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Movement???
Sarah's been shared with the entire male cast (and her mother) all along this story. And, do you know what any of those sex scenes mean to the story???? Absolutely nothing.
Worst, DS, his cheerleaders and a lot of his non paying readers are hooked on the American fetish of getting her pregnant. Any time between chapter 100 and 169.
After that she goes to space starring Friday the 13th episode 1432 to find Jason and have another child.
 
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swewxxx said:
Hahaha
Movement???
Sarah's been shared with the entire male cast (and her mother) all along this story. And, do you know what any of those sex scenes mean to the story???? Absolutely nothing.
Worst, DS, his cheerleaders and a lot of his non paying readers are hooked on the American fetish of getting her pregnant. Any time between chapter 100 and 169.
After that she goes to space starring Friday the 13th episode 1432 to find Jason and have another child.
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Actually there is a fun when the character is seduced and made to break boundaries slowly . In this story after a point she just let anyone in , its like the main character has lost its will and surrendered completely . I stopped reading it when she would let anyone have a go at her .
 
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I don't see how this chapter moves the story forward at all. Just talking about this chapter, because 45 gave me hope of movement, but 46 stalled out on me.

Sarah is not behaving differently or moving forward - her character has been reduced to a set of holes without the capability of rational thought. She's not necessarily looking for a dominant man - she's looking for her next orgasm since it's been almost 24 hours. For the past 30 chapters she has shown that, while she would prefer it from Lester, she doesn't care who she gets it from (especially if she can rub it in her husband's face after). She has taunted Lester on multiple occasions that she can have anyone she wants. In fact in Ch45 (the previous night) she told Lester to let her in or she'd get the guys outside to take her on the hood of her car. He knows she's most likely serious which is why he pulled her inside so quickly. That dynamic hasn't changed.

Sarah didn't need Cash or Otis or Richard or the random guys in the sex shop to dominate her, she's looking to get off simply because the sun has gone down again. She keeps playing with fire and doesn't even consider how much she's getting burned because, as I said, her brain is either non-functional or she has manually switched it off. There is nothing that gives off even a glimmer of cognitive function about her scene with Ted or even the decision to go in the first place.

Kids are neglected again, so nothing new there.

Lester hasn't done anything new - he's trolling Dan and Tricia, and working on knocking Sarah up.

Renee is not doing anything new - she folded faster in 5 chapters than Sarah did in 25 chapters.

Dan is still sidelined away from home like always. Is the keylogger working? Does it do anything? Will he even be able to come home for the weekend, much less while Sarah is on another tear through the male populace of northern Illinois?

The only thing slightly new is that there's another boss (Gordon) has thoughts about how to "help" Dan so the that guy can somehow obtain time with Sarah. But that's happened before as well.

Movement could be Lester getting contacted by Marcus or the Lincoln Group on the way to Middleton, interrupting his trip...or Sarah getting noticed across the street by Renee and them talking it all out...or Ava contacting her mom in the middle of the night to say come home which would interrupt her Ted time and possibly fire some synapses between her ears instead of only what's between her legs...or James showing up at the Williams house (again, maybe an Ava contact) at the same time as Lester so he can flatten his face....or Lester showing up and having Sarah and Renee realize what's been happening.

But none of that happened in *this* chapter. It was Sarah acting completely insane... again... instead of being with her kids....again... while everyone else treaded water. Ted getting some action is not what I would call moving the story forward - that's just what Sarah's been doing for the last 30+ chapters
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This chapter sets up Lester showing up and having Sarah and Renee realize what's been happening. It did not move forward as much as I like but cliff hanger is in place to unfold in the next chapter.
 
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ricbar said:
This chapter sets up Lester showing up and having Sarah and Renee realize what's been happening. It did not move forward as much as I like but cliff hanger is in place to unfold in the next chapter.
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I'm not trying to ruin your (or anyone else's) enjoyment of the story. Really.

But you can say what you just said about almost any chapter. It's a setup for having X,Y,Z happen. Yet until any of those things happen, we are not moving the story forward. Laying the groundwork, maybe, but I think that ground has been worked enough.

Lester has been folding space between Middleton and Chicago for many chapters now. Every cliffhanger is an opportunity for him to show up and be revealed. Yet even when he does exactly that, Sarah is doe-eyed and squashes the part of her brain that actually works.

Just as she does in 46. Her whole inner monologue while with Ted is about how she needs to be distracted so she doesn't have to think about what she's actually doing right at that moment. Like...what?? She chooses to go further with Ted so that she won't have to think about how she shouldn't be going any further with Ted, because maybe it will make Lester jealous so he can come take her so she won't have to think about all the other times Lester has taken her! This is what I mean about lack of logical brain cells
 
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