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[Margeaux Adler] BDSM / Femdom (Goodreads Best Domme / Fem-Dom Books Author)

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From Bad Boy to Good Girl 1
Her New Toy: (BDSM Femdom Erotica)
Mastering Her Man - Goodreads Best Domme / Fem-Dom Books [117]
Short Smut, Vol. 3

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I started reading 'Her New Toy' thinking it was a full length novel, only to discover it was a very well written short-short. I desperately checked my sources for the next two books 'Her Disobedient Toy' and 'Her Caged Toy' with no luck so help would be appreciated in this regard. I did however find these while searching:
 

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I started reading 'Her New Toy' thinking it was a full length novel, only to discover it was a very well written short-short.

I noticed back a year ago when getting from Anne's Archive (before discovering here) that a lot and i mean A LOT of the books/stories from these types of authors are very short. Especially noticeable on the OCR stuff where the extracted images count in the low 20's. Non screen-capped books are usually 100k or less, most of that being the cover image, while the imagebooks are... huge for what little content there is as it's all images.

Makes me think storefronts shouldn't sell anything with less than 100 pages in it (It's not like a comicbook of 30 pages where it's all full colored and detailed and is serialized to make a much larger story over a few years), while smaller stories can be combined to make sets that meet or are greater than the 100 pages (though would be better if it was a singular story).

Short stories should probably be put on Literotica or some other free source; You can test your writing and grow experience until you're ready to do something more serious. Or rewrite and add enough detail to your original stories where it actually feels like something you can spend a few hours reading, and not 10 minutes.
 
Short stories should probably be put on Literotica or some other free source; You can test your writing and grow experience until you're ready to do something more serious. Or rewrite and add enough detail to your original stories where it actually feels like something you can spend a few hours reading, and not 10 minutes.
Oh but that doesn't make them the big bucks they want. I mean heck $2.99 the minimum Amazon price of 'books' for 14-25 pages that aren't even proofread to the point of catching inappropriate name changes (let alone typos) - that's why places like anna's and here and oceanofpdf and zlibrary exist.

I've written the majority of two books - both over 50k words each, and have started on a third, unfortunately I can't find the file with the third because I had a lot of the roughing done - C'est la vie!

I proofread the hell out of them, primarily because I don't write as fast as I think, and so much of what I want to say doesn't make it to the hardcopy the first, second, or even third time through.
I've also learned, for me, an outline is fine, but write the chapters in order, or I find I have to scrub really had to avoid contradictions or repeativeness.
One day I might finish those two books and try to get them out there - but for me, with the quality I put into my work, too only get the same as these "writer's" get tends to be a severe demoralizer, which is why I haven't finished them.
 
Oh but that doesn't make them the big bucks they want. I mean heck $2.99 the minimum Amazon price of 'books' for 14-25 pages that aren't even proofread to the point of catching inappropriate name changes (let alone typos)

They should do 25¢ for such books. That denotes more appropriate size, and people would probably buy 8-20 at a time, encouraging more sales. Then you'd get a freebie random author 25¢ one to encourage looking at others.

At least the $3-$5 books in walmart and the grocery store i can see how thick the paperback is and warrant it's more worth it.

I've written the majority of two books - both over 50k words each, and have started on a third, unfortunately I can't find the file with the third because I had a lot of the roughing done - C'est la vie!

I proofread the hell out of them, primarily because I don't write as fast as I think, and so much of what I want to say doesn't make it to the hardcopy the first, second, or even third time through.

Doing ERPing myself, i can say my own posts i usually go over them a total of 5 times before i hit the send button. (Not so much for forum posts) so i understand how much work some of this can be. Doing the KLRXO compilation and fixing and trying to match quotes so you don't have hanging punctuation all over the place... then the occasional name replace when they don't use regex and it replaces totally normal words with nonsense amalgamations.

I've also learned, for me, an outline is fine, but write the chapters in order, or I find I have to scrub really had to avoid contradictions or repeativeness.
One day I might finish those two books and try to get them out there - but for me, with the quality I put into my work, too only get the same as these "writer's" get tends to be a severe demoralizer, which is why I haven't finished them.

mmm :( I'm not as avid a reader as my GF, she would probably be willing to read them over and give her feedback.

But i agree, writing in order, but trying to have all major details ironed out too, especially plot twists or revelations of characters.

As I've written elsewhere i really dislike JK Rowlings books. Her writing style (at least in harry potter) treated you like an idiot, and like the 'scooby-doo' ending harping you for being too dumb as the reader to see what was happening, and then they explain all the clues leading up to it; But if you look back and the clues literally aren't there (or is so inconsequential and meant nothing). Unlike say something more Sherlock Holmes, or Detective School Q (anime) where subtle clues are there, and you could piece enough stuff together to know who the bad-guy is; And if you didn't you probably won't solve the mystery or know what's up before they do. (though Rowling did do a somewhat better job with the Timepiece one with hints of Hermine having waaay too many classes and seeing her in multiple places at once, but that's the only case i think she did it right, other times involving ingredients for potions are utter nonsense since without a primer of what those ingredients are or even do it's just fluff)
 
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Here are three complete series: From Bad Boy to Good Girl, Dominating Her Man, and Her Toy. Not sure when or where I obtained these, but they were missing cover pages that I just added.
 

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Found one more eBook by this author buried in my collection. It is the bundle Feminine Control: Volume One. It includes Mastering Her Man, which is listed in the OP and in Dominating Her Man. But the other three stories aren't posted elsewhere in this thread: Stripping Secrets, Taken by the Burlesque Dancer, and Tricks and Treats.
 

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One last eBook from this author in my collection. It is the bundle Feminine Control: Volume Two. It includes Her New Toy and Her Domination, which are listed elsewhere in this thread, either separately or in other collections. It does contain Disciplining Her Neighbor, which hasn't been posted.

I've noticed that my copies of the two Feminine Control collections do not contain the excerpts usually provided with those books. I must have deleted them once I realized I owned all of the stories. I hope that isn't a problem for the readers.
 

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