Bilbo
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The original was serializedNo doubt the original was way better but that's what happens when you serialized content it's always worse
The original was serializedNo doubt the original was way better but that's what happens when you serialized content it's always worse
True. I guess serialized is the wrong word to use. Because yes she relates it in parts but it was a story so it felt like more substance than what we get now if that makes sense. Also she updated it weekend IIRC not like now we're we get 20 panels a month of little to nothing just to keep people subbed.The original was serialized
i THINK; I know what you mean! The Conspiracy should be the FEMINIZATION, and NOT a clip from "Criminal Minds!I just really hope something happens soon with one of these comics. I read TG comics to satisfy my fetish and for some quality smut not deep rooted conspiracy stories and long winded chapters of cuckolding. There hasn't been smut in a Melissa N comic since October of last year lol. It's taking 2 months and 4 updates just to give half a blow job in Aphrodite's mirror like what is going on here![]()
I think that the main task, and I emphasise the main task, is to collect the monthly payment on the patreon or buy me coffee or something. In fact, no one forbids us to make more pages in one issue, it's just not profitable, so they put in moisturising eye drops for us to prevent our eyes from drying out. For example, I don't expect anything from a story anymore, because I understand that hundreds of pictures with minimal changes in appearance and minimal text is rather disrespectful to its subscribers.K-pop idol would be so much better if it wasn't drip fed to us. 571 pages in and yet the transformation of Nick into Nabi feels like it's barely happened. I think it's because of the way melissa has structured the narrative combined with chapter parts of minimal dialogue. Why in the world are these pages just singular renders with less than a paragraph's worth of text on each? The render quality is great but it would behoove her to try some different styles/options to move the narrative forward before her fans get totally alienated by how slowly she's purposefully milking her patreon model. Maybe try comic book style layouts where she can condense these pages of the band members talking into 2-3 pages rather than using a whole page for "It seems we have company" etc. It would make the narrative move faster and when she decides to do a full page render of a character it could function similar to a splash page.
Given the richness of the story, it would probably be 7000-10000 pages long in this mega-expanded style )))I would love to see something that combines the tempo of "a (not so) temporary roommate" with the beautiful renders of Aphrodite's mirror/K-pop idol. There are definitely ways to lengthen stories that still respect the time of the readers but this current approach isn't it.
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Chlorophile - Early Procedure
CHLOROPHILE https://i122.fastpic.org/big/2023/1212/c2/e405a6078b83c6fa2c665ba5c2fd55c2.jpg 323 169 https://florenfile.com/b8svi3tf30dbromcomics.net
Edit - I just wanted to add that I think Chlorophile is on a much better track with interesting adult trans fantasy story, pace, and content.
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