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BriannatheMage
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a five month time skip. that's tough.
Jafta
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I usually avoid commenting and keep it short by only posting the chapter/picture, but I feel like I need to rant a bit about the story.
Timeskip could be for multiple reasons:
With that said... I'm not really a fan of the last few chapters... And I'm honestly starting to lose interest. I'll still post the rest of the story, but I'll reconsider if there's any future one.
I can understand that this might be what aligns more with some people interests toward this fetish, but I guess this is not the kind of story I'm looking for when it comes to mtf / sissification / feminization
This story falls into the same pattern of 95% of stories, but with a different coat of paint:
Point 5 is what I hate the most about a lot of these story and usually were I stop. It's like if there's some kind of Stockholm Syndrome because of the rapist and suddenly there's a complete shift in personality after phase of denial.
It has been reported by some people who transitioned they have seen some shift in their sexuality when your body dysmorphia lessen. But it's never a clear cut where it goes "I'm happy having sex with women and suddenly I crave sex with men" after a single traumatic event.
I'd say the most common case, at least for MtF, is that there's a body envy toward the female body. The line between wanting to be with a girl vs wanting to be a girl is blurred. Once they fully transition, they realize they actually simply wanted to be a girl and not be with a girl. But it's mostly attributed to the transition and your general perception on gender/sexuality, not the HRT itself.
Anyway, rant over...
Timeskip could be for multiple reasons:
- running out of ideas
- lazy writing
- doing a cliffhanger before going for the end of the story
- rushing the end of this arc before starting a 2nd arc
With that said... I'm not really a fan of the last few chapters... And I'm honestly starting to lose interest. I'll still post the rest of the story, but I'll reconsider if there's any future one.
I can understand that this might be what aligns more with some people interests toward this fetish, but I guess this is not the kind of story I'm looking for when it comes to mtf / sissification / feminization
This story falls into the same pattern of 95% of stories, but with a different coat of paint:
- Boy and Girl are dating.
- Variant : Boy is a virgin and has an interest in said Girl
- Boy gets manipulated in transitioning by Girl or a related 3rd Party with authority.
- Manipulation keeps going further and further until Boy is forced into non-consensual sex / rape situation.
- Boy refuses to accept what happened. The "denial" chapter(s). That's your beach filler episode if you want to it that way
- Boy, now mostly transformed, finally accepts what happened and now is interested with the idea of having sex with males.
- If Boy hasn't grown distant from Girl at this point, it's either completely over with Girl or she keeps manipulating him.
- Boy more often than not start a relationship with the person responsible for the non-consensual sex.
- Boy now fully embrace the transition, his new sexuality and new boyfriend.
- If it hasn't happened yet, Boy has going through SRS
- Variant: Boy now has a "prosthetic vagina" that allows him to feel everything just like a normal one. Because no story wants to go through the 6 to 12 weeks before you can have sex post surgery
- They lived happily ever after.
Point 5 is what I hate the most about a lot of these story and usually were I stop. It's like if there's some kind of Stockholm Syndrome because of the rapist and suddenly there's a complete shift in personality after phase of denial.
It has been reported by some people who transitioned they have seen some shift in their sexuality when your body dysmorphia lessen. But it's never a clear cut where it goes "I'm happy having sex with women and suddenly I crave sex with men" after a single traumatic event.
I'd say the most common case, at least for MtF, is that there's a body envy toward the female body. The line between wanting to be with a girl vs wanting to be a girl is blurred. Once they fully transition, they realize they actually simply wanted to be a girl and not be with a girl. But it's mostly attributed to the transition and your general perception on gender/sexuality, not the HRT itself.
Anyway, rant over...
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BriannatheMage
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Well written and accurate breakdown of how these stories have become a little cookie cutter. The naivete that most authors rely on to put these protagonists into is ridiculous. Step 5 is where I typically get annoyed but it's step 6 that I truly hate. The forced emancipation from the girlfriend/significant other that gets the 80's training montage instead of a real storyline. It's always where I've bounced off feminization stories. The journey through such a drastic change always seems to result in a break-up rather than deeper bonding.
My ideal outline would diverge at step 3. Manipulation deeper and deeper without the rape situation. I don't mind it when chastity is used to force a protagonist into gradually exploring penetrative sex, but it has to be a slow burn rather than a traumatic event designed to shock the system. I've also complained more than a couple times about the prosthetic vagina cheat code that authors like to use. It's lazy and dumb 95% of the time.
My ideal outline would diverge at step 3. Manipulation deeper and deeper without the rape situation. I don't mind it when chastity is used to force a protagonist into gradually exploring penetrative sex, but it has to be a slow burn rather than a traumatic event designed to shock the system. I've also complained more than a couple times about the prosthetic vagina cheat code that authors like to use. It's lazy and dumb 95% of the time.
lordmeme020
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Anna Shapard
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What transformation process? it has been frozen for what feels like an eternity!:/
it seems to me as if we have been treading water for 10 chapters!
lordmeme020
Member
Yes exactly. Jafta and many others, myself included, prefer the transformation process and don't enjoy when the stories drag on, especially to the same themes Jafta listed in their post. Its a common problem for these Patreon writers to try and extend a story past where it could have ended to keep people subbing.
Jafta
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From the author on October 3rd:
Hey lovelies!
I know I promised this chapter a bit earlier, but Iāve been dealing with some health stuff, so I couldnāt get it out on time. Thankfully, I managed to finish it and finally share the last part of Chapter 15 with you all! 
Iām going to take a little break for about a week to recover, so there wonāt be a new chapter this week. But donāt worry, Iāll be back next week and get right back to work!
Thank you so much for your love and patience! Stay fabulous and Enjoy reading!
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