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What a shitty chapter. Like I said before, Tom is going to eat cum (he already did), and soon heāll hand over the company leadership to Davidāand bend over for Tom, too. You can see the guy is depressed (his wife is going to get pregnant, and heās going to kill himself). To make matters worse, they show David working out and all that; he was supposed to be a short, ugly nerd with zero self-esteemāsomeone humiliated since childhood who thinks thatās just normal. And yet, heās a guy with an elephantās memory who doesn't realize his wife is lying to him. In the end, David is going to ask Tom to cum inside his wife and get her pregnant, or ask Tom to cum on his face. The story has turned into something bizarrely comical: David is a moron who agrees with everything and has no dialogue, and a business leader with no emotional intelligence. Jia notices his mood swings, yet heāthe one who pays such close attention to his wifeādoesn't see a thing. It looks like the writers are crafting stories just to sell the plot to Devin Dickie laterāyou know, those stories where men turn into women for Black men and think itās the greatest thing ever.Enjoy
Your rite on all fronts, especially this series. It thought it was after I think it was ch13 or sumin. Everyone has the same characters and they try to stretch an 8 chapter story into a 35 chapter series.This is by far the worst story I've ever read. None of the characters are even remotely likable. Every possible clichƩ is there, taken to a level I've never seen before. The whole story is just an excuse to cram in as many kinks as possible, especially humiliation and "bull worship," which reaches completely absurd levels.
The worst part is that the author is clearly doing it on purpose to provoke the readers. I've been following this story since the very beginning on Literotica, long before he even had a Patreon. He got offended by the comments, and ever since then he's deliberately made David as pathetic and spineless as possible. During the trip, he even gave readers a bit of hope, only to crush it afterward just to provoke them even more. And since launching his Patreon, he's clearly been trying to cater to hardcore cuckold fans.
Thankfully, there are only one or two chapters left. The ending is completely predictable: Jia will end up pregnant with Tom's child, and David, as the ultimate cuckold, will raise the kid while Jia keeps sleeping with Tom. I wouldn't even be surprised if the story throws in a chastity cage or pegging at this point, given the direction it's taken.
Overall, it's a terrible story that only reinforces my belief that this genre is heading straight toward its own demise.
Well the topic might not be the problem, cuckold and cheating is not the problem. It when they beat the husband down so far it goes to horror porn.With all due respect, why would you read a 20-chapter story about a topic you don't like?
Why not just put it down and find another story?
I'm just asking out of curiosity.
The stories start off well, but out of nowhere, the script shifts and the plot stops making any sense. David jeopardizes his job because heās a cuckold (apparently, having a big dick gives the guy license to wreck the company). His wife barely even lives with him; he has no access to her. Note: If David is Asian, itās even worse, given their strict cultural and moral values. Thereās a difference between the cuckold dynamicāwhere thereās conversation and the husband eventually wins his wife back or shows genuine concernāand a scenario where the guy is constantly humiliated and cast aside to the point where any woman could have him, yet his wife doesn't care for him. Itās even worse when David acts like a total moron and loses all self-respect. The character also risks losing his job just to satisfy Tomāthe same deadbeat who doesn't work. To make the story even more bizarre, all that's missing is for Tom and Jia to make David sign the company over to Tom, turning him into Tom's slaveāliving on a diet of semen, wearing women's clothes, and getting fucked in the ass by Tom while Tom fucks Jia. The writers lose the plot until the story becomes ridiculous. The husband becomes increasingly pathetic and humiliatedāand he likes it. "My wife loves me," says the moron whose wife has been gone for a month, telling her lover to knock her up, declaring her love for the lover, and calling her husband a shitty cuckold and a cum-eater. This story has turned into a plot for a sadistic comic strip by Devin Dickie. At least when *moiarte3d* uses this kind of scenario, the husband is being blackmailed through military or financial force.With all due respect, why would you read a 20-chapter story about a topic you don't like?
Why not just put it down and find another story?
I'm just asking out of curiosity.
Future DavidWell the topic might not be the problem, cuckold and cheating is not the problem. It when they beat the husband down so far it goes to horror porn.
This story almost worked except for the insanely psychopathic "best friend." The horror porn of the defeated husband is too far fetched. It's truly a world without suicide or violence to have things turn out like that.
Decent story. Enjoyed it.