knows there’s a risk she might form an emotional bond. It’s very obvious that, before long, Jess will replace him with someone else—unless, of course, the couple has started exploring things like swinging. Tom, the husband, acts more like a female friend—a girlfriend of Jess’s who encourages her to have sexual encounters—than a husband.Have fun!
who’s the author of the hustle again?Here u go
Sire Rickenbach, who also wrote the Contactwho’s the author of the hustle again?
ohhh okay, is it as good as the contact?Sire Rickenbach, who also wrote the Contact
I would say no, but I find the sleazeballs to not be as interesting as Ray. So it may just depend on what you look for in your story building.ohhh okay, is it as good as the contact?
On 30th October, DS said: "I'll get Neighborhood Encounter edited and up for you all next week!"Gentlemen, what’s happening with Part 7 of *Encounters in the Neighborhood*? And what about the edited version of Part 6? Also, is Don Silver writing a sequel to *The Beach House*?
It looks like he has continued "The Beach House" as "Sibling Rivalry" & is published on his Patreon pageGentlemen, what’s happening with Part 7 of *Encounters in the Neighborhood*? And what about the edited version of Part 6? Also, is Don Silver writing a sequel to *The Beach House*?
Thank you!On 30th October, DS said: "I'll get Neighborhood Encounter edited and up for you all next week!"
Beach House is not a priority now.
This is interesting to know! Thank youIt looks like he has continued "The Beach House" as "Sibling Rivalry" & is published on his Patreon page