[LilTKit / LittleTgKitten] Collection

[asalund2]

I may be in the minority but I am hoping that he turns into "one of the girls" with a legitimate bond with Tali/Lola/Maria and some personal growth rather than a bimbo who is easily manipulated, one-dimensional, and effectively just turns into one of the girls that he manipulated as a man (like Charlotte). I feel like that has already been done in the other stories.

Nick fit seamlessly into the trio's dynamic - even before turning into a girl - and even the teasing/sniping/annoyance just makes it seem like they have a sisterly bond. They can help him get in touch with his Latin(a) roots, become more mature, and learn to be less of a snobby misogynist (which is what his grandmother wanted) without drastically changing his personality or ruining his life. He does seem to have likeability and redeemable qualities beneath his spoiled and hedonistic exterior, which makes him an excellent candidate for a "redemption"/coming-of-age-type arc. I think he should get his money and split it with his new friends (and maybe send Charlotte to Paris as a thank you), and otherwise put it towards his new life. What the latter exactly entails likely depends on his time in Mexico (and potentially his new job) and whomever he ultimately "pairs up" with: Kevin, maybe one of the girls, or someone else. Maybe he even ends up without a partner and is happy just having a strong support system and pseudo-family who accepts his new identity. After all, he has plenty of money but not much in the way of family or even friends it looks like.

The story has already set up 3 separate groups of characters who have thrown curveballs in Nick's life and have driven the story: Sam and her friends to initiate the feminization; his lawyer, uncle and aunt to incentivize continuing with it; and Charlotte to accelerate it. I do not think they need someone like Maria stabbing him in the back for his money or otherwise causing irreparable damage to their relationship. She may end up being a part of the mafia that was sent to kill him to add an interesting twist but I hope that his relationships with the trio and Kevin make it to the end.

The only things that have thrown me off thus far is the casual suggestion to take pills to prevent a boner and him arbitrarily being named Daphne. The former probably could have been incorporated more naturally later on in the story (e.g. Nick was starting to accept being a girl but is conflicted as to how far he would be willing to go), but maybe it gets hashed out more elegantly later on in the story. I do not see him just randomly starting to take pills for his disguise. The other thing is with the name. While it is certainly on brand for Tali/Lola to arbitrarily pick a name to call Nick, I feel like it could have been a more monumental event in the story. The name represents a significant part of Nick's future female identity and it feels like Daphne has no real "value" other than nicknames like DeeDee or DafDaf. Plus, Daphne makes me think of the redhead from Scooby Doo and not really a "Latina". I am not etymology expert but it does not sound like a Mexican name.

It has the potential to be the best comic/story I have read in a long time if it is hashed out properly. Excellent transformation/feminization, great character dynamics and development, and a strong storyline without too many ridiculous plot holes or the overuse of sexual scenes to drive the plot. I imagine sexual scenes will still be featured prominently but they are more impactful when they are not forced. Excited to see where it goes from here!

 

[chalana56]

I may be in the minority but I am hoping that he turns into "one of the girls" with a legitimate bond with Tali/Lola/Maria and some personal growth rather than a bimbo who is easily manipulated, one-dimensional, and effectively just turns into one of the girls that he manipulated as a man (like Charlotte). I feel like that has already been done in the other stories.

Nick fit seamlessly into the trio's dynamic - even before turning into a girl - and even the teasing/sniping/annoyance just makes it seem like they have a sisterly bond. They can help him get in touch with his Latin(a) roots, become more mature, and learn to be less of a snobby misogynist (which is what his grandmother wanted) without drastically changing his personality or ruining his life. He does seem to have likeability and redeemable qualities beneath his spoiled and hedonistic exterior, which makes him an excellent candidate for a "redemption"/coming-of-age-type arc. I think he should get his money and split it with his new friends (and maybe send Charlotte to Paris as a thank you), and otherwise put it towards his new life. What the latter exactly entails likely depends on his time in Mexico (and potentially his new job) and whomever he ultimately "pairs up" with: Kevin, maybe one of the girls, or someone else. Maybe he even ends up without a partner and is happy just having a strong support system and pseudo-family who accepts his new identity. After all, he has plenty of money but not much in the way of family or even friends it looks like.

The story has already set up 3 separate groups of characters who have thrown curveballs in Nick's life and have driven the story: Sam and her friends to initiate the feminization; his lawyer, uncle and aunt to incentivize continuing with it; and Charlotte to accelerate it. I do not think they need someone like Maria stabbing him in the back for his money or otherwise causing irreparable damage to their relationship. She may end up being a part of the mafia that was sent to kill him to add an interesting twist but I hope that his relationships with the trio and Kevin make it to the end.

The only things that have thrown me off thus far is the casual suggestion to take pills to prevent a boner and him arbitrarily being named Daphne. The former probably could have been incorporated more naturally later on in the story (e.g. Nick was starting to accept being a girl but is conflicted as to how far he would be willing to go), but maybe it gets hashed out more elegantly later on in the story. I do not see him just randomly starting to take pills for his disguise. The other thing is with the name. While it is certainly on brand for Tali/Lola to arbitrarily pick a name to call Nick, I feel like it could have been a more monumental event in the story. The name represents a significant part of Nick's future female identity and it feels like Daphne has no real "value" other than nicknames like DeeDee or DafDaf. Plus, Daphne makes me think of the redhead from Scooby Doo and not really a "Latina". I am not etymology expert but it does not sound like a Mexican name.

It has the potential to be the best comic/story I have read in a long time if it is hashed out properly. Excellent transformation/feminization, great character dynamics and development, and a strong storyline without too many ridiculous plot holes or the overuse of sexual scenes to drive the plot. I imagine sexual scenes will still be featured prominently but they are more impactful when they are not forced. Excited to see where it goes from here!

Agree with this wholeheartedly

 

[Lena Sayers]

Agree with this wholeheartedly

I totally agree too... I would add that Latina women are not usually bimbos as Maria has shown us so far. In fact, most Latina homes are matriarchal by nature. I would love to see Nick grow into a strong, wise and of course beautiful Latina woman who radiates a confident aura everywhere she goes.

 

[SilentZT]

Yes, I know Part 11 is out. And here you go.

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To be honest, to put it mildly, I was expecting a little more from going to the store to buy things, this is really the moment when you can just throw up a few renders, with minimal text and everyone will love it, especially since we got blackmail that would make “Daphne” wear almost anything anyway....but.... the disappointment came from where we didn't expect it! One outfit? Really one? Well, you could have shown at least three outfits, even some meaningless ones, and then this dialog with recognition in the form of salvation from these two “chicks” and their tastes.))) In general, I'm a little disappointed.
I remember, for example, “School Days”, where the first fitting was a real dressing up for the fans))
The result is that his ex-girlfriend collected what to spite him? Things for a whore, which he was already dressed in at the very beginning, along with fake “boobs”, makeup and a prostitute costume...., what's to stop him from returning the things to the store now and not wearing them? I understand that the motivation for action here is, to put it mildly, strained, but I still want at least a little logic of action))

 

[mihaluck]

To be honest, to put it mildly, I was expecting a little more from going to the store to buy things, this is really the moment when you can just throw up a few renders, with minimal text and everyone will love it, especially since we got blackmail that would make “Daphne” wear almost anything anyway....but.... the disappointment came from where we didn't expect it! One outfit? Really one? Well, you could have shown at least three outfits, even some meaningless ones, and then this dialog with recognition in the form of salvation from these two “chicks” and their tastes.))) In general, I'm a little disappointed.
I remember, for example, “School Days”, where the first fitting was a real dressing up for the fans))
The result is that his ex-girlfriend collected what to spite him? Things for a whore, which he was already dressed in at the very beginning, along with fake “boobs”, makeup and a prostitute costume...., what's to stop him from returning the things to the store now and not wearing them? I understand that the motivation for action here is, to put it mildly, strained, but I still want at least a little logic of action))

What “School Days” you mean?

 

[Doc Fakes]

Here is the full PDF for Liltkit's "Like Father, Like Daughter." I like this one a lot.

Like father, Like Daughter (PDF)

 

[Anna Shapard]

To be honest, to put it mildly, I was expecting a little more from going to the store to buy things, this is really the moment when you can just throw up a few renders, with minimal text and everyone will love it, especially since we got blackmail that would make “Daphne” wear almost anything anyway....but.... the disappointment came from where we didn't expect it! One outfit? Really one? Well, you could have shown at least three outfits, even some meaningless ones, and then this dialog with recognition in the form of salvation from these two “chicks” and their tastes.))) In general, I'm a little disappointed.
I remember, for example, “School Days”, where the first fitting was a real dressing up for the fans))
The result is that his ex-girlfriend collected what to spite him? Things for a whore, which he was already dressed in at the very beginning, along with fake “boobs”, makeup and a prostitute costume...., what's to stop him from returning the things to the store now and not wearing them? I understand that the motivation for action here is, to put it mildly, strained, but I still want at least a little logic of action))

yeah, it's like you expected a Buffet, and only got a Sandwich!:/

 

[asalund2]

To be honest, to put it mildly, I was expecting a little more from going to the store to buy things, this is really the moment when you can just throw up a few renders, with minimal text and everyone will love it, especially since we got blackmail that would make “Daphne” wear almost anything anyway....but.... the disappointment came from where we didn't expect it! One outfit? Really one? Well, you could have shown at least three outfits, even some meaningless ones, and then this dialog with recognition in the form of salvation from these two “chicks” and their tastes.))) In general, I'm a little disappointed.
I remember, for example, “School Days”, where the first fitting was a real dressing up for the fans))
The result is that his ex-girlfriend collected what to spite him? Things for a whore, which he was already dressed in at the very beginning, along with fake “boobs”, makeup and a prostitute costume...., what's to stop him from returning the things to the store now and not wearing them? I understand that the motivation for action here is, to put it mildly, strained, but I still want at least a little logic of action))

The one "surprise" outfit fits the narrative of Nick not liking to be in a super feminine disguise better than a montage. I guess he could have tried on a bunch and hated it the entire time before picking an outfit but I think this was a better creative choice... especially if he ends up doing something like that in the next chapter with the stuff in the bags. It probably would be a little excessive to do it twice in short succession. I imagine that the stuff in the bags is going to be clothing that Tali and Lola would have picked out anyways with a little bit more pink than just black and red. The shoes are already the same.

There are likely going to be some "extreme" items in there that Nick would never touch (at least at this point) but then there are going to be some items more similar to the outfit that Tali and Lola picked out. He will probably settle on one of those outfits. If they were all similar to the outfit that Tali and Lola picked out, then he probably would not have settled as easily.

As for why he does not go back, some stores (especially higher end ones) do not have a return policy. His friends also have to be willing to take him back to the store, which they may not be willing do if the outfits are what they would have picked anyways. Then there is also the matter of Charlotte being able to sniff him out quite easily (despite being quite ditzy) and figuring out that his boobs are fake, so do they want to risk going out again and especially back to the same store?

There are going to be some fantastical elements involved in this story that probably feel frivolous in reality but are necessary to make the story entertaining. I do not think anything has been a major stretch or illogical to this point. This is probably going to be a very long story so I imagine we will get to see plenty of different outfits by the end of it.

 

[SilentZT]

The one "surprise" outfit fits the narrative of Nick not liking to be in a super feminine disguise better than a montage. I guess he could have tried on a bunch and hated it the entire time before picking an outfit but I think this was a better creative choice... especially if he ends up doing something like that in the next chapter with the stuff in the bags. It probably would be a little excessive to do it twice in short succession. I imagine that the stuff in the bags is going to be clothing that Tali and Lola would have picked out anyways with a little bit more pink than just black and red. The shoes are already the same.

There are likely going to be some "extreme" items in there that Nick would never touch (at least at this point) but then there are going to be some items more similar to the outfit that Tali and Lola picked out. He will probably settle on one of those outfits. If they were all similar to the outfit that Tali and Lola picked out, then he probably would not have settled as easily.

As for why he does not go back, some stores (especially higher end ones) do not have a return policy. His friends also have to be willing to take him back to the store, which they may not be willing do if the outfits are what they would have picked anyways. Then there is also the matter of Charlotte being able to sniff him out quite easily (despite being quite ditzy) and figuring out that his boobs are fake, so do they want to risk going out again and especially back to the same store?

There are going to be some fantastical elements involved in this story that probably feel frivolous in reality but are necessary to make the story entertaining. I do not think anything has been a major stretch or illogical to this point. This is probably going to be a very long story so I imagine we will get to see plenty of different outfits by the end of it.

I agree with almost everything you said. But the question is not only about the dressing up itself, but the question is what could be the comparison (because we don't actually know what Tali and Lola chose because it was leggings and a crop top in a different color than the one the HG was wearing), as a variant of the sexy but restrained style of the girlfriends' girls, and the style of a whore from the “ex-girlfriend” from the past. I mean, we immediately slip into slutty clothes. And this is probably the last thing I want in this part of the story. I hope that the next part will not be a monotonous sorting of clothes from bags, but will revolve around the clothes from the bags and a possible new clothes shopping trip, for something more casual or something.

 

[SilentZT]

What “School Days” you mean?

This is the story.
I apologize for the possible violation of the rules of the thread, as this is a story from another author, if it is not possible, please delete it.
SFX ==> School Daze (the archive will unpack itself, without the system's arhyvator.)

 

[mihaluck]

This is the story.
I apologize for the possible violation of the rules of the thread, as this is a story from another author, if it is not possible, please delete it.
SFX ==> School Daze (the archive will unpack itself, without the system's arhyvator.)

you mean C_BLack?

 

[Nuvolari]

Yes, CBlack's interpretation of Fraylim's collection-of-images-in-search-of-a-complete-plot.

 

[Doc Fakes]

Here's the full PDF of the Liltkit story "Fateful Vacation"
Enjoy!

Fateful Vacation (PDF)

 

[Elaine]

New Part is out on the Kemono site

Kemono

kemono.su

sadly that part was posted here a week or so ago so can be downloaded here

 

[mntna]

I may be in the minority but I am hoping that he turns into "one of the girls" with a legitimate bond with Tali/Lola/Maria and some personal growth rather than a bimbo who is easily manipulated, one-dimensional, and effectively just turns into one of the girls that he manipulated as a man (like Charlotte). I feel like that has already been done in the other stories.

Nick fit seamlessly into the trio's dynamic - even before turning into a girl - and even the teasing/sniping/annoyance just makes it seem like they have a sisterly bond. They can help him get in touch with his Latin(a) roots, become more mature, and learn to be less of a snobby misogynist (which is what his grandmother wanted) without drastically changing his personality or ruining his life. He does seem to have likeability and redeemable qualities beneath his spoiled and hedonistic exterior, which makes him an excellent candidate for a "redemption"/coming-of-age-type arc.

I also think that Nick fit perfectly well into the trio's friendship dynamic.
i would like Talia & Lola to become BFFs/Sisters-like to him, but i can see them become the bad-influence type of Sisters that would try to drive him into the "Puta" lifestyle, a detail that i love about this story, the "Puta/Hooker" fashion style. Looking and maybe acting like one could possibly make him more confident, but of cours it may lead him into some trouble in Mexico.
while i see Maria becoming more of an Aunt/Older Sister type of figure for Nick, the type that is always there if He needs help.

i hope NIck/Nikki/Daphne story goes more on the redemption road instead of the classic road-to-bimbofication

I think he should get his money and split it with his new friends (and maybe send Charlotte to Paris as a thank you), and otherwise put it towards his new life. What the latter exactly entails likely depends on his time in Mexico (and potentially his new job) and whomever he ultimately "pairs up" with: Kevin, maybe one of the girls, or someone else. Maybe he even ends up without a partner and is happy just having a strong support system and pseudo-family who accepts his new identity. After all, he has plenty of money but not much in the way of family or even friends it looks like.
The story has already set up 3 separate groups of characters who have thrown curveballs in Nick's life and have driven the story: Sam and her friends to initiate the feminization; his lawyer, uncle and aunt to incentivize continuing with it; and Charlotte to accelerate it. I do not think they need someone like Maria stabbing him in the back for his money or otherwise causing irreparable damage to their relationship. She may end up being a part of the mafia that was sent to kill him to add an interesting twist but I hope that his relationships with the trio and Kevin make it to the end.

a part of me would really like that to see a sort of happy ending, but another part of me think that this story may have a bad-ending (Maria is secretly using Nick)

The only things that have thrown me off thus far is the casual suggestion to take pills to prevent a boner and him arbitrarily being named Daphne. The former probably could have been incorporated more naturally later on in the story (e.g. Nick was starting to accept being a girl but is conflicted as to how far he would be willing to go), but maybe it gets hashed out more elegantly later on in the story. I do not see him just randomly starting to take pills for his disguise. The other thing is with the name. While it is certainly on brand for Tali/Lola to arbitrarily pick a name to call Nick, I feel like it could have been a more monumental event in the story. The name represents a significant part of Nick's future female identity and it feels like Daphne has no real "value" other than nicknames like DeeDee or DafDaf. Plus, Daphne makes me think of the redhead from Scooby Doo and not really a "Latina". I am not etymology expert but it does not sound like a Mexican name.

Daphne isn't a name with latina origins, but is used by some latinas women, so it isn't strange that they choose that name, i think it fit "Him" since the backstory he will give is that "She" was born in the United States. the important part is the Surname, He must change it into a more Latino-like, as it will help him hide better from the people that want to kill him (in a bad-ending, it may backfire and become something that would prevent him for getting the money)

It has the potential to be the best comic/story I have read in a long time if it is hashed out properly. Excellent transformation/feminization, great character dynamics and development, and a strong storyline without too many ridiculous plot holes or the overuse of sexual scenes to drive the plot. I imagine sexual scenes will still be featured prominently but they are more impactful when they are not forced. Excited to see where it goes from here!

yeah, i agree. i hope Liltkit doesn't rush things, like learning spanish, the effects on his body by the pills and most of all, accpeting his female self, in this part we saw him checking him out on the mirror and i think it fit the type of person Nick is at the moment, as seeing a body like the one the Trio came up for him would make him hard right away, even thought he would had like it more on a real Woman

 

[mntna]

Post from Liltkit

Hey, guys! I finished rendering the pages and the next part will be ready in a few days.

I'm sorry for these delays, guys, I've been sick with bronchitis for three weeks already. Now I only have cough, but I still feel pretty exhausted. In general, I feel like I need a little break to distract and reboot myself, because creating somehow gets harder and harder. And recent news from the world don't help at all. So I think it'll be somewhere in the middle of spring, for two weeks or so. I will let you know the exact dates in advance.



It was posted the 20th, so the new part will be posted maybe sunday or monday

 

[Doc Fakes]

Post from Liltkit

Hey, guys! I finished rendering the pages and the next part will be ready in a few days.

I'm sorry for these delays, guys, I've been sick with bronchitis for three weeks already. Now I only have cough, but I still feel pretty exhausted. In general, I feel like I need a little break to distract and reboot myself, because creating somehow gets harder and harder. And recent news from the world don't help at all. So I think it'll be somewhere in the middle of spring, for two weeks or so. I will let you know the exact dates in advance.

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It was posted the 20th, so the new part will be posted maybe sunday or monday

Yeah, I read that too. Sounds like he's getting a little burned out.

 

[Doc Fakes]

Here's a PDF to another LiltKit story (some bonus pics at end too).

Switching Gears to Dresses and Heels

 

[Jackjons]

Post from Liltkit

Hey, guys! I finished rendering the pages and the next part will be ready in a few days.

I'm sorry for these delays, guys, I've been sick with bronchitis for three weeks already. Now I only have cough, but I still feel pretty exhausted. In general, I feel like I need a little break to distract and reboot myself, because creating somehow gets harder and harder. And recent news from the world don't help at all. So I think it'll be somewhere in the middle of spring, for two weeks or so. I will let you know the exact dates in advance.

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It was posted the 20th, so the new part will be posted maybe sunday or monday

You don't have to hurry,
Focus on your recovery first, HEALTH IS THE MOST IMPORTANT.

 

[Lena Sayers]

Here's a PDF to another LiltKit story (some bonus pics at end too).

Switching Gears to Dresses and Heels

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That was a really good story, even though the plan of the sister was a diabolical one.