[JABComix] My Hot Ass Neighbor 11

I'm fine with the kink content, but these are the least interesting character pairings possible. Has the well run completely dry? (Yes) see you in 7 months for the next page.
 
I'm fine with the kink content, but these are the least interesting character pairings possible. Has the well run completely dry? (Yes) see you in 7 months for the next page.
Yeah, that's the problem with a lot of his comics, and just ongoing porn comics in general. They start out with a lot of energy because they're based on a provocative premise that you're supposedly building towards. But then once you finally achieve that it becomes 10x harder to write a worthwhile continuation.

-This was a comic about a nerdy boy trying to fuck his hot neighbor whom he'd had a crush on for years. After he finally fucks her, it becomes unfocused and goes downhill.

-Farm Lessons was about a family of hillbillies who just all fuck each other, but that's gone on so long its just not as engaging anymore. (He started that story involving Luke getting his mom and aunt pregnant and then just abandoned it.)

-Dat Ass was about a boy 'needing' to fuck his mom's hot ass, and he accomplishes that in one issue. I'll grant those were interesting enough characters to keep it going, but again, it just became too unfocused after that. (I'll never forgive him for having the mom fuck that fat guy in his trailer. That was just pure vindictive rage-baiting.)

-Ay Papi was about a young girl and a dad who want to fuck each other but resist for obvious(?) reasons. Worse thing I can say about that comic is that it went on so goddamn long that by the time the dad and daughter finally do it, you forget you were waiting for it because its been 20 years and all the characters have fucked everybody else by now.

And then you have all of what I call the sideline comics (Housework, Grumpy Old Man, Hardon Sibs, Model Life, etc.) that are all based on a much looser premise, but still inevitably come unfocused. Housework was probably the best because the mom was hot and it conjured that same near-believable family dynamic that makes it feel risky and exciting, but that one probably ran its course with the last issue anyway.
 
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