I'm honestly hoping they never step out on each other. Them loving each other but also becoming more kinky and adventurous together has made this story stick out a lot more than most other ones where everyone just turns into sluts after long enough.
Also the first person perspective has really worked.
I do worry because most of these kinds of stories there is a sweet spot where the girl going through a bimbofication looks perfect but the fetish is to push onwards and it ends up looking kind of awful.
I'm not personally a fan of tattoos, piercings and garish hair colours even though I like the Annabelle character in this story it is because she and Lilly contrast so well, if they were copies of each other I'd probably enjoy it less.
I agree with everything @torvenus said. It really makes this story different, and in my opinion better, than most stories out there right now. BTW, Antalore42 did an amazing job with Lily’s character.
Hmm, not looking good for our protagonist. In this chapter Lily criticizes his physical condition and performance , flirts with the server, accuses Adam of rape and finally walks out on him because she assumes he banged Mara
Hmm, not looking good for our protagonist. In this chapter Lily criticizes his physical condition and performance , flirts with the server, accuses Adam of rape and finally walks out on him because she assumes he banged Mara