O'jisan
Editor-In-Grief
I have absolutely no idea how this story will end ... I have a couple of theories, but I could be totally wrong. A lot has to do with the "World" VR Software/hardware itself ... is it possible ( in this story ) to actually transport your consciousness into the game? Possibly, Yumiko and her husband were never physically in the game, as he thought originally. He could be the test-subject for the system beta-test ...? Yumiko's sudden appearance makes me think she's been in "our world" all along, and never actually trapped in the game ... just observing her husband's behavior and reactions from some other worksite ...? Of course, that is a somewhat extreme theory ... only her husband's near fatal collapse in V11, spurred her into the visit. Then again, maybe she's become addicted to the Game-World (Rant especially) ... and has chosen to visit the World whenever she pleases ...? Either scenario would make her a cold-hearted bitch.I loved the concept and the design. I hope you use it more often.
What a mystery—Yumiko's unexpected return really caught me off guard. This story could end in so many different ways that I can't even predict how it will turn out. I hope the ending is truly visceral.
Hard to say one way or another ... Nini promises some twists and "big" surprises ... so we'll all find out when the truth is revealed.


