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A bit of bad Luck

I didn't like it. The man is very weak. The woman sleeps with her lover and then comes to sleep with him. He stays at Amauri's house. I don't understand why he lacks self-respect, shame. Then he slept with his cousin, who was a stupid tramp, who some guy with a big penis got pregnant and abandoned with the children like trash. Now she wants a sucker, since old age is coming. Just the fact that someone approaches someone who is already in a relationship proves they are completely bad-natured.
 
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Quantity doesn’t equal quality. I really didn’t like *SiD* - the pacing of the story was very disjointed, with no clear climax or narrative structure. Even in *TA*, which gets so much criticism here, this aspect is much better, and the stakes gradually build up.

In this story, however, the pace is more suited to some kind of chaotic memoir (I believe the author admits that the story is partly autobiographical). Viewed in that light, the story might still be tolerable, but the problem is that it’s autobiographical for some rather uninteresting characters. All in all, it just didn’t work for me.
 
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makoto shishio said:
A bit of bad Luck

I didn't like it. The man is very weak. The woman sleeps with her lover and then comes to sleep with him. He stays at Amauri's house. I don't understand why he lacks self-respect, shame. Then he slept with his cousin, who was a stupid tramp, who some guy with a big penis got pregnant and abandoned with the children like trash. Now she wants a sucker, since old age is coming. Just the fact that someone approaches someone who is already in a relationship proves they are completely bad-natured.
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All of Kacey's stories are like that. Its what her fans want and what she writes. Once in a while the husband has a nice outcome, like getting to have a girlfriend after he loses his wife to the BBC. Anyways, I wouldn't suggest more of her stuff if this didn't float your boat.
 
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so have been getting into Antartica77 stuff mainly through literotica.
i liked the start of my neighbour but hated the end , husband too week. the new tenant was good.
behind the neighbours door was well handled , husband is a little weak , but it looks like the wife can accept this and loves him anyway (will see what chapter 19 holds. I have started his first work Discoveries of a young man and its interesting to pick up on elements that he has expanded on in his later work.

Now I am working my way through a young couples journey, chapter 17 so far. wife has gone to the dark side (still thinks she loves her husband but is working to destroy him wtf), husband has his weakness but there is support around him so maybe he will come through it. interesting use of a hermaphrodite to support the husband , which i think works ok.
Have manged to get chapters 15-21 from Kemono and 22 and 23 on a different thread on this site. does anyone have access 24. am hoping that will end the series .\
thanks
 
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dailygrind said:
so have been getting into Antartica77 stuff mainly through literotica.
i liked the start of my neighbour but hated the end , husband too week. the new tenant was good.
behind the neighbours door was well handled , husband is a little weak , but it looks like the wife can accept this and loves him anyway (will see what chapter 19 holds. I have started his first work Discoveries of a young man and its interesting to pick up on elements that he has expanded on in his later work.

Now I am working my way through a young couples journey, chapter 17 so far. wife has gone to the dark side (still thinks she loves her husband but is working to destroy him wtf), husband has his weakness but there is support around him so maybe he will come through it. interesting use of a hermaphrodite to support the husband , which i think works ok.
Have manged to get chapters 15-21 from Kemono and 22 and 23 on a different thread on this site. does anyone have access 24. am hoping that will end the series .\
thanks
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Antarctica77 has locked down the series to the point you will have to buy CH 24. Share if you decide to buy. I chose not to buy based on the last two or three chapters where the focus shifted from Toby as the antagonist and detoured into Linda fucking everything with her dick (Not into futinari). Antarctica77 had set up a good foundation where both Amanda and Linda (as woman only) could have been engaged in the seduction of Josh and creating tension along with Toby trying to take all the women Josh has a relationship with. Really, he dumped the whole story line that he set up with Toby. No more compromising and fucking Luna. Betrayal, pregnancy, blackmail, all gone.
 
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ricbar said:
Antarctica77 has locked down the series to the point you will have to buy CH 24. Share if you decide to buy. I chose not to buy based on the last two or three chapters where the focus shifted from Toby as the antagonist and detoured into Linda fucking everything with her dick (Not into futinari). Antarctica77 had set up a good foundation where both Amanda and Linda (as woman only) could have been engaged in the seduction of Josh and creating tension along with Toby trying to take all the women Josh has a relationship with. Really, he dumped the whole story line that he set up with Toby. No more compromising and fucking Luna. Betrayal, pregnancy, blackmail, all gone.
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They really use the term futa in the story? Do people not know that trans women exist?
 
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bluepixiegurl316 said:
They really use the term futa in the story? Do people not know that trans women exist?
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Actually, the writer stated on Patreon that he does know the difference between a "futa" and a transwoman. However, as trans and intersex persons typically don't have the functionality of both types of genitalia over the other (for example, transwomen not possessing a uterus, having decreased fertility) he decided to make the character a fictional "futanari" because it's usually understood in futa fiction that she possesses EVERY function; able to both impregnate and be impregnated.
 
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CrownySuccubus said:
Actually, the writer stated on Patreon that he does know the difference between a "futa" and a transwoman. However, as trans and intersex persons typically don't have the functionality of both types of genitalia over the other (for example, transwomen not possessing a uterus, having decreased fertility) he decided to make the character a fictional "futanari" because it's usually understood in futa fiction that she possesses EVERY function; able to both impregnate and be impregnated.
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Got it. I actually do appreciate use of the term when there's the dual function. Otherwise it's just a trans person. Thanks for the info.
 
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ricbar said:
Antarctica77 has locked down the series to the point you will have to buy CH 24. Share if you decide to buy. I chose not to buy based on the last two or three chapters where the focus shifted from Toby as the antagonist and detoured into Linda fucking everything with her dick (Not into futinari). Antarctica77 had set up a good foundation where both Amanda and Linda (as woman only) could have been engaged in the seduction of Josh and creating tension along with Toby trying to take all the women Josh has a relationship with. Really, he dumped the whole story line that he set up with Toby. No more compromising and fucking Luna. Betrayal, pregnancy, blackmail, all gone.
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so i now understand what you were getting at. In the last three chapters the author threw the toby arc on the back burner switched gears and seems to be trying to set itself up for more chapters. the Linda sex was fine but it had already mostly been covered. i was looking for the reveal of the wife and how dark she has become but the author teased and then just kicked it down the road. Hes now introducing another new strong female character. and you know sometime during the political campaign the sisters video will be released. toby will be back for a bit but based on past experience Kim's betrayal wont come outkick that further down the road for more chapters.

The sad thing is that stories like this that are well written draw you in and you want to read to a conclusion, the reveal, the confrontation and the aftermath. The sex fades to the background ( u cant keep saying the character is feeling something they have never felt before , it gets old).

Linda cares for josh and wants to protect him, while kims desire is to see her husband humiliated and ruined. It was good when the author was presenting how each character sees the future unfolding. that all being dealt with would have been great. luna dealing with toby was good start that should have continued to completion. with a third story if he wanted to go there. oh well. i might come back after he written another ten chapters , maybe the story will have progressed by then.
 
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