[horadriel] comics Collection

[Gamefriend]

Or for reference, you could look at AlwaysOlders covers. I think those are quite representative.

 

[timmydg]

So took my sweet time to read Dear Diary. Now I understand why the use of colored speech bubbles are so important in your story Horadriel. It helps the reader to understand and identify the characters in the story. Chocolate Brown is Jayce, Blue is sally, Red is Samantha, light brown is Anna, pink is Richie/Barbera and green is Rudy. Thanks to colored coded speech bubble I was able to identify that Jayce had a lovely mini redemption arc as he (Jayce) became friends with Rudy. What an evolution bro. Jayce went from being friends with Richie to being friends with her (RIchie) boyfriend Rudy.

The story was full of pathos. It had an emotional core. The love story was well developed & was full of SUBTLE conflicts. The conflict was not like what the writers usually do, like forcing arguments bw the hero and the heroine; the subtle conflicts was one of Dear Diary strong points. It was more like other ppl or external circumstances stopping Richie and Rudy from being together. Rudy parents, other students, Samantha and Jayce (who himself had a mini redemption arc). How Rudy saved Richie and their baby when he took them to the hospital~ was the best EMOTIONAL moment of the story for me. You really know how write emotional story Hoardriel and I love it.

Dear Diary was also unpredictable. My assumption was that Anna would've acted as bestie to Richie/Barbera. No, the story took the unpredictable turn as Sally acted as Richie bestie. Though Anna and Richie eventually became friends.
I initially thought that Jayce would've become Richie boyfriend. No, the story took an unpredictable turn as it became obvious that it was Rudy who would've become Richie lover. Even Sally lover Dr. Reynolds contributed to the story unpredictability.

What I am trying to say here is that Horadriel.... I absolutely effing love your new story Dear Diary. I have no clue how you're able to write such a good stories on consistent basis.

 

[timmydg]

Anyways this my personal observation. Reading from the subtext it gives the implications that Jayce might've broken up with Samantha as he didn't approve of her crusade against Riche/Barbera.

So would it be right to assume that Jayce might've ended up with Anna instead as both them (Jayce and Anna) had brown colored speech bubble? Jayce speech bubble was chocolate brown..........while Anna speech bubble was light brown in color.....

Correction: Okay so Anna speech bubble color was Beige not light brown... And Beige is a lighter shade of brown by the way

 

[JumpyInTheMorning]

Oh hey been following your work on exhentai, good to see you here too Horadriel

 

[Backdoor Jesus]

Dear Diary was very sweet story, thanks @Horadriel

 

[Horadriel]

Oh hey been following your work on exhentai, good to see you here too Horadriel

Dear Diary was very sweet story, thanks @Horadriel

Thank you very much <3 .

I haven't been as active as I used to be, but hearing from you guys is awesome and means alot to me <3

 

[Horadriel]

So took my sweet time to read Dear Diary. Now I understand why the use of colored speech bubbles are so important in your story Horadriel. It helps the reader to understand and identify the characters in the story. Chocolate Brown is Jayce, Blue is sally, Red is Samantha, light brown is Anna, pink is Richie/Barbera and green is Rudy. Thanks to colored coded speech bubble I was able to identify that Jayce had a lovely mini redemption arc as he (Jayce) became friends with Rudy. What an evolution bro. Jayce went from being friends with Richie to being friends with her (RIchie) boyfriend Rudy.

The story was full of pathos. It had an emotional core. The love story was well developed & was full of SUBTLE conflicts. The conflict was not like what the writers usually do, like forcing arguments bw the hero and the heroine; the subtle conflicts was one of Dear Diary strong points. It was more like other ppl or external circumstances stopping Richie and Rudy from being together. Rudy parents, other students, Samantha and Jayce (who himself had a mini redemption arc). How Rudy saved Richie and their baby when he took them to the hospital~ was the best EMOTIONAL moment of the story for me. You really know how write emotional story Hoardriel and I love it.

Dear Diary was also unpredictable. My assumption was that Anna would've acted as bestie to Richie/Barbera. No, the story took the unpredictable turn as Sally acted as Richie bestie. Though Anna and Richie eventually became friends.
I initially thought that Jayce would've become Richie boyfriend. No, the story took an unpredictable turn as it became obvious that it was Rudy who would've become Richie lover. Even Sally lover Dr. Reynolds contributed to the story unpredictability.

What I am trying to say here is that Horadriel.... I absolutely effing love your new story Dear Diary. I have no clue how you're able to write such a good stories on consistent basis.

Omg you make me blush ! Thank you!

This is the first indepth analysis I've seen of one of my comics .

The emotional moments are what is most important to me. Even more so than the sex parts. I am glad that I apparently manage to express the feelings properly .

 

[asduqxu]

Thank you very much <3 .

I haven't been as active as I used to be, but hearing from you guys is awesome and means alot to me <3

When will the next comic they are really good

 

[Horadriel]

Anyways this my personal observation. Reading from the subtext it gives the implications that Jayce might've broken up with Samantha as he didn't approve of her crusade against Riche/Barbera.

So would it be right to assume that Jayce might've ended up with Anna instead as both them (Jayce and Anna) had brown colored speech bubble? Jayce speech bubble was chocolate brown..........while Anna speech bubble was light brown in color.....

Correction: Okay so Anna speech bubble color was Beige not light brown... And Beige is a lighter shade of brown by the way

Yes, their relationship was mostly physical to begin with and was not going to last anyways. After Samantha revealed what she was capable of, Jayce was disgusted by her and angry for having been forced to be a part of it.

Anna and Jayce are very attractive people and both were humbled by what occured in Dear Diary. I am sure they would both be able to be good partners in upcoming relationships. Them ending up together is cute headcanon though ❤

 

[Horadriel]

When will the next comic they are really good

Probably within a month . I don't want to promise anything, but I am almost certain I'll be able to release another comic within that timeframe .

I am currently working on about 5 different stories of which some are already further advanced than others.

1. (Name is work in progress)
A young boy meets a young girl at a disco and she seems to be everything he ever wanted in a partner. She openly admits, that she is only into transwomen and wants to be their mistress in a relationship. If he actually wants to date her, he has to undergo at least a bit of feminization.

This story is more heartfelt than the concept seems to allow on first glance. It's about 20% finished.

2. Lust valley
A group of friends who live in a big city discover a weird underground establishment. A swingerclub bar called the "lust valley". People of varying sexuality linger here to have sex and our group of young friends have some revelations about their own sexuality. But as it turns out, the longer you stay in Lust valley, the more your body adjusts to your new urges...

This is a more kinky/sex-focused tg story. It's about 10% finished.

3. The Coven Part III
Emilio, crownprince of the kingdom and son of Garrett and Mortello, is not interested in learning witchcraft any further, because he'd have to come to terms with turning into a woman in order to do so. Freya, head of the coven, wants to persuade him into giving in no matter the cost and takes him on a journey to show him his ancestry. Together, they make a frightening discovery...

This story continues the Coven saga and will most likely be the final chapter in the story. It's 35% finished.

4. Realization
Our maincharacter is Karen, the bigoted wife of a conservative politican. Her stepson reveals that he is trans and suddenly all career plans of her husband seem to feel threatened. It's her job to look after her stepson and make sure he doesn't do anything stupid. However, once she actually gets to know them better, she starts to realize that the stepson she thought she had, might never have been a son at all...

A more heartfelt story focusing on the point of view of a conservative. In this story we wouldn't get the inner feelings of the trans character, but the thoughts of a bigoted mindset and how that is slowly put into question. This story is about 45% finished.

5. The fagazine
There's a rumor about a low print magazine, that questions your sexuality. Only those who have never questioned their gender or their sexuality can read the articles and not feel themselves changing. A big warning label is printed on the front.
A young single dad catches his son and his friends reading a strange magazine. They are making fun of one of their friends for having a boner and strongly blushing. The dad takes the magazine off of them and puts it in a drawer. One night he looks for some reading material and stumbles across the almost forgotten magazine. His journey begins...

This story is also more kinky and/or sexual. I am not quite sure if it should contain incestual relationships or not. It's about 45% done.

There are actually even more stories that I dipped my toes in, but these are probably the most fleshed out. However, I can not promise that any of them will ever see the light of day, or that maybe another is released first xD.

 

[asduqxu]

Probably within a month . I don't want to promise anything, but I am almost certain I'll be able to release another comic within that timeframe .

I am currently working on about 5 different stories of which some are already further advanced than others.

1. (Name is work in progress)
A young boy meets a young girl at a disco and she seems to be everything he ever wanted in a partner. She openly admits, that she is only into transwomen and wants to be their mistress in a relationship. If he actually wants to date her, he has to undergo at least a bit of feminization.

This story is more heartfelt than the concept seems to allow on first glance. It's about 20% finished.

2. Lust valley
A group of friends who live in a big city discover a weird underground establishment. A swingerclub bar called the "lust valley". People of varying sexuality linger here to have sex and our group of young friends have some revelations about their own sexuality. But as it turns out, the longer you stay in Lust valley, the more your body adjusts to your new urges...

This is a more kinky/sex-focused tg story. It's about 10% finished.

3. The Coven Part III
Emilio, crownprince of the kingdom and son of Garrett and Mortello, is not interested in learning witchcraft any further, because he'd have to come to terms with turning into a woman in order to do so. Freya, head of the coven, wants to persuade him into giving in no matter the cost and takes him on a journey to show him his ancestry. Together, they make a frightening discovery...

This story continues the Coven saga and will most likely be the final chapter in the story. It's 35% finished.

4. Realization
Our maincharacter is Karen, the bigoted wife of a conservative politican. Her stepson reveals that he is trans and suddenly all career plans of her husband seem to feel threatened. It's her job to look after her stepson and make sure he doesn't do anything stupid. However, once she actually gets to know them better, she starts to realize that the stepson she thought she had, might never have been a son at all...

A more heartfelt story focusing on the point of view of a conservative. In this story we wouldn't get the inner feelings of the trans character, but the thoughts of a bigoted mindset and how that is slowly put into question. This story is about 45% finished.

5. The fagazine
There's a rumor about a low print magazine, that questions your sexuality. Only those who have never questioned their gender or their sexuality can read the articles and not feel themselves changing. A big warning label is printed on the front.
A young single dad catches his son and his friends reading a strange magazine. They are making fun of one of their friends for having a boner and strongly blushing. The dad takes the magazine off of them and puts it in a drawer. One night he looks for some reading material and stumbles across the almost forgotten magazine. His journey begins...

This story is also more kinky and/or sexual. I am not quite sure if it should contain incestual relationships or not. It's about 45% done.

There are actually even more stories that I dipped my toes in, but these are probably the most fleshed out. However, I can not promise that any of them will ever see the light of day, or that maybe another is released first xD.

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Im looking forward to it i think you do the best slow step by step tf concept and its my fav category

 

[Gamefriend]

From wich is this one?

 

[Horadriel]

From wich is this one?

That one is from Realization

 

[Horadriel]

It's not that big of a deal, but my buymeacoffee-account got suspended for adult content . There's only been a single supporter anyways, but I wonder what this is going to do to the scene as a whole.

As far as I've read, it all started with a court decision in california saying that payment providers are partly responsible for illegal pornographic content. Apparently as a result, all of the big payment companies are pulling the plug. Does anyone know what the situation with onlyfans and patreon is? All big credit card providers and apparently even paypal are pressing websites to no longer allow adult content.

This is crazy!

 

[Gamefriend]

It's not that big of a deal, but my buymeacoffee-account got suspended for adult content . There's only been a single supporter anyways, but I wonder what this is going to do to the scene as a whole.

As far as I've read, it all started with a court decision in california saying that payment providers are partly responsible for illegal pornographic content. Apparently as a result, all of the big payment companies are pulling the plug. Does anyone know what the situation with onlyfans and patreon is? All big credit card providers and apparently even paypal are pressing websites to no longer allow adult content.

This is crazy!

Yes. It's crazy what's happening at the moment. As far as it stands at the moment everything adult related has it hard.
There are the paypent-providers, like MasterCard, PayPal and some other, who censor sides like itch.io, Steam and other sides in providing adult content, that's not to there liking (in essence saying, if you don't comply with forbidding this we will no longer be available for your side)
On the other hand many governments are imploring strong, censoring regulations for the internet. For example in the EU and UK already and some states in the US seemingly want to follow. With those you as user have to authenticate, that you are of legal age to visit adult sides by means ID or, like X did it, with an AI guessing system that, guesses your age on different aspects, like interactions and so on.

 

[Horadriel]

This is outrageous... What the fuck are they thinking? Why do think it's necessary to police some harmless gooners?

 

[Gamefriend]

Honestly, who knows. Some people say, using adult sides is only an start, because wide masses will accept it under the pre-text of child safety. After that they slowly and secretly can extend it.
Through not sure.

 

[Horadriel]

Honestly, who knows. Some people say, using adult sides is only an start, because wide masses will accept it under the pre-text of child safety. After that they slowly and secretly can extend it.
Through not sure.

This is definately more policing than I feel comfortable in a democracy with...

Who knows what this will lead to. Scary times to live in.

 

[Gamefriend]

This is definately more policing than I feel comfortable in a democracy with...

Who knows what this will lead to. Scary times to live in.

Sadly so

 

[Horadriel]

Hello everyone ❤,

I want to give myself a little deadline in order to motivate me to actually finish the story I am currently working on in the next few days. I think I'll be able to finish it by the end of next week (scold me if I haven't uploaded it by then).

I'll upload a few pictures as some sort of sneak peak, namely pages 1,3,8,14 and 25. 1 is going to be the cover of this newest story (After Gamefriend made the very good point of my stories not having any covers as of yet, I plan to from now on create covers too). Feedback is as always welcome ❤!

Have a nice day everyone !