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- Thread starter oled65cxpua
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- 3dcg
- body-modification feminization gender-change gender-morph transformation
- mind-control
ginger_anagram
Member
I’ve noticed that a lot of TGTF stories overlap with Sado-masochism stuff e.g. Melissan, AndreaTG, DS1000, etc. I’m curious as to why.
Jackjons
Well-known member
It is not lilkit's fault, this is not lilkit's personal story, so i don't have anything to say , but yes I also don't like this kind of situation too , i am not a big fan where someone is getting hurt and manipulate by 3rd party for their personal gain .
And for me , "happiness" is the key , if there is a forced feminization, but if there happiness is present I am okay . For example in college girlfriend, it was forced feminization but both are happy & together, I am okay with it
And for me , "happiness" is the key , if there is a forced feminization, but if there happiness is present I am okay . For example in college girlfriend, it was forced feminization but both are happy & together, I am okay with it
Erica St.Claire
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And therein lies the problem.
A story such as this can be mind blowing on a deeply psychological level, if we see it from the POV of the person being transformed.
Seeing the day to day moments, of 'Gas Lighting', manipulations, emotional conflicts.
Imagine watching Bates Motel and seeing it only from the POV of an outsider, it would fail miserably.
No one would know why Norman is the way he is.
You would miss all the important and quite often shocking moments.
The wife talking about how ruining another countries economy, makes him a strong hero is disgusting.
Fair enough I suppose as its story telling, but if you're going to have a character supposedly wield that much power, then sell it properly.
Richard seemed like the kind of man that couldn't rumble a Garage sale, let alone strip a company of it's assets.
The story had potential, but Liltkit should have heavily rewritten it first.
Jackjons
Well-known member
I don't know the part lilkit rewriting the story first, I am not sure about it , it is totally depends on what kind of agreement lilkit has ,
It is not like, lilkit is a newbie, i believe lilkit also understand what is needed for delivering the story in a more accurate way but it is all about the author's permission. Who knows lilkit might not have the right to rewrite the story.
I am not sure, but yes it has the potential but we are getting wife's pov here , which giving us pain more than fatish
Kobboldpot
Member
Why do all the authors I start following with their rich, vivid stories slip into endlessly long, half-empty, stuffy epics?
Although here the answer is clear. It is both simpler and more profitable.
What is worse is that, being primarily artists, not writers, they think that they can put characters into history and try to write a kind of real work. And being not writers, they produce naive cringe.
In my opinion and taste, TG stories should remain short and schematic, leaving behind the scenes the opportunity to fantasize about the details of events and transformations. Because when an inexperienced non-professional tries to write it in detail, all the magic collapses.
Although here the answer is clear. It is both simpler and more profitable.
What is worse is that, being primarily artists, not writers, they think that they can put characters into history and try to write a kind of real work. And being not writers, they produce naive cringe.
In my opinion and taste, TG stories should remain short and schematic, leaving behind the scenes the opportunity to fantasize about the details of events and transformations. Because when an inexperienced non-professional tries to write it in detail, all the magic collapses.
ginger_anagram
Member
To be fair, the original JoeSixPack story that LilTKit is adapting this comic basically accomplishes what you are describing— from what I recall at least. Maybe this perspective change made the creative process of adapting the story more interesting for LilTKit. Who knows.
Just Another User
Member
The original story is also from the perspective of the wife.
mihaluck
Active member
YesHey, I have a question for those who read the original version. Is this story almost over? LilTKit mentioned that there's just one more update missing??
mihaluck
Active member
I'm happy with how to do it. If liltkit had rewritten the story from Richard's point of view, it would have stretched over a long story given all the dialogue. He just decided to take a break from writing Latina in need and make light updates like last year with a lesson for the teacher. Then it's Joe's style that we don't see the changes happening, and it's much easier to believe. An attempt to realistically show how a dominant man turns into a weak-willed girl could fail miserably. I think that's why I knew this and wrote it like this. To rewrite it this way, you need the skills of the old Melissa at least.
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ganzer
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I don't know what you expect from authors who clearly have not studied the craft or attended writer's workshops. I say that not as a knock on them, because many people don't have the time, money, or opportunity to do so. But it leaves them without a knowledge of basic story structure, plot construction, and the habit of being an unforgiving editor of one's own work.
These are tools without which an author will have a hard time writing a complete and concise story. So you will sesome very hard working and talented people who are quite good at writing an entertaining and enjoyable story but have troubled with pacing or over-complicate thing.
You have artists like Kizaru who is quite good at writing the first third of the story and often does it 3 or 4 times in the same work. You have burnouts like JSP who used to have pretty good story structure, but now his plots are so lazy and unfocused it's hard to recommend him.
For whatever faults you can find with the LilTKit's adapted and original works, LilTKit actually finishes stories. And as far as subject matter, it's impossible to write something everyone likes and bravo to artists who write anyway knowing someone will dislike what they've done. IMO the only real sin in writing is wasting the reader's time, and LilTKit rarely does that.
These are tools without which an author will have a hard time writing a complete and concise story. So you will sesome very hard working and talented people who are quite good at writing an entertaining and enjoyable story but have troubled with pacing or over-complicate thing.
You have artists like Kizaru who is quite good at writing the first third of the story and often does it 3 or 4 times in the same work. You have burnouts like JSP who used to have pretty good story structure, but now his plots are so lazy and unfocused it's hard to recommend him.
For whatever faults you can find with the LilTKit's adapted and original works, LilTKit actually finishes stories. And as far as subject matter, it's impossible to write something everyone likes and bravo to artists who write anyway knowing someone will dislike what they've done. IMO the only real sin in writing is wasting the reader's time, and LilTKit rarely does that.
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