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Don't want to beat a dead horse but you guys keep bringing it up.

Not going to repeat so just a recap, the story has been a mess for some time, it's not like the latest chapter was the issue, instead of fixing the issues, it keeps getting worse.

Overall, feels like they wanted to pay tribute to Melissa N works, so started out with Journey into the Unknown (year 1) and then decided to merge it with K Pop Idol (year 2).

The latina posse keep pushing the MC into being their perfect little doll, without any real motivation. There is so lack of character left in the MC, that it would no surprise that the 'friends' tell them that they want to SRS their male bits and they would go along with it. It feels less and less like a story and more of a power fantasy, like when authors deal with their past bullies by turning the perpetrators into victims in their stories.
 
I’ll say it again, for the umpteenth time:
- For many installments now, the story has focused on a 17-year-old American high school girl—right at the peak of puberty—hanging out with her older, slutty friends. There isn’t a single scene of feminization here. It’s just a soap opera about a teenage maid.
- This is a common issue with long-running stories: to realize that the protagonist is actually a man, you have to go back a year to the very first few installments. Everything else is just a standard heterosexual story about a slutty girl who quickly sheds her shyness.
- The only scene that has anything to do with the "plot" is the one where a witch adds something to a concoction and fills the room with smoke, after which the character wakes up as a high school girl with no memory of what happened.

Sure, I get it—magic potions that trigger an uncontrollable urge to suck cock—but if the author decided to go down that road, that should have been the final scene. Because for three-quarters of the story, it’s basically just a remake of *Sex and the City*.
 
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