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[Melissa N.] Collection

Bilbo said:
The original was serialized
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True. I guess serialized is the wrong word to use. Because yes she relates it in parts but it was a story so it felt like more substance than what we get now if that makes sense. Also she updated it weekend IIRC not like now we're we get 20 panels a month of little to nothing just to keep people subbed.
 
I just really hope something happens soon with one of these comics. I read TG comics to satisfy my fetish and for some quality smut not deep rooted conspiracy stories and long winded chapters of cuckolding. There hasn't been smut in a Melissa N comic since October of last year lol. It's taking 2 months and 4 updates just to give half a blow job in Aphrodite's mirror like what is going on here šŸ¤£
 
Sur_GalaChad said:
I just really hope something happens soon with one of these comics. I read TG comics to satisfy my fetish and for some quality smut not deep rooted conspiracy stories and long winded chapters of cuckolding. There hasn't been smut in a Melissa N comic since October of last year lol. It's taking 2 months and 4 updates just to give half a blow job in Aphrodite's mirror like what is going on here šŸ¤£
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i THINK; I know what you mean! The Conspiracy should be the FEMINIZATION, and NOT a clip from "Criminal Minds!
 

A Kpop Idol (Chapter 12 Part 3)​


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K-pop idol would be so much better if it wasn't drip fed to us. 571 pages in and yet the transformation of Nick into Nabi feels like it's barely happened. I think it's because of the way melissa has structured the narrative combined with chapter parts of minimal dialogue. Why in the world are these pages just singular renders with less than a paragraph's worth of text on each? The render quality is great but it would behoove her to try some different styles/options to move the narrative forward before her fans get totally alienated by how slowly she's purposefully milking her patreon model. Maybe try comic book style layouts where she can condense these pages of the band members talking into 2-3 pages rather than using a whole page for "It seems we have company" etc. It would make the narrative move faster and when she decides to do a full page render of a character it could function similar to a splash page.
 
I would love to see something that combines the tempo of "a (not so) temporary roommate" with the beautiful renders of Aphrodite's mirror/K-pop idol. There are definitely ways to lengthen stories that still respect the time of the readers but this current approach isn't it.
 
The pacing of her stories has become unbearably slow, I'm surprised more patrons haven't left.

I was subscribed to her for ages and left because of the pacing. Seriously, if you're a patron on the lowest tier you're probably paying hundreds of dollars per story at this rate.
 
BriannatheMage said:
K-pop idol would be so much better if it wasn't drip fed to us. 571 pages in and yet the transformation of Nick into Nabi feels like it's barely happened. I think it's because of the way melissa has structured the narrative combined with chapter parts of minimal dialogue. Why in the world are these pages just singular renders with less than a paragraph's worth of text on each? The render quality is great but it would behoove her to try some different styles/options to move the narrative forward before her fans get totally alienated by how slowly she's purposefully milking her patreon model. Maybe try comic book style layouts where she can condense these pages of the band members talking into 2-3 pages rather than using a whole page for "It seems we have company" etc. It would make the narrative move faster and when she decides to do a full page render of a character it could function similar to a splash page.
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I think that the main task, and I emphasise the main task, is to collect the monthly payment on the patreon or buy me coffee or something. In fact, no one forbids us to make more pages in one issue, it's just not profitable, so they put in moisturising eye drops for us to prevent our eyes from drying out. For example, I don't expect anything from a story anymore, because I understand that hundreds of pictures with minimal changes in appearance and minimal text is rather disrespectful to its subscribers.

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BriannatheMage said:
I would love to see something that combines the tempo of "a (not so) temporary roommate" with the beautiful renders of Aphrodite's mirror/K-pop idol. There are definitely ways to lengthen stories that still respect the time of the readers but this current approach isn't it.
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Given the richness of the story, it would probably be 7000-10000 pages long in this mega-expanded style )))
 
I don't think any of these stories are very good, they're just okay. If MelissaN was a great writer, she'd be writing a novel, or Ahlberg. There are millions of dollars in novels. These are supposed to be adult comics, which means sexual content. Patreon and other platforms have helped create this endless milking of simps, or well meaning subscribers, with minimal sexual content. I think part of it is that some of the creators don't want to be shut down by Patreon. But it's not even worth following some of the utter garbage (and endless) plot lines, or reading the crap dialog. MelissaN does come up with some good adult scenes, and even MyMoonlly, but Ahlberg is just the same milking on and on, you can have kidnapping, castration, forced feminization, but God forbid you have some honest to goodness oral and anal, which I'm sure the majority of humans in any situation would look forward to and enjoy very much. In that universe, fucking just doesn't happen, or maybe for one panel once every other year.

These creators might complain about those of us who don't pay, but there's nothing to pay for, they make pretty pictures, but so what? They have forgotten that their viewers/readers are here for adult content. DC and Marvel comics are infinitely better, or Dostoyevsky, Hemingway, Dante, and Homer.

Edit - I just wanted to add that I think Chlorophile is on a much better track with interesting adult trans fantasy story, pace, and content.
 
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So , she is now trying to engage the viewers to show bed seance! It's all right, I think she new that she messed up with A.M and viewers are not liking it the fact the she is wanna make this story like Sherlock Holmes! Inspired by Sir Author connan DOYEL'S writing!
So she trying to redeem what she has done ...
Good thought,be she should did it before,it is too late now for my point of view, A.M already lost the image! Like me ,many viewers lost the interest on it , to be honest I am not gonna read it untill it's end, and if I like the ending then maybe I may read it ,but until that , I wanna stay away from Melissa's story, both K pop idol , and A.M
 
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