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appreciate the share, but seriously - this is the third (if not fourth) time that we're seeing Sarah submitting to Lester in a car / public space and someone just "happens" along to observe and join in the fun... it's lazy and unimaginative at the very least
 
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Was seriously disappointed Don didnā€™t advance the story one bit. All the momentum was cast off as sex talk what BS and then end it with a car set scene we already experienced twice. There was zero creativity in the chapter. What a waste of time who really look forward to seeing what was in store for Sarah and Lester
 
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I too hoped that Lester would make Sarah go further with Otis, but I still enjoyed the action, especially how wanton she has become when with him..I think there was progress and am looking forward to her fucking someone else in front of him, as long as the male is not an Adonis but an ugly undeserving specimen.
 
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I hope that Lester goes to Dan's house and stays there with the children. He ends up playing on the Xbox and discovers that the game he deleted was played with the girls. And he ends up being the savior of the day, the kids start to like him, they even lie to their father (he doesn't tell them the secret of Uncle Lester being in the house). Just like in the movie between brothers (Dan finds out from his daughters that Lester is going to their house and that Sarah and Lester have sex all day yesterday). An adaptation of this part of the movie, with Dan being destroyed, Lester taking his wife and daughters and getting Sarah pregnant. That Lester is too much of a cow, because if he spends a little more on Sarah (financial security) she'll already be leaving her husband. And Dan's fear of having to dress like Sussy or use the cage. The cage could be introduced gradually. These are all possible ideas (I don't think Don would reveal this fear of Dan's if he wasn't planning to use it at some point). It would be nice at the end of the story for Sarah to destroy Dan and give herself to Lester.
Older daughter (why don't you stay in Chicago forever?), so Uncle Lester can stay here at home and everyone is fine, Mom sleeps with him every day when you're not here and they have lots of sex.
 
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makoto shishio said:
I hope that Lester goes to Dan's house and stays there with the children. He ends up playing on the Xbox and discovers that the game he deleted was played with the girls. And he ends up being the savior of the day, the kids start to like him, they even lie to their father (he doesn't tell them the secret of Uncle Lester being in the house). Just like in the movie between brothers (Dan finds out from his daughters that Lester is going to their house and that Sarah and Lester have sex all day yesterday). An adaptation of this part of the movie, with Dan being destroyed, Lester taking his wife and daughters and getting Sarah pregnant. That Lester is too much of a cow, because if he spends a little more on Sarah (financial security) she'll already be leaving her husband. And Dan's fear of having to dress like Sussy or use the cage. The cage could be introduced gradually. These are all possible ideas (I don't think Don would reveal this fear of Dan's if he wasn't planning to use it at some point). It would be nice at the end of the story for Sarah to destroy Dan and give herself to Lester.
Older daughter (why don't you stay in Chicago forever?), so Uncle Lester can stay here at home and everyone is fine, Mom sleeps with him every day when you're not here and they have lots of sex.
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Ohhh I like where you are going with the daughters. I hope Lester does visit Sarahā€™s house while the girls are there and they have a bond or similar interests hope so Sarah canā€™t ask him to leave immediately. This will give Lester an opportunity to win the daughters onto his side. If the daughters adore Lester, one of the potential roadblocks int her coupleā€™s future would be removed. This will allow Sarah to happily have sex with Lester while in the house while the girls run roadblock with Dan, especially if the girls (with Lesterā€™s guidance) beg their mom for a baby brother. You are right Don doesnā€™t introduce anything without it being exploited later. Iā€™m sure the cuckold element will be ramped up even more in regards to a cage or femme outfits for Dan. I hate how Don treated all the momentum Lester and Sarah to the points of her saying I love you as just sex talk in Chapter 23
 
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makoto shishio said:
I hope that Lester goes to Dan's house and stays there with the children. He ends up playing on the Xbox and discovers that the game he deleted was played with the girls. And he ends up being the savior of the day, the kids start to like him, they even lie to their father (he doesn't tell them the secret of Uncle Lester being in the house). Just like in the movie between brothers (Dan finds out from his daughters that Lester is going to their house and that Sarah and Lester have sex all day yesterday). An adaptation of this part of the movie, with Dan being destroyed, Lester taking his wife and daughters and getting Sarah pregnant. That Lester is too much of a cow, because if he spends a little more on Sarah (financial security) she'll already be leaving her husband. And Dan's fear of having to dress like Sussy or use the cage. The cage could be introduced gradually. These are all possible ideas (I don't think Don would reveal this fear of Dan's if he wasn't planning to use it at some point). It would be nice at the end of the story for Sarah to destroy Dan and give herself to Lester.
Older daughter (why don't you stay in Chicago forever?), so Uncle Lester can stay here at home and everyone is fine, Mom sleeps with him every day when you're not here and they have lots of sex.
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Hi makoto.
I respect yours and all other readers preferences and ideas.
But...
I prefer DS leaves these ideas to other stories. TA must finish or it will turn into the most boring erotic story of all times.
When we take it from the first chapter and try to follow the plot through chapter after chapter, it becomes hard to understand where the story is going.
The number of "clues" and "tips" DS gives throughout the story leads to nowhere. He writes entire chapters including sex scenes that most of the time do nothing for the story but increase the "words number".
If we pay attention to the last eight or ten chapters of TA, without the first ten, it's really a boring story.
It takes at least three chapters to jump a little bit with new possibilities. And then, more two or three chapters where nothing is confirmed.

Now Toxic Attractions is far, far away from the initial idea. It's not the same story.
He clearly just wants to keep making money until the last dumb paying customer says "I am out".
This way of supporting authors on patreon is abusive and when we think about it, it has no sense at all.

DS had a good idea and started ok.
But as the money kept flowing he obviously thought he couldn't finish TA without another one with the same commercial appeal.
None of the other stories he started went ahead.
 
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swewxxx said:
Now Toxic Attractions is far, far away from the initial idea. It's not the same story.
He clearly just wants to keep making money until the last dumb paying customer says "I am out".
This way of supporting authors on patreon is abusive and when we think about it, it has no sense at all.

DS had a good idea and started ok.
But as the money kept flowing he obviously thought he couldn't finish TA without another one with the same commercial appeal.
None of the other stories he started went ahead.
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I agree with its not the same that was initially started and its a cash cow for him now.

This was supposed to be around 25 chapters story.

I had a brief look at the recent draft and Sarah is not pregnant yet and we are at 23rd chapter. This was supposed to be turning point of story and I don't think we are getting there in next few chapters at least.
 
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