Looking for Don Silver thread Toxic Attraction chapters

[Pete]

Hope I find Looking for don Silver thread TA chapters

 

[wrany]

After chapter 24, you will write again about how the plot develops. we already know that Sarah and Lester in Chicago will rent a hotel room for sex with an unknown man after sex with whom Lester will fuck the sprue all night and at the end of the chapter they will fall asleep together. In chapters 24 and 25, Lester finally finds out why Sarah is still not pregnant

 

[Gussetlicker]

To be fair, there are developments, but the story is cycling. It takes two steps forward in one chapter and then walks those steps back in the next. Chapter 22 seemed to advance the plot, while Chapter 23 reverted it to where we started in 22. There are moments where Sarah "regains" power, but then she loses it again.

Sarah has some control, Sarah loses control, she appears to develop feelings for Lester, she has no feelings and he's just her favorite dildo -- DS keeps cycling through these states.

I can’t really blame DS - he’s tapped into a formula that resonates with a huge number of people. It's tough to recreate that magic if he moves the story along and wraps things up. His other works aren’t generating the same level of interest.

I don’t begrudge him the desire to keep the story going indefinitely, but I wish he’d find ways to avoid this level of repetition. Writing the same car scene 4 times just feels excessive.

Well argued and I’m in agreement. Despite the valid points others make about repetition , I still look forward to the possibility of Lester involving others properly and the possible turmoil of Sarah’s thoughts made manifest..why would I keep coming back if I didn’t.

 

[redditguy]

Does anyone have hidden desires chaper 1.1 from noviceavid or knows what it is a bout

 

[Chillie_Willie]

After chapter 24, you will write again about how the plot develops. we already know that Sarah and Lester in Chicago will rent a hotel room for sex with an unknown man after sex with whom Lester will fuck the sprue all night and at the end of the chapter they will fall asleep together. In chapters 24 and 25, Lester finally finds out why Sarah is still not pregnant

Yeah I like to know what is Sarah’s magical formula from getting pregnant but I want this story and Lester and Sarah’s relationship to continue moving forward. Not two small steps forward and one giant step back.

 

[wrany]

Yeah I like to know what is Sarah’s magical formula from getting pregnant but I want this story and Lester and Sarah’s relationship to continue moving forward. Not two small steps forward and one giant step back.

Bro, aren't you tired of watching Sarah and Lester's relationship?
I waited a year for Sarah to finally be fucked by someone other than Lester, and at the same time I hoped that Sarah would not behave like a whore who had lost her boundaries and my expectations were fulfilled Now it is becoming a new reality.
Don is the best!

 

[thetallywacker]

Anyone got the final to Chap. 23? Curious how different it is from the draft.

Thanks

 

[swewxxx]

Yeah I like to know what is Sarah’s magical formula from getting pregnant but I want this story and Lester and Sarah’s relationship to continue moving forward. Not two small steps forward and one giant step back.

Well, maybe the readers will have to wait 23 more chapters for that to happen.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Well, maybe the readers will have to wait 23 more chapters for that to happen.

You re probably not wrong.

 

[wrany]

Well, maybe the readers will have to wait 23 more chapters for that to happen.

Are you Jewish?

 

[adamblack144]

No one has the final chapter 23?

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Hopefully both finals (Toxic Attraction ch. 23 and Detestable Liaison ch. 5) get uploaded soon

My guess: the contributors who uploaded these chapters were tired of direction and slow pace of Toxic Attraction and to voice their displeasure with Don quit paying their subscription and simply moved on.

 

[PalomafromBrazil]

Detestable Liaison is indeed Don´s top work, in my opinion.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Detestable Liaison is indeed Don´s top work, in my opinion.

I am waiting on Ch.5 to get uploaded before saying anything. Detestable Liaison is a good story by Don but Im worried about the final chapter being a mixed bag of either meh or yay

 

[adamblack144]

I'm going to speak up for the people who still like this story. I've enjoyed most chapters and love the idea of an ugly man seducing an attractive woman.

Just wish he would switch up the sex scenes. There's no reason we had to have a car sex scene in the recent chapter. Have him fuck her in the hospital bathroom or raise the stakes and have them fuck near her kids school.

Also I'm hoping we get to the point where she's seducing him and initiating intimacy. I want her to kiss him. Tell him he's better than her husband. And eventually that she loves him more than her husband

 

[wrany]

Sex in the car was needed to further corrupt Sarah when she was seen naked by an employee at her job and finished on her. the chapter itself significantly expands the potential of the story, but it is difficult for those limited in development to understand this because for some reason they want the story to end as soon as possible. In this chapter, Lester got a job with Sarah and Otis saw her slut side and each of them can share information about it with her boss and then Sarah will become an office whore. Don is definitely German, an Englishman would have such a cool plot

If someone wants rapid development, then read short stories or stories where the wife is fucked already in chapter 1 and at 7 she gets pregnant. Yes, Don earns money from this, but at the same time he develops the plot at the same speed as in chapters 1-7, it's just that some of his chapters are aimed at developing the potential of the story

 

[adamblack144]

Sex in the car was needed to further corrupt Sarah when she was seen naked by an employee at her job and finished on her. the chapter itself significantly expands the potential of the story, but it is difficult for those limited in development to understand this because for some reason they want the story to end as soon as possible. In this chapter, Lester got a job with Sarah and Otis saw her slut side and each of them can share information about it with her boss and then Sarah will become an office whore. Don is definitely German, an Englishman would have such a cool plot

If someone wants rapid development, then read short stories or stories where the wife is fucked already in chapter 1 and at 7 she gets pregnant. Yes, Don earns money from this, but at the same time he develops the plot at the same speed as in chapters 1-7, it's just that some of his chapters are aimed at developing the potential of the story

I don't want the story to end quickly. I want it to go as long as possible. I'm not paying for it so don't care. But he's done like half a dozen car sex scenes. Switch it up. The janitor could have caught them in the bathroom.

Also I don't want Sarah to become an office whore. That's not my kind of story. The generic slut who fucks everyone is boring. This story is about an ugly guy seducing an attractive woman. If she fucks every dick she comes across then there's nothing meaningful about the first 20 chapters

 

[rosstheboss]

Does anyone have the Neighborhood Encounters Chapter 3 alpha draft? Thanks!!

 

[wrany]

I don't want the story to end quickly. I want it to go as long as possible. I'm not paying for it so don't care. But he's done like half a dozen car sex scenes. Switch it up. The janitor could have caught them in the bathroom.

Also I don't want Sarah to become an office whore. That's not my kind of story. The generic slut who fucks everyone is boring. This story is about an ugly guy seducing an attractive woman. If she fucks every dick she comes across then there's nothing meaningful about the first 20 chapters

Bro, I agree with you about the first paragraph. But what you don't want to read about in the second paragraph is just inevitable.
Initially, Don wrote on his channel that after the toxic attraction there should have been another story where Lester would not be. But now Don has decided to do better and put it all into one story and Sarah has already become a whore, but only when she is horny

 

[Gerardd70]

No one has the final chapter 23?

https://f95zone.to/threads/toxic-attraction-literotica.186928/page-5

 

[schulz777]

TA and NC started so good,but now....I don't know....it's just more of the same, ....over and over again.
And I don't understand why both writers would do such thing ???
You've got there an interesting story/stories about little bit conservative (but happy) married couple on their new sexual journey to new possibilities in their sexlife, new sexual partners, new locations, new situations, etc...
But for some reason you (writers) stuck on the same "marry-go round" where ugly dude (with a magic dick) fukkks beautiful wife, and because of his big dick she can't say NO to him, and the husband ( who was the initiator of the whole thing at the beginning) has become almost comlettely irrelevant to the story by now. WHY ?
Why limit the great story/stories to that particular situation, again and again ?
Why not develop the whole story about married couple and their sexaul jorney a little bit further ?
There are so many possibilities in TA and NC – try something new, guys. Writers, Please